1) 0:00 - There Isn’t A Clear External Goal For The Main Character
2) 4:07 - Concept Is Soft
3) 5:20 - Writer Has No Personal Connection To The Story
4) 9:18 - The Wrong Genre
5) 12:33 - Skipping The Set-Up
6) 13:45 - In Addition To Obstacles, Create Learning Moments For The Main Character
7) 16:18 - Choosing The Wrong Lead
8) 16:41 - Having The Main Character Chase After The Goal Too Soon
9) 17:47 - No Ticking Clocks, Raising Stakes, and Good News / Bad News
10) 20:21 - Leaving Out The Conflict
11) 20:53 - Not Being Open To Surprises
12) 22:26 - Writing A Story That Meanders
13) 24:09 - Where Are The Peaks and Valleys?
14) 26:38 - Creating One Dimensional Characters
15) 29:26 - Writing Characters With No Flaws
16) 32:22 - Not Being Vulnerable
17) 34:18 - Holding Back
18) 35:35 - There’s No Emotional Connection To The Story
19) 37:37 - Writing About Pain At The Wrong Time
20) 39:51 - Wrong Story
21) 42:08 - Not Pushing Yourself After The First Draft
22) 44:44 - Never Letting Go
23) 47:28 - Desperation
24) 48:48 - Don’t Be Consumed About Selling A Screenplay While You Are Writing It
25) 50:34 - Don’t Waste People’s Time With Sloppy Work
26) 54:55 - Learn The Phrase, “I’ll Take A Look At It”
27) 56:48 - Avoiding The Process
28) 58:02 - Not Believing In Yourself
29) 1:00:25 - Don’t Be Afraid To Develop Your Own Voice And Style
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