Love how this is set in Edinburgh and the accuracy of the description of it. The story is detailed and well written. The narrator is really good, he is really easy to listen to and the story is bloody amazing. 10,10,10,10 across the board .
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the setting in Edinburgh and found the descriptions accurate. I'm also glad you liked the story and the narration. Your support and high praise mean a lot to me. 10,10,10,10 across the board-wow! Stay tuned for more amazing tales! 👻✨
@thecursed01
3 ай бұрын
i went to edinburh once...i think...the ppl said the city is called edin..and then burped..all of them. got bitten by a sexy vampire lady there. can confirm, story seems accurate
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@thecursed01 🤣🤣🤣
@ricardocarmona5210
3 ай бұрын
That's what I was thinking he said it all. Thanks 🤘
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Great minds think alike, huh?
@wagerobot5231
4 ай бұрын
There's a lot of telling rather than showing in this story. We're told the shop keeper and the vampire grew close while fighting battles together. The story of those battles is not told.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your insights. I understand the importance of showing rather than telling, and I'll make sure to include more detailed accounts of the battles and the development of the characters' relationships in future stories. Without giving too much away, I plan to incorporate flashbacks to make it more interesting. Your input helps me improve and create better content. Thanks for watching and sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@thecursed01
3 ай бұрын
now i imagine a old vampire lady and a young shoopkeeper fighting against silly new city council rules, or the fight to get the matching socks back into pairs after washing day.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Hillarious 🤣🤣🤣👍
@J.C.Emerson
2 ай бұрын
That's all together and entirely a different story.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@normal_human_female
4 ай бұрын
I really do like the idea of this story and think it would be a great series... (like the half priced voodoo shop) but... i feel like this story only skimmed the surface like a waterbug skims the water. For example: they are going to have a battle of wits to gain ownership or keep an opal... they start the battle of wits and its over and won in the next sentence... opponent leaves without an incident. You dont grow an attachment to any of the characters.. like i said, skimming the surface. I would love to hear this story again and definitely a series of it, if the story was altered to give it substance 👍 ❤
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I'm glad you like the concept and see the potential for a series. I appreciate your point about the story skimming the surface. I will work on adding more depth and detail, especially to the characters and key events like the Battle of Wits. Your input is invaluable in helping me improve and create more engaging stories. Stay tuned for future episodes, and I hope to bring you a more substantial and immersive experience next time. Thanks for watching and sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@Dr_Larken
4 ай бұрын
I never understood vampire stories where the person didn’t opt to be bitten and turned into a vampire! Especially if the vampire was attractive! Regardless of the vampires appearance, bite me!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
That's an interesting perspective! Vampire stories often explore a range of themes, from fear and control to allure and desire. The idea of willingly becoming a vampire certainly adds a unique twist. Thanks for sharing your thoughts-it's always fascinating to hear different viewpoints on these tales! 🧛♂✨
@seandpizzle
3 ай бұрын
Because who really wants to live forever? No, thank you. That said, Isabella can bite me anytime
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@seandpizzle Haha, I get what you mean-living forever does have its downsides. But I appreciate your enthusiasm for Isabella! Thanks for your support and for watching. Stay tuned for more exciting stories! 👻✨
@jbos5107
4 ай бұрын
This was good. I really enjoyed it.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Yay, thank you!!!
@JASONZx6R
4 ай бұрын
Story has good potential , but needs way more character development, esp if the shop itself is going to be a character. The guy finds out he inherited a magic shop with a vampire one min, and the next it's lole he has been working with magic for yrs
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you see the potential in the story. I appreciate your thoughts on character development and the need for a more gradual progression. I'll work on building the characters, especially the shop, to ensure a richer and more immersive experience. Your input is invaluable in helping me improve the story. Thanks for watching and sharing your insights! 👻✨
@BrianSzuch-pq2zm
3 ай бұрын
I really like this story and cant wait for more. Just seems like it went from 0-100 immediately after taking over the shop. This would make an excellent movie. I definitely would love it not to seem rushed.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and are excited for more. I understand your concern about the pacing, and in the next episode, I’ll take it more easy to ensure it doesn't feel rushed. I agree, this story would make an excellent movie! Stay tuned for more, and thank you for your support! 📺 Watch Episode 2 here: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ 👻✨
@allisonshaw9341
2 ай бұрын
Movie or series? Series allow for greater character development and more details. I think it would be a great series!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! A series does offer more room for character growth and storytelling. You can find the next episodes here ➡️kzitem.info/door/PLWfegsNk2xXghrTPZf9tLlPB5B3WH4x3V&si=hezJIrS_9E4qMYrJ
@dustinshadle732
4 ай бұрын
Not bad. I like vampire stories and especially when there's a light side protector and ancient secrets rarely told. Mysterious background is a sure lure to most.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the vampire story. I love incorporating light side protectors and ancient secrets to add depth and mystery. Your enthusiasm means a lot, and I hope to continue luring you in with more intriguing and mysterious tales. Stay tuned for more! 🧛♂✨
@jodys5578
4 ай бұрын
Enjoyed listening, hope it becomes a series
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your comment! A new episode is coming! You may check the community tab for a sneak peek! Stay tuned 👻👻✨️
@piximaya98
4 ай бұрын
I really loved this story, I'd love to listen to more!!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm working on it! Stay tuned😄
@thenameless2379
3 ай бұрын
Finally. A story where vampires and humans are friends instead of enemies. I'm tired of seeing vampires as evil monsters
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you, @thenameless2379! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's refreshing to explore the idea of vampires and humans being friends instead of enemies. I'm happy to bring a different perspective to the genre. Stay tuned for more unique stories! 👻✨
@robertocatrone715
4 ай бұрын
I enjoyed your novella quite a bit. Keep up the good work, and thank you.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the novella. Your support means a lot to me. I'll keep working hard to bring you more great stories. You can watch the next episode here kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=e_8GCrCuTlt00ghW Thanks again! 👻✨
@donnavalliere8722
4 ай бұрын
Although I enjoyed the story, I felt there was quite a bit of repetition and unnecessary fluff. The narration was well done.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and appreciated the narration. I understand your concerns about repetition and unnecessary fluff, and I'll work on tightening up the narrative in future episodes. Please check the next episode and tell me what you think: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=PCI6LRot27Duv4FO. Your input helps me improve, so thanks for sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@free6050
4 ай бұрын
I love this story!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
thank you!!!
@georgethompson5030
4 ай бұрын
Wonderful story I'd love to hear more stories like that thank you
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
I'm so glad you enjoyed the Anderson's Antiques story! 🧛♂️ Don't worry, there's plenty more spooky content on the way. Stay tuned for the next episode and feel free to vote for your favorite story idea in the poll. Thanks for your support! 👻✨
@ladywolfwolf
4 ай бұрын
The story was very good. I subscribed so, I hope there are more like this
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed Anderson's Antiques story. 🧛♂ Your support means a lot! Stay tuned for more spine-chilling tales coming your way. Don't forget to vote for the next story in the poll. Welcome to the community! 👻📚
@joycebrown1413
4 ай бұрын
Enjoyed this very much !!! More please, hope there is series for this one..
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it! 🏠 Thank you for the kind words. I have some exciting plans for this series, so stay tuned for more episodes. Your support means a lot! 👻✨
@roden70
4 ай бұрын
This story was AI generated I think. The story was superficial, no character development, random as hell and repetitive.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. I assure you, this story was not AI-generated. I understand your concerns about the character development and the flow of the story. I'll take your critique to heart and work on making future stories more detailed and cohesive. Your input is valuable in helping me improve. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@sighthoundlady15
3 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt Roden is right it indeed comes off very superficial, there’s a lot of telling, not a lot of showing. It makes the characters and stories weak and uninteresting. There are many things stated in a sentence or two that deserve an entire 30+ minutes of actual story if you want the readers to feel invested in anything. If it’s not AI generated it’s at most a “synopsis” of a story, like we’re hearing cliff notes.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@sighthoundlady15 Thank you for your detailed feedback. Anderson's Antiques is indeed a series, and I appreciate your thoughts on how to deepen the storytelling. I'm committed to improving and creating richer, more immersive episodes. Your insights are invaluable, and I'll work on showing more and telling less to make the characters and stories more engaging. Stay tuned for upcoming episodes such as kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ where I strive to bring the world of Anderson's Antiques to life with greater depth and detail. Your support and constructive criticism help me grow as a storyteller. 👻✨
@flosa1995
3 ай бұрын
@@sighthoundlady15 This is an AI channel, even the comments from him are ai generated
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Don't worry, I promise I'm a real person... or am I? *dramatic music*
@kevinhulbert3895
3 ай бұрын
Great story. Almost feels like a romance novel where the main characters have an unseen love for each other, but as of yet, don't realize it. I'm curious to see what becomes of them.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you, Kevin! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's great to hear that you're intrigued by the developing dynamics between the characters. There's definitely more to come, and I'm excited to explore their relationship further. Stay tuned to see what becomes of them! 👻✨
@coyotejake9164
3 ай бұрын
This story has tremendous potential but requires significant work in pacing, character development, and an overall "show, don't tell" approach. In areas where time and events are glossed over to move the story forward, there needs to be a "but that's a story for another day" type of deferment to avoid the painful plotholes.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on pacing, character development, and the "show, don't tell" approach. I'm working on addressing these areas, as this story is part of a series. I'm currently working on the third episode, and I'm aiming to improve the narrative and fill in the gaps. Your input is invaluable in helping me create better content. Stay tuned for more, and thank you for your support! 👻✨
@nashreensulaiman7240
4 ай бұрын
❤ absolutely brilliant thank you and more please 🙏❤
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!!!❤️❤️❤️ Stay tuned😊
@nashreensulaiman7240
4 ай бұрын
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
@delorisbaisden1929
3 ай бұрын
I really ❤the concept of this story. I’m looking forward to part 2🎉 I prefer my creepy pastas over television. I get so much done while listening. Thank you for sharing your stories with us 😅
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Thank you for your kind words! It means a lot to know that you enjoy the stories.
@nashreensulaiman7240
2 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt Most welcome and in all honesty it's simply marvelous 🌹🌹🌹🌹
@vrinparadise
4 ай бұрын
I love it, Thanks
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your comment! I'm working on the next episode. Stay tuned🙂
@Trafficaloco
4 ай бұрын
Great story.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you! 😊😊😊
@nickwest1337
4 ай бұрын
That was good, but it felt rushed in places.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story overall. I'll definitely keep your comment in mind for future episodes to ensure a better pace. Your input helps me improve, so thanks for sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@rtempest12
3 ай бұрын
Hi FF, a Gööd Tale with Awesome Telling.. Great tö Sëë Part 2 is Finished.. Fabulous.!!, ✌️❤️ Fröm Ont, 🇨🇦 💋
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Hi there! Thank you so much for your kind words and enthusiasm! I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed the tale and that you're excited about Part 2. Your support means a lot. Greetings to Ontario, Canad🇨🇦! ✨
@Tara-tp4km
3 ай бұрын
Please make more it was too short... An amazing story Thank you so much
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much, Tara! You can listen to the next episode here kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ. I hope you enjoy it too! I will keep your feedback in mind for the next episodes🙏. Stay tuned for more👻✨️ You may want to check out my other series, Phantom's Hollow & Mystic Estate Chronicles. Last but not least, Eldritch Vampires!❤️
@rosetanner9817
3 ай бұрын
Outstanding story, told in the same way ❤🎉
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story and its narration. Your support inspires me to keep crafting and sharing these tales. Stay tuned for more captivating stories! 👻✨
@Mrdanieljerez
3 ай бұрын
Hi! 👋 I just stopped by to subscribe, seen you on "Owl the pirates" channel, and have enjoyed the few shes featured, on you! Glad to find this channel, i will be following closely ❤
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for subscribing! I'm thrilled to hear you found me through "Owl the Pirate's" channel and enjoyed the features. Welcome to the Fear Frequencies community! I'll be sharing more exciting stories, so stay tuned. 👻✨
@Alex_Hellcat13
4 ай бұрын
Theres good skills with writing and describing scenes...but i think its missing a lot of character development. Its like, she inherits the shop and then boom shes just accepting the reality of vampires and fighting some kind of battles with them?...and it seems to skip a lot of realistic character growth/changes. It feels like the story is missing chapters or something
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I appreciate your insights on character development and understand your concerns. I've taken all the criticism to heart and am working hard to improve. Please watch the next episode kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=PCI6LRot27Duv4FO and let me know if you think I've gotten better. Your input is invaluable in helping me create more engaging and realistic stories. Thanks for your support! 👻✨
@abx42
3 ай бұрын
So Warehouse 13 with a store front. I like the concept
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you like the concept. Warehouse 13 with a storefront is definitely a fun and intriguing idea. Stay tuned for more exciting stories! 👻✨
@a.m.pietroschek1972
3 ай бұрын
Whatever the author had to compensate for: THAT MANY cheat-codes (plot armor, god-mode, invincibility, all superpowers, all skills and knowledges) are overdoing it. Vampire immune to sunlight & bloodthirst, simple store salesman can prove millennia old items for real or fake, it is not the narrator messing this up, but the really amateur story. Also: Nice of the DARK LODGE to inform literally every newbie about WHERE their secret hideout is!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. I understand your concerns about the character's abilities seeming overpowered. Balancing strengths and vulnerabilities is crucial for a compelling story. I'll take your comments into consideration and work on refining the character development in future episodes. Your input is valuable and helps me improve. Thanks for watching and sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@joangoldsmith3999
4 ай бұрын
I want more 😍
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
I'm so glad you enjoyed the Anderson's Antiques story! 🧛♂️ Don't worry, there's plenty more spooky content on the way. Stay tuned for the next episode and feel free to vote for your favorite story idea in the poll. Thanks for your support! 👻✨
@cjsa7174
3 ай бұрын
I was in Edinburgh in March, such a historical, beautiful city. I’ve been missing it ever since.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Edinburgh truly is a historical and beautiful city! I'm glad the story brought back memories of your visit in March. It's a place with so much charm and history-easy to miss once you've been there. Thanks for sharing, and stay tuned for more stories that capture the essence of such amazing places! 👻✨
@tonyeden8381
4 ай бұрын
So not AI?
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Nope, not AI! All the stories are crafted by me to bring you the best spooky experiences. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching and supporting the channel. 👻✨
@richardrichard2693
3 ай бұрын
Ditto the same everyone is saying. You have a good voice!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you enjoy my voice. Your support means a lot to me. Stay tuned for more stories! 👻✨
@ummno9504
3 ай бұрын
Interesting story. Really enjoyed the wild events in the story.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the wild events. Your support means a lot to me. Stay tuned for more exciting tales! 👻✨
@bradpeacock8764
3 ай бұрын
WOW! Love this story... remarkable!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I hope you watch the next episode also 👻✨️
@Darna-py6ik
3 ай бұрын
Loved this, and being set in Edinburgh, I can imagine walking in to a shop like that there. The story’s is grate, I hope there’s many more to it, I only found this today. Excellent ❤️
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved the story and that the Edinburgh setting resonated with you. It's such a magical place, perfect for a shop like that. I'm excited to share that there are many more stories to come. Welcome to the channel, and thank you for your kind words and support! Excellent to have you here! ❤️👻✨
@lazarocuellar6130
3 ай бұрын
Interesting storyline!🤔👍👍👍
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you found the storyline interesting. You can watch the next part here kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=FmPATat-r98PX4Nw Stay tuned for more exciting episodes! 🤔👍👍👍👻✨
@Frixa2022
3 ай бұрын
Amazing!❤
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you Frixa! You can watch the next episodes here: Episode 2: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=eMpjh9SaHWXGFaZA Episode 3: kzitem.info/news/bejne/mWaE0GStqn6poIosi=B3RoqTlIXQMdCesq 👻✨
@sharrononeill3288
4 ай бұрын
Great stories. I enjoy ed. It very much😊
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!!!❤
@hawaiianpunch6534
3 ай бұрын
I love this story. I'm a collector of magickals and I know of a couple of shops that has cool things. Let me tell you the stuff isn't cheap. I'm turned on by Izzy the sorceress vamp. What i would love to see a Daemon and Djinn to join the group.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you, @hawaiianpunch6534! I'm glad you love the story. It's fascinating to hear about your collection of magickals and the cool things you find in shops. You're right, quality items often come with a price! Thanks for sharing your experience. Stay tuned for more stories! 👻✨
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
You gave me a great idea for episode #5, but I will not spoil it 🙏😆👻✨❤
@todvanced7842
2 ай бұрын
Whew hoo! New narrator!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Thank you for noticing the change!
@erinstubblefield3546
3 ай бұрын
I loved the first chapter! ❤
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you, Erin❤️🙏 I hope you enjoy also the episode 2 which is now available👻✨️
@angelaharper4527
3 ай бұрын
Great story!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much, Angela!❤️🙏 I hope you enjoy also episode#2 👻✨️ You can watch it here kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ
@kathybrown8681
4 ай бұрын
Oh my word you have me at the edge of my seat thank you so much for such an entertaining story
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed the story and that it kept you on the edge of your seat. The next episode was uploaded: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=PCI6LRot27Duv4FO. Stay tuned for more thrilling tales! 👻✨
@ziggypas8247
3 ай бұрын
Fantastic...can't wait for more!
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Awesome, thank you! Episode #2 is now available! kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ Stay tuned for more! 👻✨️
@mikebaxter9535
3 ай бұрын
Loved the story. i will enjoy following the exploits of these characters.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved the story. I look forward to sharing more adventures with these characters, Episode #2 is available, and hope you'll continue to enjoy following their exploits.
@nikkilynne38555
4 ай бұрын
I am new to this channel and I really enjoyed the story and loved the narration, thanks for sharing Tennessee
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Welcome to the channel! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the story and loved the narration. Thank you so much for your kind words and support. Greetings to you in Tennessee! Stay tuned for more spooky tales! 👻✨ You can watch the next episode here kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=PCI6LRot27Duv4FO
@Pitraptor
4 ай бұрын
Now please have an ai write a story named "I inherited an outhouse with a werewolf in it".
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thanks for the fun suggestion! "I Inherited an Outhouse with a Werewolf in It" sounds like a wild ride. While I enjoy crafting my own stories, I'll definitely keep this quirky idea in mind for the future. Stay tuned for more thrilling tales! 🐺🚽✨
@ProvlepseisTaro
4 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt Stop being nice to such pricks don't give a damn f*them
@ladyonthelake8866
4 ай бұрын
An outhouse for curing severe constipation. Take a "seat," and the werewolf jumps out and scares the 💩 out of you. 😉
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@ladyonthelake8866 Haha, that's a hilarious idea! An outhouse with a surprise werewolf would definitely be an unforgettable experience. Thanks for the laugh and for watching Anderson Antiques! Stay tuned for more spooky (and maybe even funny) stories! 🐺✨
@drew1554
3 ай бұрын
Cool story line. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Our pleasure! I hope that you will also enjoy the next episode: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ. Stay tuned for more! 👻✨️
@ZazrianZinZee
4 ай бұрын
Good stuff brother, well done sir.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your support means a lot to me. Stay tuned for more stories! 👻✨
@gglesucks9462
4 ай бұрын
You aren't telling a story as much as you are telling ABOUT a story. At first, I thought you were giving a world-building overview, but it doesn't really fit that either. It's like you are going over concepts and ideas, but haven't formed them into a story. The Protag inherits a shop. Ok. Discovers it's supernatural. Ok. Meet a vampire bound to the shop. Ok. Decides to work there and work with the vampire. Ok. Starts out a Noob but becomes Dr. Strange. Ok. Dangers start to loom in the distance. Ok. There was a battle, victory. Ok. The shop has become famous. Ok. 9:10 (at this point I thought you would go into the story, but no) makes a deal with a mysterious stranger. Ok. More stuff happened. Ok. A ritual is done to save the world(?) Ok? It seems like AI. A lot of great ideas, but no story. Each one of these ideas fleshed out could be a short story about the shop.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your in-depth feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to outline your thoughts. I understand your concerns about the story feeling more like an overview rather than a fully fleshed-out narrative. My goal is to create engaging and immersive stories, and your insights are invaluable in helping me achieve that. I intended to describe the special artifact occurrences while keeping a balance of all aspects of the story to maintain a swift pace and manageable duration for the video. My aim is to develop characters and story depth progressively with each episode. I will work on developing each idea more thoroughly, ensuring that the characters, events, and world-building have the depth and detail they deserve. Each of the points you mentioned could indeed be expanded into its own short story, and I will strive to bring more substance and coherence to future episodes. Thank you again for your constructive feedback. It helps me improve and create better content for everyone. Stay tuned for more detailed and immersive stories! 👻✨
@robingouette436
3 ай бұрын
Excellent ! Love the story line
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! 🙏❤️ I hope you also enjoy Episode#2 👻✨️
@RavenVargas27
3 ай бұрын
This is so creepy very well written and detailed makes ya feel like your there excellent narration thanks this is a real treat You just got a new subscriber 🥰
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much, @RavenVargas27! I'm thrilled to hear that you found the story creepy and well-detailed. It's great to know the narration made you feel like you were there. Your kind words mean a lot to me. If you enjoyed this episode, be sure to check out the next ones: Episode 2: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=eMpjh9SaHWXGFaZA Episode 3: kzitem.info/news/bejne/mWaE0GStqn6poIosi=B3RoqTlIXQMdCesq Stay tuned for more exciting content! 👻✨
@RavenVargas27
3 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt Your welcome. Sweet more episodes I am a happy horror addict thanks for the links
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@RavenVargas27 Thank you so much for your kind words! 👻✨
@samgould9930
3 ай бұрын
This is like an outline or 1st draught. So much missing and so many errors
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. Anderson's Antiques is indeed a series, and this was just the first episode. I appreciate your patience as the story unfolds and develops further. Your insights are valuable, and I'll work on improving future episodes. Stay tuned for more detailed and refined installments! 👻✨
@mykaelnyx8821
3 ай бұрын
I actually did indeed enjoy this story, is there more?
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story! Yes, there's more to come. Episode 2 is available now. You can watch it here: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQ. Enjoy! 👻✨
@thomasroberts5733
4 ай бұрын
Grate story cant wate for more
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
4 ай бұрын
Stay tuned! Next episode is on the way! Thank you for your comment!
@Madjuls
3 ай бұрын
A very good story.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your comment! You can watch the next episodes here: Episode 2: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=eMpjh9SaHWXGFaZA Episode 3: kzitem.info/news/bejne/mWaE0GStqn6poIosi=B3RoqTlIXQMdCesq Thanks for watching and sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@lauradeneault3525
3 ай бұрын
Interesting, but you should slow down. Good story teller have a soft, soothing voice.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your suggestion to slow down and use a softer, soothing voice. I'll keep this in mind for future stories. Your input helps me improve and become a better storyteller. Thanks for watching and for your support! 👻✨
@tammydownes2413
3 ай бұрын
Thank uou for the atory i headed to part two now
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for listening! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Enjoy part two, and stay tuned for more! 👻✨
@tomesofawesome8041
3 ай бұрын
I really like the artwork displayed in this video. Did you create it, or at least know of it's origin
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the artwork in the video. I actually created the artwork using OpenArt. I appreciate your kind words and support. If you have any other questions or feedback, feel free to share! 👻✨
@tomesofawesome8041
3 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt My only additional feedback, and this is ONLY, IF, YOU, HAVE, TIME! LOL is to maybe occasionally splice in either an occasional different image of the artifact being mentioned, or possibly go into more detail. I really liked the whole first episode and I'm listening to episode 2 right now as I game. But for all the mention it got, I wasn't left with a really detailed mental image of what the Chalice looked like for example. I know it was hand carved, but by comparison, I recognize the Vampires dress style as Victorian and I think the gentleman's whole suit coat is very posh (Is that the word? lol) I was just left wondering like what color the chalice's wood was. But if it's too much work, don't mind me. I go waaaaayyy overboard into lore and details. Just saying. Otherwise I found this story really fantastic.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
@@tomesofawesome8041 Thank you so much for your detailed feedback and for enjoying the story! I appreciate your suggestion about including more detailed descriptions and occasional images of the artifacts. I'll definitely keep that in mind for future episodes to help create a more vivid mental image. I love that you're diving deep into the lore and details-it's always great to hear from passionate listeners! To enhance your experience, I’ll make an effort to provide more intricate descriptions, like the color and craftsmanship of the chalice. Thank you for your support and for sharing your thoughts. Enjoy episode 2, and happy gaming! 🎮👻✨
@allthethings01
3 ай бұрын
Is the the backstory to how Mr meisler got his shop?
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your comment! This particular story is not about Mr. Meisler's backstory, but it's an intriguing idea. I appreciate your interest, and I'll keep it in mind for future episodes. Stay tuned for more exciting tales! 👻✨ Check the next episode here : kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=kjRYegHSNAFuOEXl
@crescentfade
3 ай бұрын
Great potential, but it needs to slow down and develop the characters and plot more. I love a good vampire story, but this is too cliché and the pacing only further exacerbates that issue. Develop the relationship with the main character and the vampire. The dude just walks in a shop, finds a vampire, and says, "Let's work together!"? Does he just assume that vampires are real? Does he have any concern that she may, at least initially, be hostile seeing he has warm blood coursing through his veins? How does she feed? How did she become a vampire? Did she come from a coven? Is she an exile or fugutive? Why should the dude care at all? Does he have a love interest at all outside of his life in the shop? If so, how does it affect his relationship with the vampire, even if it's not a romantic one? As it is, this is like Dr. Strange meets Selene the first day on the job, and she says, "Hey, have you ever watched the movie National Treasure?". The dude is like, "Nope, but if you are recommending it, I'm all in, oh fang-bearer of mine!".
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your detailed feedback! I appreciate your insights on the pacing and character development. This story is part of a series, so there's more to come that will delve deeper into the characters and plot. I hope you'll give the next episodes a chance. Episode 2: kzitem.info/news/bejne/lGiI1Yusp3arZKQsi=eMpjh9SaHWXGFaZA Episode 3: kzitem.info/news/bejne/mWaE0GStqn6poIosi=B3RoqTlIXQMdCesq Your suggestions are invaluable; I'll keep them in mind as I continue developing the story. Thanks for watching and sharing your thoughts! 👻✨
@bgrowsmars3918
8 күн бұрын
It’s chat gpt I think but still great
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
7 күн бұрын
Thank you for the kind words! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the content, whether it's ChatGPT or not!
@bgrowsmars3918
6 күн бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt I absolutely love it. I been listening to it for days
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
6 күн бұрын
@bgrowsmars3918 Thank you so much!
@AeonZhang
9 күн бұрын
💫✨🌟❤️🌟✨💫
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
9 күн бұрын
🙏❤️✨
@mr.salvatorejpluchino8467
3 ай бұрын
I WISH MY BROTHER GEORGE WAS HERE 😂😂😂😂 GET IT BROTHER GEORGE, BUGS BUNNY 🐰 😂😂😂
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Haha, I get it! "I wish my brother George was here"-classic Bugs Bunny reference! 🐰😂 Thanks for the laugh and for watching. Stay tuned for more fun and spooky stories! 👻✨
@mr.salvatorejpluchino8467
3 ай бұрын
@@FearFrequencies-kj3wt 👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Thank you for watching and leaving a comment!
@SetarehSilver
3 ай бұрын
no plot, no personalities, no point. what a colossal waste of time.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. I understand that the first episode might not provide a full picture of the story. This is part of a series, and the plot and character development will unfold over multiple episodes. I hope you give it another chance and stay tuned for the upcoming episodes, which will add more depth and detail. Your input is valuable and helps me improve. Thanks for watching! 👻✨
@jasonparker9367
Ай бұрын
obviously grifting.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
Ай бұрын
It’s definitely a topic that sparks a lot of discussions! What are your thoughts on the different perspectives around it?
@jaredreed8144
3 ай бұрын
way too rushed
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate your honesty and will work on improving the pacing in future videos. Your input helps me create better content. Thanks for watching! 👻✨
@justcreepy8592
2 ай бұрын
First 3 minutes and already the story is not flowing and inaccurate. Solicitors will never will call in unsociable hours. Also, the person will need to be confirmed legally that they are the beneficiary. The legal fees and all the legalities needs to be sorted before you are the owner of the property. Why not stated who else could inherit the shop. And the most important question: why going there at night, alone? In Edinburgh city centre you would not go at night, by foot - is not safe, but car - a parking is a nightmare. Sorry, it’s a bad story.
@FearFrequencies-kj3wt
2 ай бұрын
Of course, if you watch only the 3 first minutes, you will find the story inaccurate. But the thing is, I never revealed the year that the story took place because, in the old days, it was safe to walk in Edinburg. As for the legal aspects, you think it's every day to find a vampire in the basement, but the inheritance formalities were inaccurate..Last and most importantly, you do not have the right to judge a story you have not watched until the end. To begin with, this is a series and if you have not understood it already it is FICTION!!! Sorry, but the comment you wrote is silly and immature, to say the least. I'm trying to be nice to you. The story may be bad for your taste. If you have watched the video, you will notice me saying at the end if you enjoyed the story leave a comment below. In your case, keep your immature opinion to yourself.
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