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@aryalsuruchi3786
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you soo much for helping us !!!
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! We love being able to help so many of you!
@harjeetsingh9837
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks sir for giving this type of knowledge because its very useful for every one who has scared about diffcult to doing sach a long words and paraphase with questions if necessary its truely falls thanks criss
@hidinguy6289
4 жыл бұрын
Since I have published scientific papers before, I wasn't at all worried about task 1. But I was really scared about task 2. I completed this whole course in a day and got to know everything that I have to take care for task 2. Bam I got 7.5 in writing which I wasn't expecting at all. Thank you Chris.
@jaykumarnayani5675
4 жыл бұрын
Is it ok to use relevant phrasal verbs in an IELTS essay ?
@ayishadramani3283
2 жыл бұрын
Your method is superb. I got an 8 in writing. You're definitely the best,thank you.
@Ieltsadvantage
2 жыл бұрын
Great job!
@wynter298
Жыл бұрын
How? What did u do for writing task 2?
@ree_hub
3 жыл бұрын
I personally felt B is a better introduction. It was simple, comprehensible and answers the question perfectly.
@ISLAM_FOREVER315
2 жыл бұрын
👍
@soumyashrivastava1474
4 жыл бұрын
At first, I thought A is Band 8 because it has vocabulary and heavy words but after your explanation, I am convinced that B is more clear in easy words which is more relatable to the essay topic.
@nanditamaji5168
3 жыл бұрын
Introduction A is band 6 and introduction B is band 8 because it helps the reader to understand it more clearly.
@shillanraqib6855
4 жыл бұрын
I love your lessons, you are helping me to improve my English before I saw your videos and lessons I thought very differently about ielts exam and I’m very frightened but after I followed you my fear gone, you’re real teacher and psychologist , go on please
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
I'm so glad we have helped you overcome your fear. Just remember to always KEEP IT SIMPLE and that will really help!
@shillanraqib6855
4 жыл бұрын
Fiona Bently from now on we have to get rid from fake references .
@shaxnozaasqarova9254
3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for wonderful information on the introduction, Chris! There are myriad of tutors out there that give misleading info as a result test takers go astray and begin to think that IELTS is challenging them. I have found only some resources reliable. They are following: IELTS advantage, Liz IELTS as well as materials by Pauline Cullen. Highly recommend for the students who are aiming to pass the exam with flying colours to learn only from these resources!
@khandarmaatsedendamba3955
4 жыл бұрын
Hi Cris! You're really good at what you do. Thank you very much for helping a thousands of students from all over the world. Wish you all the best!
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks a million!
@karthinirajasekhar2456
4 жыл бұрын
Absolutely, Introduction B. It's quite obvious and answers the question clearly.
@shahidkhalid8090
3 жыл бұрын
Chris Pel is a living legend. Amazing teachers are very rare. You are humble and always make it very easy for us to understand the English especially in all the four sections of IELTS. And the great thing about you is that you give away almost everything for free. I wonder if a student subscribes to your paid course it will be more than brilliant.
@prototype225
3 жыл бұрын
Completely agree with you, Sir. I used Chris's writing strategies for my essays for writing task 2 and got 7 on the exam. So I can assure you, it works. Thanks, Chris, for you guidance, live long and prosper! P.S. Needless to say that you have to work on your essays and write many of them, using those strategies. You can't just take a strategy and write a band 9 essay at once. It doesn't work like this
@mateenm1995
4 жыл бұрын
I have seen many videos of many trainers. But this particular videos is absolutely on target as to how a person should be not just writing the essays but even communicating to people otherwise. Thank you very much.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You are very welcome!
@girly_girl5463
4 жыл бұрын
Oh My God Sir !!!!!!!! I'm so lucky that i'm watching this video and commenting while watching this. You don't know sir how u helped me today. i was confused how to write band 8 introduction. Now i can proudly say after watching your videos i will get band 8...Lots of love from #INDIA sir !!!!!!!!
@hemagullapalli5443
3 жыл бұрын
Hey how much score you got in your each module
@girly_girl5463
3 жыл бұрын
@@hemagullapalli5443 i haven't given exam yet due to corona virus😕
@opeyemiakinade4946
3 жыл бұрын
I'm writing my IELTS in January, your videos are amazing. Love from Nigeria !
@Mmm.5255
4 жыл бұрын
Simply amazing. Valuable advice for people aiming at higher score in IELTS or TOEFL exam. SIMPLIFYING is at its best in this lesson, and I share the same vision when it comes to smooth writing style. On the other hand, a memorised structure with cliches works better for people oriented at 5.5 to 7 score because simple and beautiful style requires months of training that students might not have. Furthermore, after 2 hours of stress, writing anything readable at all is already a considerable feat for an intermediate level student. I am grateful for this eye-opening video. I will use your advice in my exam and will let you know if it works.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you! We're happy to help.
@prashantmishra1994
4 ай бұрын
Hi Chris! I like your lesson because you emphasise the importance of communicating clearly and effectively. Introduction B is better and band 8 introduction.This is because the introduction says clearly what the writer wants to say. Thanks & regards.
@harmeetkukreja8750
4 жыл бұрын
Sir thanks for teaching us the correct way as per the examiner requirements. I used to frame like this. ist A general stmt abt the topic. 2nd paraphrase the topic in own words 3rd Tell the reader my plan. I have written in below way before reading instructions and then corrected too after going thru ur full video With the advancement in technology and the expansion of internet connectivity and availability, many things are now become accessible online, even education. That is why, majority of parents nowadays think, that there is no need for sending their children to school. I too agree with this thought as now knowledge can be directly imparted from home, because there is abundance of content already available on the web and is comparatively cheaper in price. Then I write 1 para on learning platforms on internet, 2nd on sky rocketed school feels, 3rd on parents themselves can teach children and then conclude
@jithinjose7057
4 жыл бұрын
Always use "to" after the word prefer. Using "Than" after prefer is wrong. example: I prefer tea to coffee the first sentence in B is another example
@kouamefrankjuniorkra2608
4 жыл бұрын
Hello sir. Very happy and impressed with your devotion in your job. Thanks for being so strived to help students pass their exam. Only God will reward you for this.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
It's my pleasure!
@zenosvelasco815
3 жыл бұрын
This lesson has been an eye-opener. I've been using a memorized formula in writing because it is what I learned from other youtubers or IELTS teachers. Thank you so much for changing my mindset before I take my exam 2 days from now.
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
That's great to hear! I'm glad it was helpful. For more helpful resources for your IELTS preparation, feel free to visit our website. You may also email our team if you have any questions. Best of luck with your test!
@chemist_biologist
21 күн бұрын
How did it go?
@sanz-km2uf
Жыл бұрын
Introduction B is more convenient to read and not written as complicated as A, but it genuinely introducts with the topic in the most appropriate way.
@jenniferukoh2058
4 жыл бұрын
Introduction B is way better! It's got clarity & originality; it's simple and very good foundation to achieve a well written essay. Thanks Mr. Chris.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome, Jennifer!
@callmecristal
2 жыл бұрын
WOW! Best video i've seen on this till now! Your advice is so good!
@kamrulhasan-yr9of
3 жыл бұрын
it's really helpful to me because where i need to focus write a standard essay for writing test
@gronk1
10 ай бұрын
Introduction B , because it is paraphrased question , clear and easy to understand
@gajeradhrupali3185
3 жыл бұрын
We are putting our 100% trust so i hope your teaching method and your suggestions are completely reliable God bless you.. Lots of love
@Aproudnurse
3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much sir❤ I have exam on 25th May and recently i gave mock test i scored L-8, R-8, W-7 and S- 7.5 , all because of your help.
@Ieltsadvantage
3 ай бұрын
Good luck on your upcoming exam. You got this!
@firdavsiy1961
4 жыл бұрын
I beyond like your Keep it Simple strategy 💪
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@joynjoku7739
4 жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this piece,I hope to apply them to the introductory part of my essay
@mehedihasan-ec2tm
2 ай бұрын
i think this video is enough for clearly understanding that how to write introduction perfectly,
@Ieltsadvantage
2 ай бұрын
Glad it helped! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
@behruzrustamov077
2 жыл бұрын
A is not easy to understand but B is simple and clear. A is band 6, B is band 8
@husseinalhamadani6323
4 жыл бұрын
introduction B is the best , because it uses simple words and show the main idea in a clear and a direct way , also it is show the opinion of the writer clearly at the end of the essay.
@handsomemehdi3445
3 жыл бұрын
First time I have seen we can write two reasons we chose, in the introduction
@shibanakano
4 ай бұрын
B is band 8 because it's simple yet quite easy to understand
@sarahoffin3508
5 ай бұрын
Oh Jesus Jesus I’m screaming 😱 in my head because I was on my way to fail because I’ve watched a video with that format,had written it down ,God has saved . Thank you Sir Pell. 🙌🏼
@Horticultureworkshop
Жыл бұрын
Your teaching and guiding style is brilliant, I suppose we are misleading by following faulty advice out there in different sources, I found your's is reliable. Many thanks Chris for everything
@diobrando1740
6 ай бұрын
B because i think she gave a quick intro and gave a reasoned position in short & well way
@mahammadjuraev4017
4 жыл бұрын
Hello teacher Chris. You explain clearly that introduction A is band 6.😁😁👍 It's amazing. Video is almost 22minuts. But it feels like 5minutes.👍Thank you.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm really glad you enjoyed the video. If you need any extra help getting ready for your IELTS test, please feel free to reach out at chris@ieltsadvantage.com. Thanks!
@heroicbandit5699
Жыл бұрын
Thank you sir. Really loved the way you explain things so easily 😀
@Ieltsadvantage
Жыл бұрын
You are most welcome. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@hesamkeshavarz4481
3 жыл бұрын
In the middle of the video, I paused no to forget to leave a comment, YOU ARE WNDERFUL. this what Ive been searching for. thank you
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! If you need further assistance with your IELTS test preparation, don't hesitate to send us an email at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
@hardeepchani3232
4 жыл бұрын
People who really want to get better score .. plz follow Chris ..I watched his video on writing Nd also took his correction service Nd I got 7 bands in writing .. thank u so much Chris
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Congratulations on your scores!
@sujith25in
4 жыл бұрын
To recapitulate this video I would like to say examiners have already seen a plethora of plethora's and they are in a dilemma. However this video is mesmerising for all the IELTS exam enthusiasts.
@ko-fanta100K
3 жыл бұрын
mesmerizing....enthusiasts... band 5 vocabulary..kkkkkkkk
@kainatchkainatch9413
3 жыл бұрын
Thanx a lot sir for such a good advice. In my first ielts exam my teacher also ask me to include a background statement and I only got band 6. But now I will definitely use your advice.
@bulbulislam5108
4 жыл бұрын
'B' is better than 'A'. Very simple english, easy to understand and side taking is very clear.
@stranger9216
Жыл бұрын
I paused the video after seeing the question in order to come up with my own introduction and I would like anyone to please give me feedback or correct any errors whatsoever in my introduction. Here it is: "Many people believe that getting formal education from schools is now irrelevant as children can learn more effectively at home through the internet. I strongly oppose this motion because I believe that the pupil-teacher relationship is important, children interacting and socializing with other kids at school is important and most importantly teachers explain better and help kids understand better than any internet application or program would." Thanks in advance.
@dildoragaziyeva6831
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you a lot for great explanation. With love from Uzbekistan.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You are welcome!
@user-cj3bc2tt1d
Жыл бұрын
B.. because its clear and easy to understand
@kennethedutie4205
4 жыл бұрын
it was really interesting and educative to hear
@waiwaiphyoei8487
Жыл бұрын
Introduction B is band 8 because it is easy to understand and it is perfectly introduced the question.
@grahammaodza7678
2 жыл бұрын
Introduction B is a band 8 than A which is a 6 because it has no spelling errors. For example the word 'institution' was incorrectly spelt, yet B uses a sentence and understandable structure sentence structure.
@gouthamanas7527
3 жыл бұрын
Hi Chris, Your guidance touched my ❤
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful! If there’s anything else our team of IELTS teachers can do to help you further, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
@kawserliton1329
Жыл бұрын
I personaly prefer B is better because it is very prefect structure and easy from others
@jasurbekabiyirqulov293
6 ай бұрын
You are the best teacher👏👏👏👏
@sivabalankaniapan6275
4 жыл бұрын
I personally think "A' is a band 8 student because it is very detailed
@musicwith_lyrics
3 жыл бұрын
Out of class. Such an amazing scene👏👏
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com. Thanks!
@samyog_10
Жыл бұрын
Thank you sir🙏 Live from Nepal🇳🇵
@djabirimc1735
Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot, I've been struggling how to write a convenient introduction ( plenty of sources and contradictions as well ) until I watched this amazing video, your method is perfectly logical.
@Ieltsadvantage
Жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@primeworld1830
3 жыл бұрын
"Memorizing everything is the blueprint for success" that's what we are taught, unfortunately in our demographics.
@SinghRandhawa1168
3 жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed your teaching..Best teacher❤ Thank u so so much😊
@mahdy3910
4 жыл бұрын
B! She didn’t force fancy words and it was straight to the point
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
I agree with you!
@genesisasuncion1545
Жыл бұрын
letter B, because they stated their position and answered the question.
@Tali2123
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you, it was very helpful, fortunately i have never done most of these mistakes, because i watched a lot of your lessons)
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@hashbrar1215
3 жыл бұрын
Thanks chris, u have articulate the introduction confusion nd it helped me alot to write my essay in an outstanding manner ......thks alot
@hallo-xp2wh
2 жыл бұрын
For me, plethora is a blacklist so, B is a band 8 essay!
@azizrepkash
2 жыл бұрын
Introduction B is clear,simple and natural!
@neelimajain7011
4 жыл бұрын
There are so much confusion on how to prepare for real IELTS , but since I've started following you, things are getting clearer day by day and now I know the main reason behind my failure - Following blindly the fake teachers over KZitem. Thanks Chris.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your kind words.
@huda21sparks
Жыл бұрын
Introduction A is BAND 6 essay: Because, 1. It starts with the general topic (irrelevant to the topic). 2. Position is not clear 3. Two reasons which will support the position are missing. 4. Last sentence is actually not very clear about what exactly the writer wants to convey. Introduction B is BAND 8-9 Because, 1. 1st sentence is paraphrased without moving out of scope of the topic and sticking to the main topic question. 2. Position is clear - Agree / Disagree 3. Reasons supporting the position are provided in simple and clear sentences.
@FresaraHa
4 жыл бұрын
You should make a video explaining why you don’t need to say “sir” when talking to people, unless you are like talking to someone really old, if you are a child speaking to an adult, or are like in the service industry or something talking to a customer. I just don’t understand why so many people talk to you as a sir in the commentaries 😂😂😂
@rafifaruqee7264
3 жыл бұрын
Because most of the Asian people address their teacher as sir such as India, Pakistan, Bangladesh etc...
@bazsandhu4467
3 жыл бұрын
@@rafifaruqee7264 right
@bazsandhu4467
3 жыл бұрын
Fresara it's way of giving respect to the teachers.
@gimhanimethshika2197
Жыл бұрын
band score 8 introduction is the answer B if I'm correct. answer A has some inappropriate details even though it has good vocabulary.
@zi7ad234
Жыл бұрын
I watched your videos so much that I know what is going to happen, A is band 6, and this is why: 1 - did not answer the question 2 - first sentence is probably copied and memorised 3 - trying to use advanced words such as "plethora"
@pavi8262
2 жыл бұрын
B is perfect because it is very easy to understand
@salmanpatnee1
3 жыл бұрын
I was wondering why not in a classroom? What a brilliant example for the importance of introduction. Very creative.
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the lesson.
@YuldoshevG
4 жыл бұрын
This new way of starting or conducting lessons outside is so great 🌱🌿🌳👍
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Glad you like them. I’m sick of sitting inside during the lockdown.
@Demi305
9 ай бұрын
"the money that they are getting is hooking them in" 😂 You are the funniest, best IELTS teacher I have ever seen. Thank you so much for all the help.
@aidamametkanova7686
4 жыл бұрын
It's the most informative video about ielts which I've ever seen
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@h7re201
2 жыл бұрын
Hello Cris, this is what exactly I am looking for, instead of using cram words we need to use original words from our own mind.
@aswathysnair2609
3 жыл бұрын
The best video about ielts writing I have seen ever.
@sureshbudhaprithi3446
2 жыл бұрын
'B' is better since the writer is clear about his standpoint and has given reasons for his answer.
@MohamadouFnu
Ай бұрын
B is better first is do paraphrasing the question, secondly he respond give is opinion properly to the question and finally give what is going to develop in the body paragraphs.
@abdulazizyusuf1439
3 жыл бұрын
In my opinion introduction B, Because introduction B is fully developed and organized.
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Great answer! If you want to improve more on your writing skills, feel free to send us an email at chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@almazraimakhunov6928
4 жыл бұрын
I don't know why i did not subscribe to your chanel when i came across to it for the first time....but know surely i can say i am your loyal subscriber)))
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@almazraimakhunov6928
4 жыл бұрын
And hopefully i would be able to score IELTS Band 6 by watching your video lessons)))
@kiran5945
2 жыл бұрын
I saw many videos related writing...but this video is out of the world...i can say.....i just love the way he teaches..❤️..every concept is going to clear to me....❤️ Respect..
@Ieltsadvantage
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your feedback! If you have any questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@benojirshakina4971
2 жыл бұрын
Introduction B is for Band 8
@tatianacunhaelias5977
4 жыл бұрын
Another excellent video, thank your Chris for all your helping!
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@owennjobvu607
4 жыл бұрын
Your explanations are so easy to grasp.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@komaldeepkaur2490
3 жыл бұрын
I think B is far better because it contains no surprise and the opinion is clear
@roshnijayadas1003
Жыл бұрын
Now I understand that why I got band 6.thank u
@Ieltsadvantage
Жыл бұрын
That's great, Roshni! We still have a range of paid and free courses available that can help you in writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email and we'll be happy to assist.
@shakilamumtaz2833
4 жыл бұрын
I really like all your lessons. These are so useful and to the point. Thanks for your great service Mr. Chris
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome and I'm so glad you find them useful!
@fidelischinedumodozie6802
2 жыл бұрын
introduction B is preferable because is simple and clear
@Ieltsadvantage
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for participating! If you need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS test, please email us anytime and we'll be happy to help.
@maryamalzaid4441
Жыл бұрын
B is easy to understand and its words are simple
@sarmadkashani5875
4 жыл бұрын
Thank you Chris! It was a very helpful demonstration.
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@rajsharma551
4 жыл бұрын
You expounded requisite correction in writing with logic.. It's really effective thanks.
@nikitampmaurya
10 ай бұрын
My introduction: Nowadays, several adults believe that it is not necessary to enroll children in traditional schools as presently abundant resources are available online offering proper education. I completely agree,that children can learn much better at home using Internet, because homeschooling has numerous advantages, such as no peer pressure and freedom to study subjects that are relevant.
@harishamayunhamayun1415
4 жыл бұрын
Absolutely B is Best introduction .I can understand it easily so I am with b
@RashidAli-zh7sw
3 жыл бұрын
Hi sir,you r reallyhelping ielts stutents productively.cz all others r just claiming n claiming in itself is deceit.weldon
@Ieltsadvantage
3 жыл бұрын
Hi there, we'd be happy to help you further improve your writing skills. You can join our free 5 Day Writing Challenge course. You can click here to register for free: 5dc.ieltsadvantage.com/ If you'd like expert IELTS guidance or feedback on your work, please feel free to contact our team here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@ramrakhasinghpatwari5816
4 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much sir for this effective introduction.. I was scrolling the effective introduction. Thanks again update the effective introduction for students 🙏🙏
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed the video!
@adrianaperico3137
4 жыл бұрын
I really do like the way you explain it! 😉
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks Adriana! If you need any extra help getting ready for your IELTS test, please feel free to contact me at chris@ieltsadvantage.com. Thanks!
@sachinverma6795
Жыл бұрын
Thanks Sir for Your Great Efforts 🙏 Love From India 🤗
@Ieltsadvantage
Жыл бұрын
Most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@firdavsiy1961
4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the cool video You always think about students and their results We appreciate your kindness and fairness Thanks a lot 🤩🤩👍👍
@Ieltsadvantage
4 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Helping students succeed is our main focus and we love doing it! :)
@michellesuba1752
3 жыл бұрын
Introduction B because it is simple to understand what the topic is all about.
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