TD: *reveals himself* Me: *exasperated* "He just abbreviated 'The Devil'?"
@OmegaWalnutChug
3 жыл бұрын
I only realized that now after seeing this. It seems so obvious now. *SHOOK*
@punpkin-314-pi5
4 жыл бұрын
TD - The Devil F - Famine P - Pestilence W - War D - Death The 7 cages - the 7 deadly sins i assume 8th cage - ?????? a new sin???
@vincentvalenzuela5718
4 жыл бұрын
Earl is envy? Lisa the 6y/o is lust With abaddon and beelzebub as her imaginary friends
@evilhutdug4665
4 жыл бұрын
Vincent Valenzuela abaddon and beelzebub are devil kings or something right?
@PurpleColonel
4 жыл бұрын
The coin one is greed. The whole 3 day thing is like a Jesus coming back sort of allusion I guess?
@Onesaltysoul
4 жыл бұрын
Fun fact! There were actually 8 sins originally. :D The eighth that isn’t used anymore can be described as Despair, or the loss of hope.
@punpkin-314-pi5
4 жыл бұрын
THAT WOULD MAKE SENSE!!!
@thegreatwormbaby5310
4 жыл бұрын
"So my job is I keep people in cages " My mind: "so you work at a jail"
@00Jj262
4 жыл бұрын
Cage is different than a cell. Cells usually have walls, these cages sound like they're bars all around.
@yourlittleinsomniac5369
3 жыл бұрын
My brain: so you work for DHS
@patientlywatching7775
2 жыл бұрын
@@00Jj262 "They finished up the insulation" (referring to the 8th cage). They must have walls or they'd not be insulated. I'm not being sarcastic; I just heard it and your comment came to mind (a year too late probably). I'm actually surprised that I even caught that.
@crytlmeen
11 ай бұрын
@@patientlywatching7775I think that insulation was just a mispronunciation of installation.
@E-Box
11 ай бұрын
@@crytlmeen Did he actually say "insulation"? I thought I just misheard MCP say "installation". @patientlywatching7775 As the original reads; "The installation of the eighth cage wrapped up yesterday".
@vanellopescorner8882
4 жыл бұрын
Lisa: *disappears* Him: Screw telling my boss, I gotta get this on reddit!
@charliekopp3774
3 жыл бұрын
Him: screw living gotta tell my fans im gonna die.
@remp5529
4 жыл бұрын
My favorite part of this story is how the author includes biblical figures without straight up saying so. Like how TD is the Devil and the four agents are the four horsemen of the apocalypse.
@rio03100
4 жыл бұрын
It's kinda funny that TD's The Devil.
@savagegamerbear7409
4 жыл бұрын
Dont forget about their name, Cerberus the devils gaurd doge
@tylercoon1791
3 жыл бұрын
Earl is Samson, what with his hair being uncut giving him strength
@mattiekarwin3667
3 жыл бұрын
I keep feeling like the grease burn injury on his hand is a reference to something but to what I can't figure out.
@Greenbee12964
3 жыл бұрын
Lisa’s imaginary friend is named Mr Abba, or in Hebrew- Father
@skulibaumgardner242
4 жыл бұрын
Man just roasting every normal name “Oh your name’s bill? That Reminds me of eating rats”
@WhitneyDahlin
4 жыл бұрын
So what were the monsters in the cages? A vampire, succubus, lizard person or alien (oxygen tank means they aren't used to the atmosphere here) Lisa is Betty's cousin which if you remember was one of the little girls that started the Salem witch trials. Supposedly the girls were possessed or Bewitched. So Lisa is probably possessed and her doll is likely her familar or a demon taking the form of a doll. The guy with the long hair is probably meant to represent Samson from the Bible who had immense strength as long as his hair was kept long but he said he was born in the 1800s so maybe it's just a genetic super power and his kryptonite is cutting his hair. The religious Mary's are probably just normal people that for whatever reason have some power to make their prayers come true, like witches probably. As for Chad he was born right as the nuclear bombs were dropped so he's possibly some type of radioactive mutant and the green liquid he drinks is probably radioactive something as well. That leaves the guy with coins for eyes. Perhaps he's a zombie or some sort of reanimated/undead corpse? Coins were placed on the eyes of the dead to keep them closed for hundreds of years. Nowdays they just sew the eyes of the dead shut. Idk he's the only one I don't have much theories for. He doesn't need to eat or drink, he can somehow read with coins for eyes and he doesn't feel pain. I also think the security guard is a monster because he doesn't remember his life before his job and he says he can't remember before he started writing things down, he ate human meat for hours and hours and loved it. He also has some type of psychic ability since he and the other monsters are the only ones who can see the doll most of the time and he had that vision of himself on the ceiling perhaps he's a wendigo or something like that. Anyway I would love to hear your guys theories and thoughts on the monsters
@sherrykachika4090
4 жыл бұрын
I read them all as particularly dangerous Transgressions against God, continually reborn in new incarnations. Supernatural creatures like a Succubus or vampire (perhaps representing recklessly greedy humans) preying on his creations. Mary and the Samson guy being those who've forsaken his gifts or perverted their god's name for murderous Zealotry. A Witch and her familiar and a reference to Charon (Ferryman of the Dead) for those who lead themselves or others astray from God's order. And the last two were Humanity using science to make themselves into Gods, Like Nuclear Weapons (Green Toxic Liquid) and the newest cage being made for Space Flight (Hence the Alien-esque thing with Oxygen Tanks) I can't completely speak to how human the guard was, but it's worth pointing out, the agent they sent to watch him was F. He was literally trapped in a room with Famine itself, and kept asking to be let out to find food, becoming more desperate. So...
@SpaceCore2053
4 жыл бұрын
Or, Chad is drinking Monster Energy Drink, and he's just a normal Chad.
@cyberspinosaur1145
4 жыл бұрын
Sherry Kachika I'm thinking the security guard may have started becoming a wendigo, even if not cannibalism is frowned upon pretty much worldwide, that alone would be a huge sin. Why they left Famine in charge of him, however, if beyond me. Seems like he was doomed
@cjsunder5292
4 жыл бұрын
@@cyberspinosaur1145 Honestly, go ahead and try to choose another one of the four horsemen you'd rather be locked in a room with. I believe famine was just the coolest dude and the one that was least likely to kill the poor dude. And about the wendigo thing, they were giving Mary(?) raw meat because she was a zombie or something, but in the end they were giving the guard cooked meat and water so he was apparently still human. Idk, imo the author thought it was already pretty hard to explain that the devil would hire a random dude to watch over abominations so he left it open to interpretations by ending on a "any human can be seen as a monster" kinda note, which is cool with me.
@lucytucker8561
3 жыл бұрын
Bob for the guy who has money for eyes. Bob actually means 'money' in Ireland. It's not as important but I thought I'd add that 😅
@Deadman_Elit3
4 жыл бұрын
16:00 Hastur! The King in Yellow "Have you seen the yellow sign?" I probably got more excited than I should have at that reference
@BlackCat-vs1jz
4 жыл бұрын
same
@rainraingoaway9446
4 жыл бұрын
Mind explaining then?
@Deadman_Elit3
4 жыл бұрын
@@rainraingoaway9446 Hastur, also known as "The King in Yellow" or "The Yellow King" is a character from the Lovecraftian/Cthulhu mythos. His lore is a little vague to me but I do know that he is an eldritch godlike being who wants to enslave the human race. He's an enemy to other gods of the mythos because they want to kill humans which contradicts his goal. The nun was a fanatic cultist of Hastur
@chatch621
4 жыл бұрын
More like False King
@AnubisX3
4 жыл бұрын
It reminded me of True Detective
@silverdrag0n_
4 жыл бұрын
the amount of detail of this story is making me shook. the symbolism is so well executed. maybe a bit cheesy, but still very well done.
@taylormademyself89
4 жыл бұрын
When it comes to long stories with part 1 through whatever I I always wait for the complete story like this one 🤘😎🙏
@mikeschannel910
4 жыл бұрын
Kendall ,TaylorMade gift from above,Taylor I cant wait but still go back for the entire thing
@matosz23
4 жыл бұрын
I wait too. I prefer it.
@dratoriasgaming9935
4 жыл бұрын
@@mikeschannel910 4l
@dexterwaltz8884
3 жыл бұрын
I do that and save em for when I work
@kimberlythompson7946
3 жыл бұрын
I Agree it's sometimes aggravating to only hear a small bit of the story, I try to hold out until the complete video comes out.
@Artretha
3 жыл бұрын
This was a hell of a story...no pun intended.
@atimidbirb
2 жыл бұрын
FIVE HUNDRED DOLLARS A DAY? My dude for that I would personally hand feed Lisa every single day
@mothmanofficaltm8397
3 жыл бұрын
War, famine, pestilence, and death? Talk about rad! I'm absolutely loving this series!
@jacquelinemacabra9672
4 жыл бұрын
This is really one of those stories that warrants a second reading after the plot twist is revealed
@Mountain8ear
3 жыл бұрын
But you should only LISTEN once.
@savagegamerbear7409
4 жыл бұрын
Cerberus the guardian of the gates of the underworld. The four horsemen Famine, War, Plague and finally their leader Death. this story had a lot of thought put into it. In my opinion it's one of the best stories I've listened to, and MrCreepyPasta such a great reading. 10/10
@thomasdowling2011
3 жыл бұрын
I dont know why but I always pictures War as the leader of the horsemen instead of Death
@noahharvey9446
4 жыл бұрын
I was intrigued by the theories, looked into a lot of ideas, this was what I got theory wise. I cling onto the nine circles of hell idea really quick, thinking maybe they aren’t in a specific order? The obvious ones in my mind, are the following, Cassie, Lust Bob, Greed Mary, Heresy, assuming that the nuns did things similar to the one in the story, acquiring money for the church in wrong ways Lissa, Violence, Bill, Wrath Honestly those two could easily be swapped Then the next two I feel I fit together enough to make sense Chad, being Fraud, considering his appearance of high social standing, perhaps buying himself into a position, his inability to talk, and the black ooze possibly being tar? On of the many punishments in this circle is being thrown into a pit of tar The Storyteller/ninth cage, being betrayal, for abandoning his position, attacking his boss, who just happened to be satan The only others are Fred not really fitting either remaining circles of Limbo or Gluttony, and Earl, who was heavily referenced to being Samson, a biblical hero Any thoughts? My only other idea is that the story teller just works for a gas station and took some shrooms or something
@savagegamerbear7409
4 жыл бұрын
Bruh, genius ending to a story like this... And it was all just a bad trip XD
@MexicanzChannel
3 жыл бұрын
Or guys, Fred is gluttony and earl is sloth?
@lucytucker8561
3 жыл бұрын
The word bob actually means 'money' in Ireland so that's probably why he calls the money-eyed monsters Bob.
@lonewolfbadassery
4 жыл бұрын
Love the way you say "and unhinged his fucking jaw". +1
@citrusuber8419
4 жыл бұрын
"I watch people in Cages, they did bad things and now they are here." Me: Wait so your a Jail Security Officer?
@dexterwaltz8884
3 жыл бұрын
That's what I said
@joshuamarquez693
3 жыл бұрын
“I would’ve posted this yesterday but…monsters wanting to eat my bones…. priorities you know?”
@Natalie66796
4 жыл бұрын
*Reads the title* You watch cage dancers? Okay, whatever suits you my guy
@qpN4SiRqp
4 жыл бұрын
Iv been waiting for this to be a completed work ....not disappointed Keep pushing out content MCP Would you consider doing "what happens when you right a letter to satan instead of Santa " ....I really enjoy your style of narration...you dont sound like a artificial voice bot from google and you bring the life to these characters that grips my attention
@scorpionsystem536
4 жыл бұрын
Absolutely love this! The ending was impeccable. 🤘
@E-Box
11 ай бұрын
I think it sucked.
@hannahmetzger6622
4 жыл бұрын
I _loved_ this story!!! Despite it being a creepypasta story, it had a VERY great Slice-of-Lifey vibe for it!! Great job, MCP, great job!! :3.
@torytellstales
3 жыл бұрын
When "F" was in the room that's when he started getting hungry, F stands for famine of the four horsemen
@jakeb.6487
3 жыл бұрын
OH WOW! Your work is so great! It legitimately sounds like each character has their own voice. LOVING it.
@-chloe-8728
4 жыл бұрын
her favorite movie is a serbian film? how charming...
@pcepenjor586
4 жыл бұрын
The movie title is pure bullshit.
@morbidmuppet
4 жыл бұрын
I was rather surprised to hear a reference to that.. film..
@AnubisX3
4 жыл бұрын
I kinda liked that movie
@-chloe-8728
4 жыл бұрын
@@AnubisX3 very edgy and cool
@AnubisX3
4 жыл бұрын
-chloe- Not at all, I just really like the movie. Don’t get why everyone is so sensitive about it. You do realize everything done was just an act right? None of it was real .
@decayedmother
4 жыл бұрын
I do love seeing some Lovecraftian themes in stories
@theazza2328
4 жыл бұрын
Great series to listen too, thanks for all the great content mrcreepypasta
@YaGuyALT
3 жыл бұрын
once I heard "yellow sign" I fucking knew it was gonna be hastur and I was right on the fucking moneu
@coyoteartist
4 жыл бұрын
Story character: it's weird a black ops group named Cerberus only has 4 people when the monsters had happily offed a group of 15 guards. Me: it's weird a black ops group named Cerberus has 4 members because Cerberus only has three heads.
@Axxtentac
4 жыл бұрын
Liked both of the narrations of you and Mr. Creeps, different feel but not a bad one.
@dominiquewoodards1410
4 жыл бұрын
I haven't seen it yet but heres my short theory as I think everybody has got everything else. The 7 cages at first were for the 7 sins, then 9 cages for the 9 circles of hell.
@claredyj2015
4 жыл бұрын
Have been binging on ur videos today! Really enjoyed this series, helped me get through cleaning bathrooms!
@toadflaxflower
3 жыл бұрын
'We give Chad a cup of green liquid' You mean a health smoothie?
@ginacamacho3554
4 жыл бұрын
I very much so enjoy your narration. Thank u
@hunterpoort6040
4 жыл бұрын
I love this CreepyPasta so much it’s by far my favorite
@descendingpixel2391
4 жыл бұрын
This kinda reminds me of the scp foundation
@bigttgothgf9478
4 жыл бұрын
I decided to doodle Lisa as I was listening this and I gave her a teddy bear with a ripped head because I didn't wanna draw hands :P. I didn't realise she would have one in the story. I was kinda happy about it so I thought I'd let you know.😁
@PaulosTheGamer
4 жыл бұрын
... that was the ENDING?
@finn_in_the_bin5263
4 жыл бұрын
makes sense though, if you think about it. the 'people' in the cages were monsters, inhuman creatures, and by the maddening hunger, the memory loss, and the uncontrollable feasting on human flesh it seemed the narrator was beginning to turn full Windigo
@officerwaifu6408
4 жыл бұрын
"Her favorite movie is A Serbian Film." *NO*
@pcepenjor586
4 жыл бұрын
The movie title is pure bullshit, second time stating that while reading the comments... Hate the producer that much lol
@austinrk30
4 жыл бұрын
I'm slow, what is the writer alluding to?
@AdamSmith-qr5hd
4 жыл бұрын
@@austinrk30 u and me brother
@AnubisX3
4 жыл бұрын
Petar Cepenjor why didn’t you like the movie? It really wasn’t that bad.
@trevnti
8 ай бұрын
Loved this story. I know there’s a lot of speculation so here’s what it sounds like to my brain. Dante’s Inferno - TD (ppl say the devil, imma say the Deceiver… they’re both Satan but since he changes his appearance is go with the latter) 1 - Limbo, the foyer to the other 9 levels. OP is originally here. Not an innocent soul but hasn’t warranted advancement to other levels Lust - Cassie Gluttony - Fred Wrath - Bill (assuming unlike Lisa he has no control) Greed - Bob Heresy - Mary Violence - Lisa (if we take the birth date during the witch trials as a major point) BecUse violence is regarded as a sin of beastiality. Premeditated. Many great kings were in this circle. Also she has Abba (Father) and Bezel (Satan) as friends (though Abba could also be abandon) Fraud - Chad Treachery- Earl is hard to place. Depending on if his Nazareth comment stands. Maybe that was considered treason. But the math doesn’t work. Maybe it’s for OP Cerberus is transformed into the 4 horsemen the guardians of hell.
@centipedicmonster5084
4 жыл бұрын
This is more interesting than scary
@PungentTowelWasTaken
4 жыл бұрын
love me some lovecraftian monsters in these stories :D
@glizzardwizard2401
4 жыл бұрын
I haven't slept after listening to these stories
@_BigRed_
4 жыл бұрын
Thinking the notification said part 4 be like:
@StarlightGlimmerr
Жыл бұрын
I love the reference to Lovecraft/Chambers :p The King In Yellow
@richardbrukardt7872
3 жыл бұрын
Another good SCP style story
@user-TheEngineer
3 жыл бұрын
"A Serbian Film" is also my favorite family film 😊
@kreuger2062
3 жыл бұрын
Very wholesome and fulfilling. 😃
@wojtekthegreat2115
4 жыл бұрын
"Jay Walkin'"
@wendydornoc6374
4 жыл бұрын
Can u do a story about defeating inner deamons.. One with the inner dialog.. Because i am quitting smoking and in the deep watchs of the night i have trouble.. Ty..
@bugpopss
4 жыл бұрын
he doesnt write the stories, only reads them. perhaps if you find a story like that you can suggest it to him?
@Bno-mw3js
4 жыл бұрын
i vew them all from my gray mirror and the lighter they get the darker my self becomes in these reflections
@Mountain8ear
3 жыл бұрын
Without any punctuation, I can only read this like you are a monotone robot. But then I realized, a robot wouldn't misspell the word view... Da*n it, what are you?!
@steves578
4 жыл бұрын
"Favorite film a Serbian film" Jesus F*cking christ that is dark
@vincentvalenzuela5718
4 жыл бұрын
Fred: pride (no mirrors) Cassie: lust (succubus?) Earl: gluttony (don't miss their food?) Mary: ???? Chad: envy (women problems) Bob: Greed (coinssss) Lisa: sloth (doesn't do anything?) Bill: wrath?
@Chilldude579
4 жыл бұрын
Hey I tried to do the same thing, I only got 3 but I'm confident about my guesses, cassey is most likely sloth since her cage is constantly electrocuted: most likely to keep her awake. Other than that Fred and Bob yeah same
@vincentvalenzuela5718
4 жыл бұрын
@@Chilldude579 but cassie is a succubus who eats human flesh, right? Lust is the sin of the flesh?
@ReqLeBeax
2 жыл бұрын
Very good story
@tytokumei
4 жыл бұрын
Hey, Mr. Creepypasta? In the name of this video, "Storytime" is missing its "T". Have a great day, love your story time :)
@centipedicmonster5084
4 жыл бұрын
No it's not...
@jessicafranks164
2 жыл бұрын
I just got a Wayfair ad before this lol
@kinkerton1344
4 жыл бұрын
Okay. That's very cool. But hear me out. Next part of Lily Madwhip?
@MagicTacoXB
4 жыл бұрын
I thought this was gonna be about ICE
@Abraham_Torres
Жыл бұрын
Where would the take the monsters every 3 days? And the new transfers are the same as the previous ?
@CezaMVO
3 жыл бұрын
Amazing story
@vincentvalenzuela5718
4 жыл бұрын
Abaddon and Beelzebub haha
@lavasharkandboygirl9716
2 жыл бұрын
Haaster? The king in yellow!? YOO
@carterjwilkerson
3 жыл бұрын
9:10 “Her favorite movie is A Serbian Film.” Oh. Okay now that’s DEFINITELY fucked up.
@kates5528
Жыл бұрын
Any chance you could make the volume a little louder on your narration and then when the commercials come on they won’t be so much louder than the story?
@what1shappening
4 жыл бұрын
This gives me slight SCP vibes
@psuedomyspace
4 жыл бұрын
This just feels like Black Mesa with extra steps.
@joshuaroberts8764
4 жыл бұрын
Her cousin is Betty White
@kates5528
Жыл бұрын
Never mind this is a crazy amount of commercials in here and multiple ones. I can’t listen to this anymore.
@robertathespider5311
4 жыл бұрын
I heard this forever ago and I was estatic to find it because I never finished it
@nukahyatt9802
3 жыл бұрын
I love me some Salem witch trial references
@WizzardJC
3 жыл бұрын
37:16 my bookmark
@StevyJoe
4 жыл бұрын
During quarantine it feels like being in a cage
@extratea605
4 жыл бұрын
why the hell do I always have to watch this shit at night it's actually scary me a little bit
@brockmiller1384
3 жыл бұрын
Math doesn’t add up on this one. Different inhabitant every 3 days and he’s worked there for 10 years, yet when he describes what religion or race the different cages were it only adds up to like 30-40isj
@l2j867
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you 😌
@xxdjxxx
Жыл бұрын
td, the fucking devil himself. took me to the very end to realize that
@toadflaxflower
3 жыл бұрын
A guy named TD IS HE LITERALLY ABBREVIATING 'THE DEVIL'
@randomperson6004
4 жыл бұрын
666 views....huh I wonder if it's a sign
@ChristopheRobyn
Жыл бұрын
So if the Cerberus response teams lead is "D" would that make them The Big D 😂 😂
@karmaakabane127
3 жыл бұрын
Wait does this mean that he's in a cage now? 46:20
@Eileen139
Жыл бұрын
thats what im thinking
@themachine2823
4 жыл бұрын
So it's the seven deadly sins, but I cant work out the last, 8 and 9.
@sammycinnamon7300
4 жыл бұрын
8 might be all the experiments to make people live longer. The gene splicing, bringing back extinct animals, cloning, elongating life beyond the norm, general meddling in gods work. And 9 well, when you dance with the devil, he calls the tune. He said he could go free when the others are caught, but he must help him. Cant work out what that's about so it looks like he'll be there for good.
@Onesaltysoul
4 жыл бұрын
The eighth sin actually used to be Despair. Not sure why it was removed to make 7.
@CAT-xd6vt
4 жыл бұрын
why do i now want to take this job
@juliancamacho3837
4 жыл бұрын
WAIT THATS IT!?!?
@lil-tater
4 жыл бұрын
i thought this was gunna be a preachy story about ICE, lol
@Josh-nu9gv
3 жыл бұрын
24:56 voice crack pog
@DRIFTKINGJR.
4 жыл бұрын
the talkitive mary says, "i thought the doll was a vessel for HASTUR. this is the name of a demi god from chuthulu. also known as the king in yellow, or just the yellow. Hastur is referenced in a few of the stories about that world. hastur has no true shape , but is always tentecales and wearing yellow. he is talked about in many of the novels. FUCKING PRICLESS!!!!
@dannynolovexx11xx39
4 жыл бұрын
Massachusetts was founded in 1780
@adalicortes4515
2 жыл бұрын
Is Lisa from the witch trials?
@anncharron9792
4 жыл бұрын
Isn't the thumbnail Juggernsut from 13 ghosts?
@gexill
4 жыл бұрын
Ummm 4th??
@ninthninja05
4 жыл бұрын
Satan doesn't seem that bad. He shouldn't have asked questions.
@centipedicmonster5084
4 жыл бұрын
Yeah just get 500 dollars a day. That's what I would do.
@Crippled_Crow
4 жыл бұрын
Consumes casey's food
@pxnda6142
2 жыл бұрын
storyime 🙂
@Chilldude579
4 жыл бұрын
1)fred: no mirrors= pride 2)cassey: always electrocuted cage= sloth 3)Earl: scruffy,?????? 4)Mary: religious,????? 5)Chad: black oozing liquid,???? 6)Bob: coins for eyes= greed 7)Lisa:little girl????
@fightvale57
4 жыл бұрын
you dont have a twitter tho?
@cozycommie8010
4 жыл бұрын
Cassie cage :)
@suzannemenuet947
4 жыл бұрын
Other than TD standing for The Devil, I don't get that ending.
@remp5529
4 жыл бұрын
He broke the rules so he must be punished. But since TD likes him he doesn't just send him to hell, but he can't just let him go either, so he puts the narrator in one of the cages(presumably for eternity).
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