Agree with D7. You did a good job with keeping action going on in the scenes and not just letting it devolve into a wall of text windows; though a bit more of that could have been used in the second, longer scene. Good use of map effects. The music seemed to fit the scenes they were used in. I don't have any general comments on the dialog. Overall, good job.
@d757gaming
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Pretty nice my guy, I'm the music sounds pretty nice as well amd great job making the characters show life during the scene
@asamuksv1019
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Your comment means a lot to me D7. I'm still far from being done but I'm making some progress ^^.
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