Some feedback (big ol' text wall ahead): - The instrumental is pretty good. I especially like the parts where it drops beats (1:55, 2:04). - Please consider singing with a metronome. Believe me, I also have this issue; sometimes with especially fast sections I overcompensate (sing too fast), and sometimes I undercompensate (sing too slow) during slow parts. If singing with a metronome isn't possible, have a click track during the editing phase and sync the vocals to that. This can be done by slowing down, speeding up, and (occasionally) cutting segments to fit the tempo. Splicing isn't recommended unless you're absolutely sure where syllables begin and end such that no important information is lost, otherwise it can be very noticeable. - On the other hand, don't sing with the syllables in mind. That is, singing one syllable at a time instead of using words that move to the tune of the instrumental leads to the vocals seeming choppy. This could be fine, depending on what effect you were intended. However, in the coda of this song (starting 2:14), the original version is a bit more fluid and most other covers I've heard seem to interpret it this way as well. The way you're doing it here can be more easily contrasted with the chanting of Destroy to Enjoy, which, if that was what you were intending, is fine. But, I'd recommend that if you wanted this section to be interpreted that way, really lean into it. For instance, emphasise the growl, or act as though you're shouting into the mic, or channel anger/misery/despair/etc. into the performance. If that wasn't what you were going for (I make no assumptions), then add a bit more pitch variance regardless. Not everyone's vocal range is the same, so I'm not suggesting you mimic Will's vocal range or voice (far from it, I think personal flair in covers is always great), but I am suggesting singing within more tones (that your vocal range allows). For example, try gliding up a half-step or down a half-step, try different mouth shapes for the vocals, experiment with vibrato, test your own intensity (but don't strain yourself, mine is fairly low) and adjust the way you sing songs based on that. Try stepping out of your comfort zone, but if all else fails, sing what you're comfortable with. - Honestly, you should've started with things like this instead of hopping straight into changing the lyrics. Get comfortable with the way the song was originally intended (make something you're proud of, I know from experience that's hard to do), then you can start putting your own spin on it. This isn't set-in-stone or anything, but personally, I find it more helpful to familiarize myself with the base of the song before doing any alterations. == I don't want this to come across as too mean, I mean, I'm still learning alongside others in the cover-verse. I can see there's a definite improvement here compared to, say, the earlier MMMM covers. You've definitely got the audio mixing right in these newer covers. However, there's still potential for improvement and I wish to see that in the future music you make, whenever that may be. I'd definitely recommend putting more care into covers like this, or at least trying to avoid releasing things that are "not great" to the public. Have a sphere of people to bounce things off of, to help improve things before the upload phase. Hope this is helpful rather than not. Onwards and upwards!
@TheSymphonium-CTYT
3 ай бұрын
Rhapsody in Blue by George Gershwin is still better tbh (this is alright tho)
@ControVerde
3 ай бұрын
You’re not a good singer I like the way you’re drawing tho, great job with this one
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