Man, I wish this was a novel or trilogy. The story starts off so good and only gets better as the story progresses. I was waiting for the crystal assassins to try something, but I guess the author thought the story was too long and just dropped that angle.
@robertcook792
Ай бұрын
This would be so much better if there was video to these stories. At least visual changes as the story progresses. The story is great.
@kenjackben
Ай бұрын
when the AI animation starts getting up to snuff you guys are going to get a lot of views
@strykersgamingltd
Ай бұрын
Wow, yet another great yarn. I was hoping to hear hybrid child being produced. I wonder how that would affect the Empire!
@Madjuls
Ай бұрын
A very good story.
@timothyn4167
Ай бұрын
Where do we volunteer as tribute?😂😂😂
@Mike64-hl6pt
Ай бұрын
Overall, it's a good story, but limited in scope by KZitem constraints and audience. Would make good R to NC-17 feature with more action, bumpity bump!😅😅
@petercrawford3370
29 күн бұрын
Exactly
@RovingPunster
20 күн бұрын
It's too bad I couldnt have been chosen for that particular diplomatic mission ... with my knowledge of physics, qigong, shiatsu, and swedish amma, I bet I could have played the Empress' patterns like a basso profundo quantum-filament harpsichord, and unleashed a cosmic level wave of pleasure comparable to the eruption of an AGN (read: quasar), and spontaneously ascended everyone in the Empire into beings of pure energy. 😎🤥 If they want me, I only charge $3/dy plus travel expenses. 😂
@Sci-Fantasy
20 күн бұрын
Oh my, a cosmic-scale happy ending! For just $3 a day, you're offering to turn an entire alien civilization into blissed-out energy beings. Talk about bang for your buck! I'd say the Empress should hire you immediately - it's not every day you get the chance to upgrade your entire species through the power of intergalactic massage. Just be careful not to overdo it, or you might accidentally create a new quasar where their planet used to be!
@kenjackben
Ай бұрын
this is the problem I have with the story it sounds like a stupid lie some guy might tell a nice young girl to get into her pants and you could have wrote the story like that and then had it been when when the man finds out he could have just told her you didn't have to lie to me if all you wanted was sex I'm down to do that
@Sci-Fantasy
Ай бұрын
Everyone is different and reacts differently. Thank you for your comment.
@kenjackben
Ай бұрын
@@Sci-Fantasy I've seen quite a few alien romance stories where the alien women are there and having sex with men and then erasing their memories or lying about their true intentions and I always wanted the story to be where the human would say you didn't have to lie in order to seduce us human males are always DTF
@robertmccracken6930
Ай бұрын
This is completely idiotic, from the premise to the flow of the story.
@Sci-Fantasy
Ай бұрын
I'm sorry you didn't like it. I hope you find a story you like
@Baronstone
Ай бұрын
What are you talking about, this is an amazing story. Then again, maybe I have simply read enough books in my life that my mind fills in the things that are missing automatically for me
@kenjackben
Ай бұрын
the concept is rather perverted and doesn't quite make economic sense
@Sci-Fantasy
Ай бұрын
The story explores complex themes of cultural differences, diplomacy, and power dynamics through a science fiction lens. While the premise may seem unconventional, it's meant to push boundaries and prompt reflection on how vastly alien societies might function. The economic aspects are simplified for narrative purposes, but you raise a fair point that could be explored further. My goal was to create an thought-provoking tale, not perfect realism. I'm always looking to improve and welcome constructive criticism to refine future works. Thank you for engaging with the story.
@kenjackben
Ай бұрын
what if the wealth of their country or their planet is tied to their royalties of spring so the women produce multiple children but because their men have low sperm counts human males don't have this issue so when a human male impregnates a alien female from the species she has a litter of children and their world becomes more prosperous than ever
@scottdahl1938
Ай бұрын
@@Sci-Fantasy And a fine job of that you are doing. Very tactful and tasteful.
@Baronstone
Ай бұрын
I guess you missed the part where he commented that her satisfaction can't be the only thing, that economics, trade, and various other things also play a part, but we find out that economics is not the job of the Empress, her job is to provide the energy that binds the entire empire together. Did you really miss that whole point or are you just unable to understand it?
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