There was absolutely no reason for "Jack" to have kept "Milo" hidden from the other members of the team. Their mission was to find life in "the local biosphere."
@tomkocka5203
3 ай бұрын
A portion of this is out of order. I wonder if this was written by AI
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I appreciate you pointing that out! Sometimes mistakes happen, and I'm always working to improve. Rest assured, I'm dedicated to bringing you the best content possible. Thanks for your understanding and support!
@danhardesty6318
3 ай бұрын
Another question. One is travel by rover, another is travel by foot.
@ricardocarmona5210
3 ай бұрын
I didn't know that was a thing. AI can write stuff.
@deanagarnes2676
3 ай бұрын
I love the critters! Wouldn't it be wonderful to make pictures series of the critters.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I'll definitely consider incorporating more visual content in the future. Thank you for the suggestion!
@marshabevis3768
3 ай бұрын
Good story, if a little choppy with two endings.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story overall, but I understand your point about the two endings making it feel a bit choppy. I'll take that into consideration for future stories to ensure a smoother narrative flow. If you have any other suggestions or feedback, I'd love to hear it. Thanks for watching
@Vaquero4382
3 ай бұрын
What. the hell happened to that story? Two endings, but one that didn't??
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I apologize for the confusion! It sounds like the story might have had an editing error or a formatting issue. I'll review it to ensure the endings are clear and consistent. Thank you for bringing this to my attention, and I appreciate your patience. If you have any other feedback or suggestions, I'd love to hear them
@randiedwin7605
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your character 'voices' and inflection. Good story.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and appreciated the character voices and inflections. Your support means a lot. If you have any suggestions or requests for future stories, I'd love to hear them!
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
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@RexxRedfoxx
3 ай бұрын
Interesting story. Only real complaint, other then the odd break in the story. is the speech to text system seems pretty off in places.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you found the story interesting. I appreciate you pointing out the issues with the speech-to-text system; I'll work on improving that for future videos. If you have any other suggestions or thoughts, I'd love to hear them. Thanks for watching
Good story, decent AI voice, and I’m guessing you may have edited it to remove all hyphenated woids. 👍🏼😎
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the AI voice. Yes, I try to ensure the text is clean and easy to follow, including removing hyphenated words when possible. If you have any other suggestions or feedback, I'd love to hear them. Thanks for watching! 👍🏼😎
@spiderbugbear3721
3 ай бұрын
I wonder what would happen if it was a lobster? "A tale of an adorable space roach named Milo" Milo would make thousands of mini Milos aboard the ship.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Haha, that would be quite the story! An adorable space roach named Milo and his mini Milos taking over the ship could make for a fun and chaotic adventure. Thanks for the creative idea! Maybe I'll explore something like that in a future video. Thanks for watching and for the fun suggestion
@spiderbugbear3721
3 ай бұрын
@@WonderTales70 I believe it already exists. Tribbles or something. There are multiple versions of that in books & movies
@baskervillebee6097
3 ай бұрын
The Trouble With Tribbles Dec 29, 1967 Original Star Trek
@UniverseUnfolded
3 ай бұрын
Loving it!
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Your positive feedback means the world to me, thank you!
@lynneclark5313
3 ай бұрын
Judging by the other comments, this is another mixed up story. THUMBS DOWN!!! To bad, I was looking forward to hearing about Milo, guess I'll turn it off now before I get stressed out by the bad writing.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I'm sorry to hear that the story didn't meet your expectations. Your feedback is important to me, and I’m always striving to improve. If there are specific aspects you didn’t like or suggestions you have, I’d love to hear them. I hope you'll give my channel another chance in the future. Thank you for sharing your thoughts
@MissyIW725
3 ай бұрын
Can’t even put a link to the first story? Reading the comments and having to search makes this seem like a poor experience.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I apologize for the inconvenience! Including a link to the first story would definitely improve the experience. I’ll make sure to add links to related stories in the future to make them easier to find. Thank you for your feedback, and I appreciate your patience. Here’s the link to the first story: [kzitem.info/door/PLjZ69p4gLy6USUJFiRFf5-alnNF1PLPa_. I hope you enjoy it!
@MissyIW725
3 ай бұрын
@@WonderTales70 I watched all the videos and enjoyed the stories! Keep up the hard work!
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
That's fantastic to hear! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the videos and the stories. Your support means a lot, and I'll keep working hard to create more content that you'll enjoy. If you have any suggestions or ideas for future videos, feel free to share@@MissyIW725
@WahooLee
3 ай бұрын
It seems like you did edit the 2nd part of the story, but forgot to delete the part that you wanted to correct, so the story ended up having both the original ending that needed editing AND then followed by the improved version of part 2. ------------------------- I have made that kind of mistake so many times that out of maybe 100 stories I have written, only 10 ever got past the second draft!
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for pointing that out! It sounds like I made an editing mistake and left both the original and the improved versions of the ending. I appreciate your understanding and can relate to the challenges of editing-I've made similar mistakes myself. I'll make sure to correct it for future stories. Thanks for your patience and for sharing your own experience
@SageReacher-ot8bu
3 ай бұрын
😰 I'm by no means a Hatter of all that is cute and adorable BUT in my opinion if it's only showing you that Side of it's "camaphlog" when does it change to wanting to rip out your throat like I said I'm not a hater of all that is cute and adorable I've just seen enough movies to know that all it takes is one wrong move and it's trying to savagly rip you apart... Or maybe it's like that movie Gremlins it's all cute and adorable UNTILL you screw up and feed it after "Midnight" In my not so humble opinion there almost NEVER something that is ONLY cute and adorable 🤔
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
That's a fascinating perspective! It's true that many stories and movies play with the idea of something cute having a dangerous side, and it adds an element of suspense and intrigue. The unpredictability can make for a compelling narrative twist. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! If you have any other ideas or insights, I'd love to hear them.
@SageReacher-ot8bu
3 ай бұрын
@@WonderTales70 Generally I think of myself as someone who is more than willing to help expand a potential theory of what the topic could be BUT because of that I unfortunately seem to attract more and more the "hater" and those who only wanted to respond with something hurtful or sarcastic or those who say I don't know what I'm talking about sadly I had that very thing happen to me recently so I really try to be extra guarded when it comes to what I think even though it might not appear that way that's not to say I can't be just as hurtful and sarcastic I don't know why I for the most part seem to only attract "HATER" and the "jackass's" who only want to say hurtful things... Ps. IF you actually mean it when you say you want to know more of what I think then I'm more than happy to help expand on the potential theory of the to topic at hand... BUT like I said I seen to only attract "HATER'S" and the "Wolf's in sheep's clothing" kind of people if that's still okay with you then I would be happy to oblige... If not then don't hesitate to tell me what you think about it and I will end this it just as fast as It has begun I will try My damnedest to keep My open honest and Opinionated conversations coming 😰😏🤞😂😂
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Read full Story : kzitem.infoUgkxg28b9PFnpyNSLw0U2biRBOxIZcKVdamN
@ThomasAlexander-nu8pp
3 ай бұрын
What’s the deal.? They were in a valley then suddenly back in the base.
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
I apologize for any confusion regarding the transition between scenes. I'll review the story to ensure smoother transitions and better clarity. Thank you for pointing that out, and I appreciate your attention to detail. If you have any other feedback or suggestions, please let me know!
@jbodden6977
3 ай бұрын
HMMMM, AKA PLANET OF ECHOES...?
@WonderTales70
3 ай бұрын
Interesting idea! "Planet of Echoes" has a mysterious and intriguing ring to it. It could be a great title for a future story or an alternate name for this one. Thanks for the suggestion! If you have any other ideas or feedback, I'd love to hear them
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