Homework 1: Give me a good title for my poem- post it in the comments section Homework 2: Do the Quiz shawenglish.com/quizzes/basic-english-poem-quiz/ Homework 3: Write a poem and post it in the comments section
@thebestones9610
2 жыл бұрын
Teacher is so beautiful and the way how she teaches also beautiful, THANK U 4 effective lesson, you r a great teacher Hello from Uzbekistan🥰
@Dash-oz5py
Жыл бұрын
Best poem teacher... 🤓
@swaroopskitchen5648
11 ай бұрын
The morning
@swaroopskitchen5648
11 ай бұрын
Ok
@pankajjha3424
6 ай бұрын
Tension but fun likewise life
@stem2232
2 жыл бұрын
Colours They are mesmerizing and bright Sometimes dull but still shine You see them with your eyesight Mixing colours give you fine line
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing! 😃
@twomasks6794
Жыл бұрын
My first try: After school, i get tired Whispers me : get ready My mood's off , i cried Sleepy breezes , cozy pillows Cruel homework , my head's fried Maths questions , makes me freeze Science logics like fairies on trees What's left ? It's just the fate Bitter and bitter , the homework taste.....
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Oh a very powerful poem. Well written. I feel your emotions. Great homework!
@shajeeratk1443
11 күн бұрын
❤wow
@juanperdomo1
2 жыл бұрын
Hi, I can't wait to listen to another class with you. I love listening to your sweet and soft voice because it inspires me to improve my English. Thank you.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@fadumohussein951
7 ай бұрын
I don’t know if I should be concerned with the amount that you are going through or not because you have a very strong sense that you’re not doing it right and I know you have to do that but you are doing what you’re supposed be done with and you have a good heart so you should have that confidence in your body that you’re going to be able with it so I think that is a great way of going through this process of getting through this and I hope that you’re able and you have some time and
@maihassan5510
7 ай бұрын
How do you dare you say that !!
@Bro12455
3 ай бұрын
Tomorrow is my poem competition
@ShawEnglishOnline
3 ай бұрын
Best of luck!
@SandaliAyodhya
2 ай бұрын
Mine also 🎉
@DonaldZeanLirazan
2 ай бұрын
Same😅
@shilpakumbhare4623
2 ай бұрын
My also 😊
@Sgsksbskw
2 ай бұрын
Same
@laylasart677
2 жыл бұрын
Hi Robin! I'm Layla! I watched this video again on my account. I hope you do more videos about poetry and give more examples if that possible. I want to learn more. I know that might take you more time and money, but it would be fruitful lesson. Thanks a million to you dear Robin for all the efforts you make. I'm so lucky to have a lovely and honest teacher such as you. I never can do all that without your help. You are the best ever. ❤️
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your interest in the video. I doubt we will have another video on poetry soon. -Robin
@laylaallili3090
2 жыл бұрын
Hi Robin and Leigh! I have watched this lovely lesson. I really enjoyed and I hope you make another one. This is an a especial video with a special teacher. 💗. My Homework!: 1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: Spring I want to smell the flower, I go and see lots of grass, I will feel more power, I drink fresh water from my glass.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
My Homework!: ✔️1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. TRY AGAIN 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: ❤️Spring ❤️I want to smell the flower, ❤️I go and see lots of grass, ❤️I will feel more power, ❤️I drink fresh water from my glass. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
@Nanasang631
2 жыл бұрын
My 6-year-old girl said the title could be "The Best Morning". Thank you for your great lesson! 👍
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Love that!
@Joseph-hh6jp
Жыл бұрын
Howdy, am Carlyle I love your teaching style. Now here is my poem about atmosphere Before I disappear , Like a spear In the atmosphere.
@ShawEnglishOnline
11 ай бұрын
Short and Simple. Good.
@manasvi2094
5 ай бұрын
If my english teacher would be like u...my interest in english would have been doubled along with excellent pronouciation skills!
@ShawEnglishOnline
5 ай бұрын
I am here. You can watch my videos to learn.
@vasavi2813
Жыл бұрын
Title:AN ELEGANT MORNING Tq for your wonderful explanation mam, i liked your way of teaching and your voice also very smoothy
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot
@Heena-p9b
10 ай бұрын
The title of ur poem could me "My mornings" The sky The blue thing that is bright, With a lot of clouds and light, The thing that is round like a freshly baked fluffy pie, I would love to fly in this beautiful sky To describe this in perfect words, The winners are the free birds, But at night it's black style, Would flatter the heart of every selenophile.
@ShawEnglishOnline
10 ай бұрын
Awesome!!!!!
@zainungrace332
2 жыл бұрын
Hello Leigh and Robin! Leigh, you are an amazing lady! I never thought that you were good at poetry. 1. Title: A Good Day 2. I did the quiz but no results appear at the end. 3. I am not good at poetry but I try my best for Leigh. "Someone like you" Looking out the window, you see the cloud, Looking at the door, you see a purity, Looking in the eyes, you see a crowd, Looking at your heart, you see humanity.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
✔️1. Title: A Good Day 2. I did the quiz but no results appear at the end. ✔️Try the quiz now. ✔️3. I am not good at poetry but I try my best for Leigh. ⭐Love it! "Someone like you" Looking out the window, you see the cloud, Looking at the door, you see a purity, Looking in the eyes, you see a crowd, Looking at your heart, you see humanity.
@artercrafterantics47
Жыл бұрын
The Morning When I'm Alone is a nice title for this poem...❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
11 ай бұрын
Love that!
@ThisisFit
2 жыл бұрын
Everyone’s poetry examples are so good! I love seeing that creativity ~
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
They are!
@laylaallili3090
2 жыл бұрын
You are really a special. I love this lesson more than any 😍..I am looking forward to watching more lessons like this.
@ThisisFit
2 жыл бұрын
@@laylaallili3090 I hope I get to make more also!
@arzumardalieva3874
6 ай бұрын
I’m grateful 🙏🏻 For the video and clear explanation! Poem is a song of a Soul! It can be written in a spark of inspiration! Doesn’t matter if big or small. Power of One’s imagination has no limitation! If well written - able to touch the hearts of all! Poem is a beautiful form of self expression! Blessings 💜
@ShawEnglishOnline
5 ай бұрын
Awesome comment! And poem! 👍 😃❤️
@arzumardalieva3874
5 ай бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline Thank you 🙏🏻 I am a quick learner.☺️
@enjoyingpoetry-rizalelsarif
Жыл бұрын
Your tutorial is very useful for developing a culture of writing poetry
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Many many thanks
@MiguelRobloxL0L
10 ай бұрын
She is a good and very understanding English teacher. Thanks! 😍😎
@ShawEnglishOnline
10 ай бұрын
Glad you think so!
@gerbemichel
2 жыл бұрын
Leigh, I suggest this title to your poem: "All ingredients assembled!" Quiz done. (my score is 9 of 10) Here is my poem: My family I’m happy with my parents, No worry, there's evidence. They cared of me when I was sick, And sang a song when I couldn't sleep. With my siblings in confidence, Were sharing our innocence, Even so, life brought us some kick, were steadfast to reach the peak.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
This is wonderful!❤️
@gerbemichel
2 жыл бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline Yes, I surprised myself. 😀
@FirdavsiWebDev
2 жыл бұрын
Hey Shaw, that's a new experience. Thank you!
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@guii5230
2 жыл бұрын
Beautiful 🥰 poem thanks. I will call it . Awaken emotions.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Wonderful!
@INAYAT78611
Жыл бұрын
Very Useful 👍. It's quite easy for me to write a poem now ! Thank you so much for. Loving from Pakistan 🇵🇰💚
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for watching.
@artinshorttime5604
Жыл бұрын
for my best teacher in all times 1- thank you for your lesson 2 - you can choose from this names for the poem . the summer, today will be good.with no plan.the fun of the summer. 3- i will right different kind of poetry for my friend Mia .she is youtuber model and i will write it for you in the comment soon too . 4 - and that is the important point but i have not time to write it now by details that point is why we write poetry?sure it is beautiful but the important reason which i will write it now comes from our language .poetry in arabic language means the feeling and we write the poetry to give the others our feeling to share us our feeling or to teach others or to help others or to ask others for helping to other people or for us or to our girls to show them how much we love them and or, or, or we will have a lot of or if i will write for you why we write the poetry . i wrote my first poetry from 35 years for my girl .i was in 15 years old . and i wrote some english poetry in my channel for who i love and for fatherless and motherless .i wrote for homeless a poem too but i want to make it song .i tried to find somebody to do it in usa but i did not find anybody.i have more than 5 or 6 poem for the girls who i love but i did not download it yet. i will try to make it songs because i try to learn how i make songs as a professional and i am trying to learn english very well because to much words in my mind and the grammar will help me to write more good poetry .you will surprise when you will know the reason . the reason is the searching for beautiful women to marry her in usa or in any country which they are speaking english .i am 50 years old and i am not married yet.and the reason for that will make me tell you my life story and no time for that. i will be happy if you visit my channel on youtube art in short time and you watch my poetry and my songs which is by english language which they need some fixed for the voice but the important point is your watching to my movie the dream. it is by arabic language but i translated to english and please give me your opinion about it. may we will work together in my magazine the art light electronic magazine. i had a lot of problems to publish it from many years until now and this the second reason make me i want to leave egypt . i need people from every where in the world to work with me because my first target is make the people around the world and governments loves the united world which no egypt, no usan no england but only one united world that the principle which make that world became united is the science because that is the only principle will make us will become united in one-day and i wish that day comes soon and may be you can help in that. i do not promise by giving you money because that is will depend on your sales in your country which you will be the manager to my magazine over their.you and who will work with you will take 70% from the sales in your country. thank you for your time .best wishes . god bless you.
@temesgenwoysha3746
2 жыл бұрын
Wow, it's more helpful to me to learn English in a very colorful way. Thank you very much.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your support.
@Ladorani.official343
4 ай бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline
@Dash-oz5py
Жыл бұрын
Help me understand poems a lot better!
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@AKGaming-cl2jj
Ай бұрын
Hlo watching it in 2024.. I have composed my own poem on friendship...while watching it. She is the one I enjoy with, Whether I am happy or sad, I know she'll never ditch, Even though she makes me mad...❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
25 күн бұрын
Good and interesting!
@TreasureTimothy270
Жыл бұрын
Am I the only one who noticed the RHYME in her speech. Wow! You inspire me to improve my English skills 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Yes, she is amazing.
@studyworld1603
Ай бұрын
Wao❤madam very informative video . Title:Me and Morning Mam before to watch your video i wrote it is right or wrong? _____________ Title is Who am I? ___________ "I don't know who I am" Being rude, disobedient, mean, or outspoken. "I don't know who I am" I am gentle, hardworking, considerate or obedient . "I don't know who I am" I am the one to speak ill of someone, to fight over things, to behave like the worst enemy, or to abuse. "I don't know who I am" I am going to cry on small things, I am going to be angry on things, I am going to be right on the one whom I call mine or I am going to be extremely angry on him. "I don't know who I am. " ~Sundhay G~
@imranabegum4491
2 жыл бұрын
Hearing upcoming test. My head gonna mad. How to do my best. My friends, the days gonna end.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Awesome poem!
@nazrulamin4353
Жыл бұрын
It's very useful for me, thank you madam. We want to more videos about this topic
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your support and sweet comment.
@Tenzinsangay496
2 жыл бұрын
The precious smile on your amazing face. The authentic maxim never stops in your mouth.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 👍
@fahgamer1224
Жыл бұрын
It is very easy explanation of how to write a poem.
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Yes.
@Whitney7605
2 ай бұрын
It’s a lonely morning Perhaps am still mourning For my long late sibling Named conni Probably siblings are the enemies we can’t leave without Without u am left out I miss our Good old memories Here I am about to black out U slept and woke up in another far way colony 😢 Poetry ❤
@ATorturedNerd
2 ай бұрын
Wow! That's good❤
@RaviShankar-xm2vk
Жыл бұрын
Thank u sis, its very useful for my verse competition
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that
@imesha2001
2 жыл бұрын
Good evening teacher...😍 most useful video...thanks for your video 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
You are welcome 😊
@FcJayjeet
Жыл бұрын
The title name is the Golden morning 🌄. This is very nice title
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching my lesson.
@FcJayjeet
11 ай бұрын
❤❤
@leslieaguilar5556
Жыл бұрын
Summer has begun The sun, dazzling and glistening under my skin, At night hot and sweaty never ending nights, This is how all summers begin At night, stars glowing so bright. Not good at poetry, but am sure I did alright. Thank you for the lesson it was really helpful.
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Wow! You did a great job. 👍🏻
@MayedaTariq-el6zc
7 күн бұрын
It's my first ever poem guys..It's quite simple, pls tell me how is it Playing in the snow, little kids were giggling Rubbed the fog on my window, Thinking of days I couldn't bring A cup of coffee in my hand Listening to music on my phone Completely lost in a wonderland Where I was all alone
@shivamsingh-yc6hl
Жыл бұрын
I learn a lot from this video Love from india🇮🇳 💝
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@madumaligallage5361
2 жыл бұрын
What a calmly voice😘
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 👍
@Combat-Esports
Жыл бұрын
THANK YOU FOR THE INTRESTING CLASS 😊😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
You're welcome 😊
@haswanthsp2661
Жыл бұрын
First, thank you for your tips. Second, here is my poem, it is about sadness. It is my first time, so please don't judge me🙂 It is a pain, When my money drain, My life is a gloom, Where i never bloom.
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Every poem is beautiful. It is very sad. Your words are very powerful. I hope you smile, I like your style, Your life is great, Trust your fate.
@cutestanimequeen1847
Жыл бұрын
I find this was fun and I enjoyed your video, I hope to see a next video like this, u help me a lot so thx u😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@pallavi6228
2 жыл бұрын
💫Leigh ma'am, I will try to write a good poem next time.😊 Thank you again!💕
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@zainungrace332
2 жыл бұрын
Hello, Robin. I did the quiz and I tried twice hahaha. On the first attempt, I only got 2/10 and this irritated me so I decided to try again and the second attempt was 5/10. Okay, I admit that I am not a poet.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Haha. Poetry is not for everyone.
@lyricsyaar
Жыл бұрын
Best English teacher I have ever seen I hope you don't mean but ma'am you daam look like a queen and now I hope you don't mind 😅 And ma'am title I think for your poem "EVERY MORNING I'M ALONE" :)
@oluwatoyinosofodunrin6073
5 ай бұрын
Thanks for the video. Been trying to learn to write light poems. My poem THE RAIN Cold night, Icy at times, Not enough light, Much lesser grime. No one dares stay out Else risks a bout Here comes the rain Don't worry, it isn't all pain!
@ShawEnglishOnline
5 ай бұрын
Good one!
@dubai240
2 жыл бұрын
Good morning Teacher thx for this video i love it
@abdurrahimazad53
2 жыл бұрын
Good Evening
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 😃
@manjindersaini3514
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks teacher .
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 🙏🏻
@helianeneris9206
Жыл бұрын
THIS IS MY POEM. I´M NOT SURE ABOUT THE RULES BUT IT COMES FROM MY HEART. SPRING TIME I WAKE UP IN THE MORNING, I LOOK THROUGH THE WINDOW, THE SUN IS SHINING, THE WIND BLOWS THE WILLOW. IT´S SPRING TIME, FLOWERS ALL AROUND, IT´S MY PERFECT TIME, MY EARS ARE CAUGHT UP IN THE PIANO IN THE BACKGROUND. NO WORRIES, NO RUSH, NOTHING TO DO IN TOWN, THIS IS ALL THAT I WISH, I SIT ON MY CHAIR CLOSE TO THE WINDOW.
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for sharing.
@healthyspaceclinic8903
Жыл бұрын
The way of teaching is very nice
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thanks and welcome
@SanaafzalSanaafzal-z4m
Жыл бұрын
You're great English teacher ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@hemanthadesilva527
2 жыл бұрын
Excellently wonderful lesson. It's Awesome. You too look like a Beautiful 💖 Poem with Rhythmic Rhyme...! God 🙏 Bless 🙏 you.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! You too!
@gitanjalimalik4918
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much ma'am it's really super class ma'am and u are teaching super super ❤❤❤❤❤❤💐💐🌹👌👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you dear student 💚
@NaveenMatibag
4 күн бұрын
Thank you so much I need to write a poem for teachers day ❤
@corazondeargentina
Жыл бұрын
This channel is great!
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you.
@Garfield_Minecraft
Жыл бұрын
3:24 She can't stop rhyming😂
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
I hope you enjoyed it
@pallavi6228
2 жыл бұрын
Hello Leigh ma'am! Thank you so much for this fantastic lesson, I loved it! Homework 1: 'The early morning beauty' or 'The early beauty of morning' Homework 2: I got 9 out of 10 in the quiz. Homework 3: 'Our English teachers ' When my teachers teaches us English, I understand everything in English very clearly, Because our teachers teaches us English very sweetly, I want to say "thank you" to all my teachers who teaches us for free. (Thank you💫 Esther ma'am, 💫Fanny ma'am, 💫Leigh ma'am, 💫Sara ma'am, 💫Fiona ma'am, 💫Alexandra ma'am, and also thank you to 💫 teacher Robin,💫teacher Mike, 💫teacher Bill. Again Thanks a million my dear all teachers for helping us to learn English.😊❤️🙏 Lots of love from India!😇🙏🤗🤗
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
You are a super student! ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much!!!🥇#1 Shaw English fan.
@wataworks6478
Жыл бұрын
I can listen to you all day. ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching
@hachandana
Жыл бұрын
Nice Lesson teacher...❤ From : Sri Lanka student..
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thanks and welcome
@zohahatterkihal6069
Жыл бұрын
Hey ..... After watching your video I get an idea 💡 And I wrote many poems Here is one of mine **Stars** ✨✨ As they are very far These are nothing but stars A gigantic celestial body which looks so small But actually they are very large and tall In the dark blue 💙 sky They look a small blue dye But once sunrise they tell us bye
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Wow!!! Wonderful 👍🏻
@agustinamansur5665
Жыл бұрын
Beautiful and warm poem! 💞🌈🌿🌾I think a good title for it could be "Sun" 😁🌞
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much.
@TenzingLama-m1f
Ай бұрын
You gave good information how to write poem. Early morning is the tittle of your poem.
@solomonkenea3439
2 жыл бұрын
When I saw you on this lesson tonight It was my first time but I hope it won't be the last Would you come again with another video So I could see you every then and now!
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great poem.
@nbfds4648
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot for this channel, I love you all ♥️ ^^
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you too!
@namantheslayer5881
Жыл бұрын
This Is Extemporary, Thank You So Much, Really Helpful, I Just Learned How To Write A Basic Poem...
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you dear student 💚
@arushm9424
Жыл бұрын
thanks it helped me a lot
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that!
@joelmembrillos5546
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for sharing this video
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! ❤️
@ArshadAli-dv6bt
Жыл бұрын
A Usual Morning I love your way of explaining things ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! 😃
@ArshadAli-dv6bt
Жыл бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline your welcome, thank you
@mdabdurrahim8090
Жыл бұрын
Excellent analysis. I am extremely pleased. Very helpful lesson on composing poems.
@chidinmasibigem5674
6 ай бұрын
You are a very good teacher. This poem is so lovely ..helped my 8 year old son learn about writing a poem. He has been struggling at school.. For the title of your own poem, he gives it.. A lovely day. Here is his own poem... My mum is kind And has a good mind She gives me pills Whenever I am ill. 😊 thanks Ma'am we need more videos...
@nature9569
9 ай бұрын
Good evening, Many thanks for sharing your great knowledge and methods of teaching. I d really appreciate if you wrote a great and meaningful poems entitled with "Vacation". Much Obliged
@ShawEnglishOnline
8 ай бұрын
Noted
@devminayt
Жыл бұрын
I HAVE A EXAM TOMMOROW AND THIS HELPS ME ALOT. 🙃 🙂
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
How did you do on the exam?
@ashensing4691
2 жыл бұрын
Friendship One who can make me happy One who can listen One who can share things One who can give advices Plz let me know if this is correct teacher
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great effort. 'advice' is uncountable.
@taulemsphom4725
Жыл бұрын
Wowww ,, so nice it really helps us to understand and learn... 👍👍👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
It's my pleasure
@kittyy_crafts
Жыл бұрын
My poem : _The Morning Beuty_ The little birds to fly And the biggest sun to shine The pretty flowers says Good morning to sunrise The feathered creatures make their nest And fauna find their food ❤️
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Awesome!!!!!
@koree6172
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
You're most welcome
@hrushikeshsahu5253
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you ma'am 🙏🙏🙏
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@choidanny5994
2 ай бұрын
Here's mine. It's not that good, I think. Please do correct if I made a mistake. And please recommend what else to add. Teddy Bear Soft and fluffy, That's how it feels. Like a buddy, The heart, it heals.
@brijeshphilip5596
Ай бұрын
My brother His playful way His melodious voice He likes to play And to make noise
@ShawEnglishOnline
Ай бұрын
Awesome!!!
@SandoNyumah
10 ай бұрын
Lonely morning feels good
@ShawEnglishOnline
10 ай бұрын
great
@ZerfyL
2 жыл бұрын
this is the title for your poem Happy to be alone. i writed a poem, the title is "Lazy" I don't want to wake up in the morning, I feel hot because of the sun, I close the windows because it's annoying, I turned on the electric fan.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Great little poem!🌹
@augusto5658
Жыл бұрын
Love From 🇧🇷
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@afrah9504
Жыл бұрын
How about the name, "my gleam mornings"
@ShawEnglishOnline
11 ай бұрын
Sounds great!
@BlueRoad_Vietnguyen
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the video Maam 👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@MikeLibarnes
Ай бұрын
Wow so the best poem, tommorow is my poem quiz❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
25 күн бұрын
How did you do?
@Secrethunter1204
9 ай бұрын
Love from Bangladesh. You are really amazing.
@ShawEnglishOnline
8 ай бұрын
Thank you very much! ❤️
@laylaallili3090
2 жыл бұрын
Hi Robin! 2. I did the quiz again and I got 9 of 10 questions answered correctly. 3. I tried to write another poem, it's just a basic poem with repeating lots of words. However, I loved to try again. 😍 Me and you When I come and look at you, I see the world in your eyes, When I stay without you, I feel your presence in sunrise. I only want to look at you, I only want to live with you. My heart wish to fly, My heart wants to cry. I only want to stay with you, I only wish to live with you.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Lovely poem. ❤️
@khayljimspaclipan
24 күн бұрын
I have class homeworks I have to do chores Im always tired when i stare at you Because you belong in my heart❤❤
@ishakumari2360
Ай бұрын
You'r explanation help me a lot abt the rhyme sceme 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
Ай бұрын
Wow! Glad to hear that! Thank you so much!❤️
@lovelythings3588
2 жыл бұрын
Lovely morning
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
For a title!? Yes. Sounds great!
@muhammadtoor6691
2 жыл бұрын
great lesson for help make poem
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@msreajuddin3654
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks medam
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
😊
@pangsanmarak5973
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Ma'am for your useful video. This channel is very useful for me.
@ShawEnglishOnline
2 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that
@raninglungkameihkameih4818
6 ай бұрын
Hello... i had watched your teaching it awesome.. i would like to ask 1 questio. Is it will be good to write a poem in a way having conversation Between me and the things or object which is not human..?? 😊❤
@ShawEnglishOnline
5 ай бұрын
You can write anything you want with poety. It is good to be creative.
@english_professor
Жыл бұрын
A blessed morning
@ShawEnglishOnline
Жыл бұрын
Good title.
@manogaranparandaman8838
Ай бұрын
I was having poem competition when I saw this video and I have some points to keep in my mind after that next morning came I done my best then I got 1 price 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
25 күн бұрын
Great job!
@dipumishra5711
9 күн бұрын
I wrote one poem The lamp of light or The light of human In light of charming Where baby can born A light of wonders They grow like a thunder In light of emission They get admission A light of reflection They throw their fear for deflection They shine like a moon in a darker sky They bright like a sun to fly and fly They sleep as a dusk To work like a musk They silent like a deep water To become a master They never feel lethargic To turn their dreams as magic ✨ Poet Aarya kumari Mishra.... Can u choose which topic suits on it... the first or the second?
@laibascones7388
6 ай бұрын
Tittle: Summer I went to the beach, I ate some peach. I run in the sand, I hold your hand.😊
@ShawEnglishOnline
6 ай бұрын
Awesome! 👍
@the_s3146
20 күн бұрын
Maam can you check my poem and can you tell me how it is and can u tell me my mistakes and also can you tell me how to avoid those. Waiting for your reply.. Here my poem is:- Winter The night of the winter is long and cold, The borne fire makes it warmer, As it can makes me hold, And the soup and noodles could makes it more charmer.
@39hitanshiparekh46
6 ай бұрын
Summer It was a hot and cool weather, I was sitting on my couch, seeing the sun rise brightly, A gentle breeze was blowing through the trees , The birds were flying above the sky, enjoying the pleasant weather. The children were playing football in this pleasant weather , My heart melted by seeing these children play A little thought flashed upon my inward eye , I saw how i spent my childhood days which is a bliss of solitude. Written by Hitanshi Parekh Pls tell Ma'am how is it ? Pls rate my poem out of 10 . What improvements are needed to be done
@ShawEnglishOnline
6 ай бұрын
Awesome! 👍
@MsGamerdi
2 жыл бұрын
Homework 1. Good Morning vibes :) Homework 2. 7/10. I'm a poet and I know it! Homework 3. This is my poem: Always with you When I hear your voice every day, It’s like all bad things disappear, It fills my life in many ways, I can’t delete that from my ears. I’m always here for you, I can feel your presence here, It's always me and you, And I don’t need to feel more fear.
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