Thanks so much for watching! I hope you found this video on the first line of a book for children's books helpful. Be sure to find me over on Instagram & TikTok, so we can connect there as well!
@MuzMURRAY
Жыл бұрын
Lovely examples. I think I got it right as my first children's book begins: "Once upon a New Years' Day, over the hills and faraway, in a little village called Merry May, the villagers awoke to find their fields and gardens full of froaks."
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
Oh, I like that!
@reneeculpepper3564
24 күн бұрын
Blessings be my friend 🙏
@EeviJones
22 күн бұрын
Have such a wonderful day, Renee!
@MeganKalmes
Ай бұрын
Such great recommendations! I finally got something right 😂 I am going to start off each book in my series in the same way.
@CreatedbySusanMontgomery
11 ай бұрын
This is one of my favorite videos of yours. I find it so helpful! I am in the middle of publishing a series of four books and I'm finishing up book 2's first page currently. I didn't have a very strong beginning at first but now, since this is a series, I plan to start each book roughly the same way. (I have book 3 and 4 stories written already as well, so all I have yet to focus on is illustrating and formatting it.)
@EeviJones
11 ай бұрын
That's so wonderful to hear, Susan! I love that you are able to use and apply what you have learned. Thank you so much for your kind words!
@georgieteaseart303
Жыл бұрын
Thank you, this was so helpful. Currently writing and illustrating my first picture book.
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
I'm so happy this helped! Good luck with your very first children's book!
@leeschwabe3854
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing these great tips! Always appreciate your insights. These tips are also useful for most social media, where attention-grabbing is also paramount!
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
You're so, so welcome! Yes, they really are! I love how you are expanding these tips' applicability, Lee!
@NinaDP8
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for making another informative and well-researched video, Eevie! Love all your examples.
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
I'm so, so happy to hear this, Nina!
@waywardsoul5305
6 ай бұрын
Thank you for providing this content, it is helpful in constructing the opening of my story!
@EeviJones
6 ай бұрын
You're so very welcome!!!
@Phoenix-ih8qq
Жыл бұрын
Love this! Thank you!
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
I'm so happy to hear this! Thanks so much!
@KenSmiley-i6s
11 ай бұрын
Thanks for all your great info.
@EeviJones
11 ай бұрын
You're so very welcome!!
@ingridf5542
Жыл бұрын
Wow so informative. Thank u very much
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
You're so, so welcome, Ingrid!
@JMGressel-Murray
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!!!
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
You are so, so welcome!!
@sharonc7031
Жыл бұрын
Really good advice.
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
I'm so glad it was helpful!
@crazyboutfishin83
8 ай бұрын
Great video!
@EeviJones
8 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!!
@LauraMilave
11 ай бұрын
Impressive ❤
@EeviJones
11 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@Mcmarin1
Жыл бұрын
Your tips and invaluable, thank you very much. When you read off a script, you may need to find a way to look at the camera, because otherwise, it seems a little artificial. Thank you!
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the tip! I'm so happy to hear you've find the tips in this video invaluable.
@halehdelshad3674
Жыл бұрын
Your videos are very informative and I love to see them all. But there is one thing that stops me. It feels hasty and you dont make eye contact with your viewers. I hope you improve these aspects in your next videos 😊
@EeviJones
Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm so glad you find my videos informative!
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