Hi Lillie Thank you so much for your guidance. I got L-8, R-8, S-7, W-6.5 for my IELTS acdemic. Your methods and strategies gave me immense support to achieve my goal. I just did self studies only. Thank you again.❤️🇱🇰
@irislin1986
2 жыл бұрын
your tutorial not only solve my puzzles for writing but also teach a lot of correct grammars, thank you so much😍
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Happy to hear that!😊
@hui336
8 ай бұрын
I'm gonna take Ielts tmr; feeling nervous, but hopefully, everything will go well. My results will be shared here once it comes out. Wish me luck!!!
@habeebass7491
8 ай бұрын
All the best ❤
@user-xz5ro7gi4x
5 ай бұрын
What is your result? 😊
@datquok5453
Ай бұрын
Wow, this is such a hidden gem! More people need to know about your channel ❤
@minnuprasanna5671
Жыл бұрын
The diagram displays the manufacturing process of sugar produced from sugarcane. For sugar production, the process includes seven main stages like harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, separating, and finally drying and cooling takes place. The final product produced is sugar. Initially, the sugar canes are grown up to 12-18 months. Then, the harvesting is done. For the harvesting process, two methods can be used, it can be done manually or by a harvester. Then, the harvested canes are crushed through a crushing machine to extract the juice from the canes. Following this, the juice is filtered using a limestone filter. The juice is then condensed by using an evaporator where the juice turns into a syrup. Finally, the syrup is moved across a centrifuge where the sugar crystals are separated from the syrup due to the high pressure produced by the centrifuge. Lastly, the sugar crystals are dried and cooled for the final product to be formed. Therefore, the dried sugar crystals are formed.
@pantzaru
9 ай бұрын
Looks good, but where is the "overall"? They need this word in there. Also, it might be the KZitem text arranging or the text was not arranged in smaller paragraphs to show clearly the introduction paragraph 1 paragraph, 2 and the overview.
@asil4124
3 ай бұрын
5.5 score
@tuenhanvo9310
3 ай бұрын
@@asil4124 How
@shaima6131
2 жыл бұрын
Mam this is a suggestion for you ! Please show the steps according to the actual order. ( I mean pls provide introduction first then overview then bodypara1 body para2) that would be better☺️✨. And pls show the whole part u have written in the last part. That would be better for people to study ☺️
@karavadrapiyush8883
Жыл бұрын
Yes it’s true manner to write writing task one and it’s also look nice.
@gurnamsdingnot6711
Жыл бұрын
Nice debate 😑😑
@feruzailhomova8996
Жыл бұрын
Very informative, good job and good luck to your next videos.
@engwithme
9 ай бұрын
The best tutorial and detailed video content I've ever seen in KZitem. Many thanks 🎉🎉
@LilieIELTS
9 ай бұрын
Wow, thanks!
@comtowip5691
5 ай бұрын
Very informative. What software did you use to make this interactive video, Mam?
@aromatermini
Жыл бұрын
It is the best video on IELTS I've seen recently. Thank you. I love your explanation.
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!♥😊
@sakibmahmoodchowdhury8659
2 жыл бұрын
As a beginner I must say, your explanation and techniques are top-notch to overcome my fear of writing tasks part. Waiting for your good works.
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Awwww, thanks for the kind words. I'll try to upload a video every week.
@khansvirtualdiary
9 ай бұрын
This well-detailed and colorfully designed content, explaining not only various aspects of writing strategies and tactics but also some profound grammatical clarifications, has benefitted thousands till date and will continue to benefit countless others. Here, in December 2023, I fortunately landed on this marvelous, super-resourceful, and undeniably rich tutorial. Needless to say, millions will consider or have found this crystal-clear piece, covering every section or requirement on how to craft a process diagram in writing task 1, showing all crucial aspects point-by-point, as a breakthrough coaching session in their IELTS preparation journey. 💙💙
@LilieIELTS
8 ай бұрын
Woow, really appreciate the kind words!
@mdtamimiqbaltalukdar8864
2 жыл бұрын
Well, For the first time I invented your channel, and after watching this video I want to tell you that you are doing a very good job of maintaining good quality content. keep up... best of luck\\ I am gonna watch others videos too
@user-vu3vi2sr4u
6 ай бұрын
i've got my exam tomorrow but i'm learning process writings now🤣🤣🤣
@dorisjoshua6848
5 ай бұрын
I laugh in writing 😂😂😂
@DurdonaOlimova-ko9iq
3 ай бұрын
OMG
@user-vu3vi2sr4u
3 ай бұрын
update: i finally learnt it but i didnt have a process writing in the exam and as far as i remember i got 7.5 in writing 🤭@@DurdonaOlimova-ko9iq
@bollinenivamsisivasai4948
Ай бұрын
How many bands do you got in your exam ???😢
@samiulmahi2272
Ай бұрын
So what's your score?
@afloubutterfly
4 ай бұрын
Dear lilie, your videos are really helpful to me. You taught me how to write IELTS essays. I hope you will continue to update them🤣
@LilieIELTS
4 ай бұрын
I am working on a membership writing course... will be back on youtube soon😊
@afloubutterfly
4 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Yesterday I took the IELTS test. When I wrote the essay, I used the methods and logic you taught me, as well as the techniques for rewriting questions. I successfully finished the essay in forty minutes. It really surprised me, I'm very happy, thank you!!!😁
@Bingchiling00
5 ай бұрын
Awesome🔥
@user-gx2dh2pe1d
8 ай бұрын
I gotta say you are a geniue and excellent teacher! Lilie I just get so impressed by your effort! THX a lot! and hope to see more videos in writing tasks!
@santhoshrohit04
Жыл бұрын
good explaination mam. but it is mentioned that the leave s are removed first. but the fact is that the leaves are not removed. it is the way of harvesting sugarcanes. the root portions are left without cutting. the sprouts will grow again. and Also by using machines, it can be seen that the root portions are left withour removing it.
@nafisamamanazarova2005
2 жыл бұрын
At first I found your podcast Then discovered this channel thanks a lot 🤩 You are doing great ❤️
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Awwww, you're amazing. Good luck on your IELTS journey!
@nafisamamanazarova2005
2 жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Thank you 🤩
@darshilpatel4322
2 жыл бұрын
wow very detailed video. I was practicing this same question a few days ago, i forgot to motioned the overview.
@monikatomic2354
2 жыл бұрын
The given diagram details the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, the manufacturing process of sugar cane involves seven steps. The process of sugar canes, contains many steps including growing the canes, harvesting and crushing them. We may divide work into two groups using the diagram: work done by people and work done by machines. The first step is the process of growing sugar cane, which lasts from 12 to 18 months. In the next step, the work is handled by machine and human. In the third step, the sugar canes are crushed through the machine. Juice is a product of crushing sugar canes through the machine. In the fourth step, the juice is purified through the limestone filer. In the evaporator, the heated juice becomes a syrup. In the sixth step, the centrifuge is responsible for dividing sugar crystals from syrup. Finally, the sugar crystals from the centrifuge create the sugar. In the final step, the given product-sugar is dried and cooled for its further usage.
@eccedentesiast946
2 жыл бұрын
Is this an artificial process?
@jackfrost8969
Жыл бұрын
@@eccedentesiast946 of course it is
@BeAhatGirlloveGG
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for the easy but detailed explaination.
@AminulIslamFuad
5 ай бұрын
It’s amazing writing class in short time mam, Love from 🇧🇩
@Ali-pd4kx
2 жыл бұрын
The given diagram details the process of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it is a linear process consisting of four main stages: farming, crushing, separating and drying. The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes 12 to 18 months for it to mature, which is the longest stage. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual process involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping canes, while the mechanical process uses a specialized vehicle to cut canes directly. Having been cut, the harvested canes are crushed to extract the juice, which later on is purified by using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, resulting in syrup. The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at a high speed to separate sugar crystals. The last stage is to dry and cool the crystals and the end product is sugar.
@joshtekjoshtek3262
9 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your explanations and for putting a great deal of effort into your videos. Words are not enough to express how grateful I personally am for this wonderful lesson. Much Love laoshi.
@LilieIELTS
9 ай бұрын
Wow, thank you!😊
@nazatnahar2555
Жыл бұрын
The harvested canes are then crushed in a mill to extract the juice, which is later on purified using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in a evaporator to remove water, which concentrates it into a syrup.The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where is cool and dry
@MadJoker47
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this Lilie! You made it clear and super easy to understand!
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
You're so welcome!💜😊
@AbdulBasit-rw6lb
Жыл бұрын
Thanks you so much Lilie.....u r best teacher I ever found on youtube.......keep this work continue for the betterment of many aspirants
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you!😊
@cbs5357
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the explanation, great vídeo ! Could anyone tell me with another synonym for the word “ linear “ In the sentence it is a linear process ?
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Why do u want another word?
@hishamz4328
2 жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS questioning a question Seems like a good idea
@hishamz4328
2 жыл бұрын
@Neneh Blanco From what I know Linear process is any process which has a starting and an ending point So you can say instead of Linear process A direct Procedure
@cbs5357
2 жыл бұрын
@@hishamz4328 Thanks 😊
@thuthao9402
11 ай бұрын
thank you so much, your explanations are really meticulous and thoughtful
@ofonimesam34
2 жыл бұрын
You're a great teacher, thanks 🙏 Looking forward to more videos
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
More to come!😊
@aqibfilms21
Жыл бұрын
Appreciation from Bangladesh 🇧🇩
@user-ow3ls9nt7g
9 ай бұрын
In a word this channel is so much mind blowing ❤❤❤❤❤
@vanduongtieuphuongmitc6127
Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much for your dedication to valuable writing explanations
@jaschoriyev5842
Жыл бұрын
These kind of lessons explain host of things how to resolve the problem thanks a lot for sharing your unremitting knowledge ❤❤
@nhuypham
Жыл бұрын
The fact is that she just needs 12 minutes to convey a whole writting lesson to us while I need up to 15 minutes just to think what I should write ;-;
@LIENPHAM-oi9hg
3 ай бұрын
Great explanation
@lukasbenevides7249
2 жыл бұрын
It is brilliant. THank you so much for this fruitful tutorial
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!😊
@jennychinwe8275
Жыл бұрын
I really love this content page. It's almost all I've been tauy
@user-hj6mp3nw6d
Жыл бұрын
I have just discovered a gem. Thank you so much for this awesome video!
@Baabi123_Dehye3
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much ma’am for making process diagram simple for me
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@alireza7903
2 ай бұрын
That was very informative and helpful! Thanks a lot. But I have a question. I thought, after watching several videos of how to write task1, we are not allowed to add more information not provided in the picture, based on our own knowledge. For example, how do we know it separates by speed in the centrifugation step? Or in the evaporation part, how do we know it separates water? Are we allowed to express those ideas that are not directly supported by the pictures?
@mylinhtruong8184
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your video. It lightened up my day and my brain
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
I'm so glad!😊
@Manya4CHRIST
2 жыл бұрын
Best explanation ever!
@josinhoasmr4016
Жыл бұрын
for me you are master of ielts writting 🥝😇😇😇
@jawedikbal674
2 жыл бұрын
Amazing video. I am sure your channel will certainly be one of the best soon.
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you!😊
@mohamedmagdy7672
2 жыл бұрын
It really help me so much. Thanks indeed .
@Agent-47.
Жыл бұрын
You gained a new subscriber, btw thanks for such a detailed video. ❤️
@nazatnahar2555
Жыл бұрын
It is a linear process consisting of four main stages : farming, crusing,separating and drying
@mohammadebadi9115
11 ай бұрын
Awesome! I have a short time to be prepared. I wish you could upload more videos. All of them are useful.
@LilieIELTS
11 ай бұрын
I'm planning on launching a 3-day challenge this month. Hope to see you there!
@mohammadebadi9115
11 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS I can't wait to watch
@user-ne9dt2rq3z
Жыл бұрын
highly appreciated! She used analytics in IELTS writing formats
@pantzaru
9 ай бұрын
Good lesson. There is another term that can be used instead of separating. Since the separating is one of the last steps and it can be used by anyone it is a good help, but "processing or extracting stage" will be probably more eloquent?
@humerahijabi5163
2 ай бұрын
Im very thankful to you sis 😊
@sangaylhakpa69
2 жыл бұрын
Very informative 👏 and looking forward to more videos in different topics as well.
@nazatnahar2555
Жыл бұрын
The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes about 12 to 18 months for it to mature. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping the canes, while the mechanized method uses machine to cut the canes directly
@m7mdnho154
Ай бұрын
you scored 7.5 in writing how could you advertise "A BAND 9 GUIDE"?
@ruhanahmed7342
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, take love from Bangladesh. Your lesson encourage me.
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Many many thanks😊
@engieann5200
Жыл бұрын
God bless you for contributing to my success.. I passed
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
Congratulations!
@channelzero6533
2 жыл бұрын
its really so much helpful..Love you from Nepal..
@wei_ling3333
7 ай бұрын
The flow diagram indicates how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane. We can see that the manufacturing process requires seven main steps, consisting of growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, heating, centrifuging, and cooling. At the first step in the production of sugar, which is growing sugar cane takes 12 to 18 months. When the sugar cane becomes mature, it is the time to harvest them. It could be harvested by the farmer or agricultural automatic equipment. Next then, the harvested sugar canes are crushed by a wheel-shaped machine into juice, which is liquid. The juice is purified by a kind of special filter, which is made of limestone. After that, the purified juice is heated in an evaporator to remove the water in the juice, which becomes syrup. The sugar crystals are separated from the syrup by a centrifuge. At the final step of the process, the sugar is put in a container to wait for their drying and cooling, which is the end product.
@maryamalrefai1878
Жыл бұрын
Thank you. This was very informatvie!
@amnaliaqat6334
4 ай бұрын
Thank u so v much from Pakistan
@asilbekabdurahmonov7734
Жыл бұрын
You are great teacher Lilie thank you
@mincoffee1995
8 ай бұрын
I really learnt something! Thanks!
@thaophan-jn3xv
6 ай бұрын
em thật sự biết ơn, quá gãy gọn, xúc tích, bổ ích
@user-vu3vi2sr4u
6 ай бұрын
LOVE YOU THAT A GREAT TUTORIAL
@titinkurniasih3363
2 жыл бұрын
thank you so much..this video is really helpfull, you're a great teacher
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!😊
@user-kl1hw3uw6p
Жыл бұрын
Thank you Lilie. The video is very useful.
@nazerkeelubai5051
3 ай бұрын
Simple and understandable 🤩
@alp_gautschin
2 жыл бұрын
Excelent, congratulations.
@omeryilmazz
Жыл бұрын
The diagram provides information about how sugar is manufactured from sugar canes step by step. Overall, producing sugar by sugar cane includes seven main stages which is in order of growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporator, centrifuge and drying and cooling. The first step of process is to grow sugar cane which takes around 12-18 months. After, sugar cane is harvested by either machines or human labor. Machines harvest to sugar cane directly, while farmer needs to separate leaves then cut them by appropriate tool. The next step is to crushed sugar canes into a mill and extract juice from it. In the fourth step of process is to purified juice by used limestone filter and then purified juice is sent to evaporator, which is juice turned into syrup in this phase. Then, acquired syrup is went to centrifuge that's why separated from sugar crystals. Lastly, syrup is moved across to drying and cooling machine that syrup is became sugar .
@manjugupta4203
2 жыл бұрын
I must say after watching Ur video I overcome my fear of writing task both plz upload more videos thanks
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Glad you found it helpful.😊
@souha3233
2 жыл бұрын
The given diagram displays the steps included in producing sugar using sugar cane. Overall, there are seven steps of various time lengths and purposes involved in the process. Starting from the growth of sugar canes, harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, drying and cooling. First of all, sugar canes take about one year up to 18 months to flourish, which is the longest phase, and then harvesting takes place, which depends on manual labor or mechanical methods to garner them, such as the usage of tractors, which is considered more convenient and faster in comparison to traditional approaches. Subsequently, the canes are crushed in a special machine to extract the juice which is purified afterwards using a limestone filter. The following step requires heat to condense the liquid into a syrup by removing water. The next step is a technique called centrifuging that separates sugar crystals from the syrup at a very high speed. Finally, the substance is dried and cooled for consumption.
@AustraliaNenglishChannel
Жыл бұрын
thank you so much for very detailed explanation 😍
@nwaliblessing2649
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much for the explanation 👌
@riyapillai9920
Жыл бұрын
Thank you ur videos greatly helped during my preparation 💖
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
My pleasure 😊
@joannapeng9908
2 жыл бұрын
great class!!
@analae6187
2 жыл бұрын
Really very informative and extremely beneficial
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Aww, thanks for the kind remarks!
@nuandong1816
2 жыл бұрын
Great explanation! But it seems to me that the manual method doesn't involve removing the leaves; the farmer just chops the sugar cane at the bottom?
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Hi, in the picture, the farmer is removing the leaves. This article also confirms that the leaves need to be removed first: www.czarnikow.com/blog/the-sugar-series-sugar-cane-production-growing-harvesting-processing-and-refinement
@user-vw8zz6ge7p
Жыл бұрын
Very good job! Thank you very much
@amirerfanabbasi9410
Жыл бұрын
how can we understand it has four stages? in my opinion it has 3 stages
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
Hi, it's subjective. You can say three stages and what these three stages are.
@prabhdeepsingh4757
Жыл бұрын
Thanks for your help 👍🏻🙂😊.
@user-le6qh4kc2p
Жыл бұрын
Which Verb can l use it in paragraph 1and 2
@riyadsheikh495
5 ай бұрын
Literally I amazed
@tadartkoon
Ай бұрын
Thanks a lot
@nazatnahar2555
Жыл бұрын
starting by farming sugar canes and ending by dry sugar ready to use
@_tanvirmahi_
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you soo much lily! I follows u in the website also...
@nguyenkien2107
6 ай бұрын
Thanks. So details❤❤
@chaoslee2471
2 жыл бұрын
thx a lot, it really helps!
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Glad it helped. 😊
@nepcad9935
2 жыл бұрын
Absolutely amazing 😮 I swear nobody has taught so clearly like yours 😍 Thanks a ton mam😇
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Awww, thanks for the kind remarks!
@darienimmanuel3443
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the detailed explanation, especially for write the Overview.
@nimeshlakshitha5555
2 жыл бұрын
100% good stuff
@burmaananzan4794
2 жыл бұрын
So good! thank you
@Bninee
Жыл бұрын
teacher, can I ask this one ->. ->. -> . is a linear or cyclical process thank you 🥰
@Chilayem
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your lecture. But I saw a lot of teachers using beginning with...ending with. It's common and viewed as the correct way to write the overview. So, based on your lecture, we shouldn't do it in any case or is there an exception?
@LilieIELTS
Жыл бұрын
Hi, I suggest including all the major stages for any process diagram, especially when writing about a life cycle. Every life cycle begins with an egg stage and ends with death, doesn't it? Then, what's the point of saying it?
@madeleinematsikidze4471
2 жыл бұрын
thank you for this. I want to ask if one can write an overview on the process diagram task 1
@vedaallam03
2 жыл бұрын
Thankyou so much… its very helpful
@LilieIELTS
2 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!😊
@mitul_sarwar
7 ай бұрын
Loved it 🙂
@wenhanwu7955
8 ай бұрын
Thank you for the video. However, I have a question, in your essay, the introduction is just one sentence, which is also a paragraph. Is it ok to form a paragraph with only one sentence?
@LilieIELTS
8 ай бұрын
Yes.
@ikrambazarov2395
2 жыл бұрын
I don't doubt it's a band nine essay, but I think some commas are missing before 'and'. Anyways, huge thank you for the video!
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