Five months ago, task one essays were too complicated for me, but after I watched your videos. They will look like a piece of cake to write all types of essays from that moment on. you are the best, I appreciate you so much.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your kind words! I'm thrilled to hear that my videos have helped you with task one essays. Keep up the great work, and feel free to reach out if you have any more questions in the future! 😊📝
@NabijonMashrapov
7 ай бұрын
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@malikbabar9997
5 ай бұрын
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@ieltstimeZ
5 ай бұрын
Glad you found it useful!
@annmurugi3348
Жыл бұрын
I tried it on my own it was quite challenging, but you have really simplified it ,I truly appreciate, do you do private lessons
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your kind comment! I'm glad to hear that the video was helpful and that it simplified the writing process for you. About private lessons, I'm afraid my schedule is so tight for now, but if you have any specific questions or need further clarification on any writing topics, feel free to ask in the comments. Keep up the great work and stay tuned for more helpful content!
@emmanueldodoo1699
7 ай бұрын
IELTS ACADEMIC 18, TEST 1, WRITING TASK 1 [INTRODUCTION + OVERVIEW] *The line graph provides data about the percentage of population living in the cities of four Asian countries between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.* Overall, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia experienced a consistent upward rise in population whilst Philippines encountered a fluctuation. All four countries are projected to reach their peak by 2040. Comparatively, both Malaysia together with Indonesia witnessed a rapid surge whereas Philippines plus Thailand observed a gradual increase.
@ieltstimeZ
7 ай бұрын
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@viveksai8326
4 күн бұрын
Very beautifully explained thank you
@ieltstimeZ
3 күн бұрын
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@madushankaekanayaka8340
4 ай бұрын
Nicely illustrated. Thank you!
@ieltstimeZ
4 ай бұрын
Glad you found it useful.
@emmanueldodoo1699
7 ай бұрын
I scored band 7 with your videos. Kudos to you sir.
@ieltstimeZ
7 ай бұрын
That's fantastic news! Congratulations on achieving a Band 7 score! Your hard work has definitely paid off.
@emmanueldodoo1699
7 ай бұрын
Sure
@kieunguyen3860
11 күн бұрын
It is well explained lesson, so it is easy to understand. Thank you for your dedication to help us. In the overall section, is that ok if we do not put comparision the data in general?
@ieltstimeZ
3 күн бұрын
I'm glad you found it useful. About your question, an overview is important as it shows your overall understanding of the trends, changes, or main features of the graphs. As long as you mention the main points without including specific details (like numbers), you're on the right track. However, it’s usually important to highlight the differences to clearly show the overall trend/s.
@kieunguyen3860
3 күн бұрын
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@PouyaRahimi-zg6jz
4 ай бұрын
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@ieltstimeZ
4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your amazing support and kind words! I'm glad you find my videos helpful. Stay tuned for more! 😊❤️🙏
@nileshdesilva
Жыл бұрын
Awsome. I really learned a lot.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@Maria-nz3mz
Жыл бұрын
Please make video on type of sentences with examples like SIMPLE/COMPLEX AND COMPUND
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Sure, will do!
@emmanueldodoo1699
7 ай бұрын
My Intro: The line graph illustrates the percentage of population living in the cities of four different Asian countries between 1970 and 2020 with projections for 2030 and 2040.
@ieltstimeZ
7 ай бұрын
Well done! the paraphrase captures the main idea of the statement.
@AnjelieBulalayao
8 ай бұрын
THANK YOU OR EXPLAINING IT CLEARLY SIR
@ieltstimeZ
8 ай бұрын
Glad you found it useful!
@alirezabehnamnia1550
Ай бұрын
❤❤❤❤Thanks for good points
@ieltstimeZ
28 күн бұрын
I'm glad you found the points helpful😊
@muzammiljavedshaikh2903
Жыл бұрын
Loved it! But I am uncertain if this is band 9 content; the vocabulary seems to be too simple. What do you think?
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the sample and found it helpful. While I cannot provide a score as I am not a certified examiner, I believe that the vocabulary used effectively conveyed the information. However, it's important to note that achieving a high score in IELTS writing involves more than just using advanced vocabulary. The accuracy and coherence of your description, as well as the overall quality of your writing, are also essential. To achieve a high band score, you should focus on demonstrating a clear understanding of the task, organizing your ideas effectively, presenting them coherently, and using accurate grammar. Keep up the good work, and feel free to ask for further assistance if needed. Best of luck with your IELTS preparation!
@wheezy_lilhot3106
Жыл бұрын
@@ieltstimeZ But I personally think it might be better if you add some comparisons.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
@@wheezy_lilhot3106 Thank you for your comment. You are absolutely right! Adding comparisons can indeed enhance this writing and provide more depth to the description. For example: From 1970 to 2020, Malaysia and Indonesia saw remarkable increases in their urban population percentages. Malaysia's urban population rose from 30% to 75%, showing a significant surge compared to Indonesia's growth, which increased from about 12% to 50%. Comparatively, Thailand's growth was ...
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Feel free to type your answer for this line graph in the comment section, and I will do my best to provide feedback on a selection of responses. You are not alone!
@doctorsvlog4286
11 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for this video
@ieltstimeZ
11 ай бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@mohammadidhrisidris6856
Жыл бұрын
Yes I am agree ok thank you sir ❤
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Thanks for your comment. You don't need 'am' in 'I agree with you.'❤️
@farhanaakhter7969
Жыл бұрын
It helped me a lot ❤. Please upload more regular videos like this
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Glad you found it useful. Sure, I will do my best.😊
@mdhannan5579
10 ай бұрын
Thank you
@ieltstimeZ
10 ай бұрын
Most welcome
@paulahuckleberry6678
6 ай бұрын
Hello, can just use instead if "it had since.." just write "it continued to ..."?
@ieltstimeZ
6 ай бұрын
Yes, sure. It is a simpler version.
@nanakofisompahene7853
8 ай бұрын
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@ieltstimeZ
8 ай бұрын
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the video! 😊
@iris_1246
9 ай бұрын
awesome video
@ieltstimeZ
9 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it
@sebnemferah9089
7 ай бұрын
First of all, I want to say " thank you" for all those valuable content you provided in your channel. I will take my first ielts exam next sunday and ı prepare wih your videos. Could you review my essay if you have time ? Thank you in advance. The graph illustrates portion of the total population of Asian countries (Philippines, Malaysia,Thailand, Indonesia) that live in the urban areas for the time period starting from 1970 to 2020 in ten years of time intervals. Furthermore, estimations are made for 2030 and 2040. Overall, urban population in Philippines increased slightly from 1970 to 2020 whereas percentage of Thailand, Malaysia and Indonesia living in the cities rose substantially. Malaysia was the country facing the most dramatic increase. The estimations for 2030 and 2040 show that urban population is expected to increase further. In Philippines, from 1970 to 2010, urban population only slightly escalated from 30% of population to %45 of population whereas a rise of 10% of population is expected from 2020 to 2040. Thailand faced to higher increase of urban population compared to Philippines with 30% increase from 1970 to 2020. However, an increase of 15% is estimated from 2020 to 2040. A dramatic increase in urban population was seen from 1970 to 2020 with a consistent upward movement for Malaysia. In 1970, the percentage of city population was only 30% and it reached 75% at the end of 2020. Although overall upward movement was consistent, highest escalation was seen from 1990 to 2000. Urban population of Indonesia grew considerably from 1970 to 2020. Initial percentage of the population living in urban areas was 12% in 1970 while the percentage was increased to 47%. For future, a growth of %10 is expected for Indonesia from 2020 to 2040.
@ieltstimeZ
7 ай бұрын
I'm happy to hear that you've found my content helpful! Best of luck on your upcoming test. You're making great progress, and I'm confident that you'll perform well on your exam! Now, let's focus on refining your essay. Firstly, it's important to group similarities and differences together in a logical manner. Try dedicating separate paragraphs to countries that share similar trends, discussing their changes comprehensively. This will enhance the clarity and organization of your analysis. Secondly, pay attention to the link between your sentences. Using appropriate linking words will improve the flow and coherence of your essay. Take care to transition smoothly between ideas for a more polished presentation. Lastly, while your language is generally clear and suitable for an academic essay, be mindful of minor grammatical errors such as missing articles and inconsistencies in tense usage (e.g.("Malaysia was the country facing" versus "Thailand faced")) Keep up the excellent work!
@emmanueldodoo1699
6 ай бұрын
IELTS ACADEMIC 18, TEST 1, WRITING TASK 1 [INTRODUCTION + OVERVIEW + BODY 1 + BODY 2] *The line graph provides data about the percentage of population living in the cities of four Asian countries between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.* Overall, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia experienced a consistent upward rise in population whilst Philippines encountered a fluctuation. All four countries are projected to reach their peak by 2040. Comparatively, both Malaysia together with Indonesia witnessed a rapid surge whereas Philippines plus Thailand observed a gradual increase. Beginning from the year 1970 to 2020, both Malaysia and Indonesia saw considerable increase in percentage population from 30% to approximately 75% and about 12% to around 50% respectively. Furthermore, these nations have been estimated to experience gradual growth reaching their peaks at 80% and 60% accordingly by 2040. Meanwhile, the population in Philippines and Thailand increased slightly from a little above 30% to 50% and just under 20% to 30% individually for the first twenty years period. Afterwards, Philippines decreased slowly to almost 40% in 2010 and it has since continued to rise to approximately 45% in 2020. Nonetheless, Thailand has continuously witnessed an upward rise reaching 30% in 2020. These two countries are conjectured to encounter growth peaking at about 55% and 50% independently by 2024.
@ieltstimeZ
6 ай бұрын
Well done! It is a good overview with specific points. You successfully covered the main points. Just be careful with articles (saw a considerable increase). ‘Independently’ and ‘accordingly’ are inappropriate words in this context; you could use ‘respectively’ or different structures to avoid this trap.
@paulahuckleberry6678
5 ай бұрын
hey I cannot find your solution for the writing test 4 book 18 (prices on metals) can you share again? TY
@ieltstimeZ
5 ай бұрын
Yeah, sorry, I deleted the video a few days ago because I want to rewrite and post it again soon.
@paulahuckleberry6678
5 ай бұрын
great I'm a active follower of your channel my test is due in April 28@@ieltstimeZ
@ieltstimeZ
5 ай бұрын
@@paulahuckleberry6678 Thank you for your support! I'm glad to hear you're finding value in the content. I'm confident you'll do fantastic on your test! Keep pushing forward!
@nguyenthaolinh3789
Жыл бұрын
Could you please to give me your feedback about the following answer. Thank you (that's too long, but I'm not sure where to cut): The line graph gives information about how the urban population changed in four countries in Asia over half a century (1970 - 2020) and predicted figures for two years: 2030 and 2040. Overall, while there was an upward trend in the percentage of people living in urban areas over the period given in all countries, growth speed between them was different and Malaysia experienced the fastest increase compared to other countries in the group. With the Philippines and Malaysia, in the beginning of the period, both had a similar urban population rate, at around 30%. Over the following years, while Malaysia recorded a steady increase, with total urban people rising to about 75% in 2020, the figures of the Philippines fluctuated and by 2020 had reached 45%, which was far lower than its counterpart. It is predicted that in the next two decades (2030 and 2040), the percentage of dwellers in both countries will rise, with Malaysia climbing to over 80%, and the Philippines reaching 60%. Thailand and Indonesia had lower figures than the above countries, at under 20%. However, Indonesia had a faster growth than Thailand, despite initially having the lower figures. From 1970 to 2020, the percentage of Indonesians living in cities increased significantly, from just 13% rising to around 50%, standing in the second position in the list. With Thailand, the figure rose gradually and in 2020 was about 30%, at the bottom of the list. It is estimated that in 2040, Indonesia and Thailand will see an increase in urban population rate, at 60% and over 45% respectively.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Well done! You have effectively highlighted the main trends and compared the percentages. However, there are a few minor suggestions for improvement: Your paraphrase is good enough, but your overview's second part needs revision. The graph does not explicitly provide data on 'growth rates' or specific numerical values for comparison, so using terms like "growth speed" and "fastest increase" may not be appropriate or accurate. Instead, it would be more accurate to describe the trends based on the percentages shown in the graph. For example, you could mention that Malaysia experienced the highest percentage of urban population throughout the period. Body paragraph one: 1- "total urban people rising to about 75%" - Instead of "total urban people," it would be more accurate to say "urban population" or "percentage of urban population" rising to about 75%. 2- "the figures of the Philippines fluctuated" - While it is true that the urban population percentage for the Philippines showed fluctuations, it would be better to specify the range of these fluctuations to provide a clearer picture. For example, you could say "the urban population percentage for the Philippines fluctuated between X% and Y% over the given years." 3- The number for the Philippines in 2040 is not 60%. Body paragraph two: 1- "despite initially having the lower figures" - To provide more clarity, specify that "the lower figures" refer to Indonesia's initial urban population percentage compared to Thailand. 2- Consider the same points about the 'speed' I mentioned above. 3- Instead of "at the bottom/top of the list," use 'the highest, the lowest, the second most, etc.'
@nguyenthaolinh3789
Жыл бұрын
@@ieltstimeZ thank you so much for spending your valuable time to check and correct my essay. That means a lot to me.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
@@nguyenthaolinh3789 You're welcome. I'm glad you found it helpful😊.
@ronjason
11 ай бұрын
thanks for giving feedback @@ieltstimeZ
@chukwuemekaokenyi1024
10 ай бұрын
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@Ch-rv2cp
6 ай бұрын
Please give some advices, thx. Do I really need to include all countries into my writing task 1? The line chart illustrates the proportion of the individuals living in urbans in four Asian nations between 1970 and 2020, with expectations for 2030 and 2040. Overall, the percentage of Philippines fluctuated, while the remains increased steadily between 1970 and 2020. Moreover, the trends of every statistic are predicted to be upward from 2020 to 2040, with the proportion of Malaysia expected to attain its highest point in 2040. In 1970, the figure of Philippines was just over 30%, ranking first and reaching its peak of nearly 50% in 1990 and before showing a mild decline after two decades later. However, in next 20 years, it is anticipated to grow stably to almost the same level as in 1990, securing the third position. By 2020, the number of Malaysia rose significantly by more than 40% over a span of 50 years, surpassing others categories and predicted to experience slight growth of just above 80% until 2040. The statistic of Indonesia was the smallest in 1970, with approximately 15%, forecast to climb steadily to about 60% and eventually taking over the second rank.
@ieltstimeZ
6 ай бұрын
Yes, you need to include them all, but you shouldn’t describe every single point; instead, you should group similarities and contrast differences. Your sample is good, but adding more details will improve it. I mean you should use phrases like ‘it will grow from ____ to _____ /it decreased by 20% over 20 years from ____ to ____. ‘ Grouping similarities, as you did in some cases, will help you avoid mentioning all years. For example, from 1990 to 2010, it reduced steadily to around 40% but is anticipated to grow to around X over the next two decades.
@Ch-rv2cp
6 ай бұрын
Appreciation for your help, I will improve it.😄@@ieltstimeZ
@rafsanayan7443
Жыл бұрын
Thanks boss 😃🎉
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Welcome 😊
@SN24-r2p
Жыл бұрын
Where is the comparison?
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
I did include some sentences that explicitly show the comparisons, such as the following examples, but for sure, there is room for improvement: 1- From 1970 to 2020, Malaysia and Indonesia saw remarkable increases in their urban population percentages from 30% to 75% and about 12% to 50%, respectively. (Comparison between Malaysia and Indonesia) 2- Moreover, estimations indicate further growth for these countries, with numbers climbing to around 82% and 60% for Malaysia and Indonesia, respectively. (Comparison between Malaysia and Indonesia) 3- Meanwhile, The Philippines' urban population rose from about 31% to 48% between 1970 and 1990. Although there was a slight decrease to around 42% in 2010, it has since continued to grow and is anticipated to peak at about 55% in 2040. (Comparison between different years for The Philippines) 3- Similarly, Thailand went up in 2020 compared to 1970, with numbers rising to about 30% from 19%. The country's urban population is estimated to surge, with a rise to approximately 49% in 2040. (Comparison between different years for Thailand)
@kushanisajinika2169
Жыл бұрын
❤Thank you
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@user-pu2gj4ge1w
4 ай бұрын
Hello when if i write like your sample, what band score i may get?
@ieltstimeZ
4 ай бұрын
I'm not a certified examiner, so I can't give you a score. Instead, I suggest focusing on describing the data clearly, providing a concise overview, and using relevant vocabulary and grammar. Avoid worrying about the score and concentrate on improving the quality of your writing.
@nhihoang348
6 ай бұрын
i think this essay lacks details, it shows lots of surpassing points but they werent mentioned in the essay.
@ieltstimeZ
5 ай бұрын
Thank you for your feedback. In IELTS Task 1, summarizing data is key, often involving grouping information rather than detailing every point. I aimed for a concise summary of urban population changes but I'll consider adding more details for clarity in future tasks.
@Learningwithbenefits
3 ай бұрын
Why we use numbers In overview?
@ieltstimeZ
3 ай бұрын
When we say no numbers in the overview, it means no detailed data points from the graph (e.g., rose from ___ to ___). Mentioning the year is totally fine as the graph shows information about both the past and the future.
@abillashom8623
2 ай бұрын
Sir Nice talking to you sir . I watched couple of video of yours, i have gone through lot of practise so far watching your videos only sir . I will drop you my way of answer sir, would you mind check it and read it And please let me know the band score which would you give me for my answer sir
@ieltstimeZ
2 ай бұрын
Sure, feel free to share your answer, and I'll read it and provide feedback. However, I won't be giving it a band score.
Sir pls provide Cambridge 18 test 4 task 1 sample answer i couldn't find it pls
@ieltstimeZ
5 ай бұрын
Sorry for that. I've deleted the sample, but I'll make sure to write another one soon.
@khangvo6572
Жыл бұрын
do we need the comparison in line graph? in this example, i cannot see it
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
The answer to the first part of your question (do we need the comparison in a line graph?) is that we need to make comparisons where relevant, and it is not just about line graphs; it is about all types of writing task 1. However, to be honest, it is mostly relevant, and we should do that. About this sample, I did include some sentences that explicitly show the comparisons, such as the following examples, but for sure, there is room for improvement: 1- From 1970 to 2020, Malaysia and Indonesia saw remarkable increases in their urban population percentages from 30% to 75% and about 12% to 50%, respectively. (Comparison between Malaysia and Indonesia) 2- Moreover, estimations indicate further growth for these countries, with numbers climbing to around 82% and 60% for Malaysia and Indonesia, respectively. (Comparison between Malaysia and Indonesia) 3- Meanwhile, The Philippines' urban population rose from about 31% to 48% between 1970 and 1990. Although there was a slight decrease to around 42% in 2010, it has since continued to grow and is anticipated to peak at about 55% in 2040. (Comparison between different years for The Philippines) 3- Similarly, Thailand went up in 2020 compared to 1970, with numbers rising to about 30% from 19%. The country's urban population is estimated to surge, with a rise to approximately 49% in 2040. (Comparison between different years for Thailand)
@user-hj3dx2fm6q
Жыл бұрын
no sentence variation who have similar sentence for two time in single body one paragraph..
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your feedback! I believe the paragraph provides sufficient variation for clearly presenting statistical data. However, if you think otherwise, please clarify. Your input is appreciated!
@user-hj3dx2fm6q
Жыл бұрын
@@ieltstimeZ sir could you make video again on this same task in more advanced way. sir plss try to make. thnks
@user-hj3dx2fm6q
Жыл бұрын
otherwise thnku so much for your reply.
@AspireMan-b1g
Жыл бұрын
Hello , I can't thank you enough for your time and efforts. Thanks alot for this video. However I have couple questions. 1. Why do you say Philippines' not Philippines's 2. Is it correct to say like "Thailand went up in 2020 compared to 1970, with numbers rising to about 30% from 19%". its not Thailand that grew but the population. Also if you dont mind , could you please provide me with any feedback on how I could improve my writing task 1 essays. I have been struggling alot. Thanks in advance.. here is my essay: The graph illustrates data showing the proportion of people in 4 different Asian countries who live in cities between 1970 to 2020 as well as an anticipation for the percentage from 2030 to 2040. Overall , as the data suggests, Malaysia shows the highest percentage of population in both year intervals . Thailand and Philippines's population fluctuated , and Indonesia's population has a steady increase . During 1970 , Philippines and Malaysia's population was present more in cities, averaging about 30% of the total population, while Indonesia and Thailand's population rounded up to 20% being in cities. Next , all of the countries showed a gradual increase of population living in cities except Philippines's population fluctuated. In 2020 , Malaysia's percentage remained the highest, about 75% , while Indonesia's percentage was roughly 50%. Thailand and Philippines's proportion was both less than half. According to the future vision, the information provides an anticipation which shows an increase in all of the 4 countries's population living in cities. Apparently, in 2040 , Malaysia's population will constitute approximately 80% of the cities , 60% for Indonesia , and about 50% for both Philippines and Thailand.
@ieltstimeZ
Жыл бұрын
Hi. You're welcome. I'm glad you found the feedback helpful. Regarding your first question, when a singular noun already ends in an "s," there is some flexibility in how the possessive form is written. Both 's and s' are considered acceptable. For example, you can write James's car OR James' car. Similarly, for 'Philippines,' both Philippines's and Philippines' are considered grammatically correct. As for your second question, it is clear from the overall context of the essay that I'm discussing the urban population percentages in different Asian countries, so adding the word ‘population’ again may be redundant. Here are some specific feedback points: 1- Your paraphrase is good enough; just consider writing 'proportions' and 'anticipations' in the plural. However, your overview seems somewhat unclear. The graph shows both past and future data, so it should be evident from your overview what generally happened or will happen to the percentages. I mean, the reader should be able to understand the changes even without looking at the graph. To check this, you can give your essay to someone to read without the graph and ask if they understand the changes. 2- The way you present the data in your body paragraphs sometimes is vague, and the reader does not grasp the changes. To avoid this problem, you should mention both the previous and future percentages. For instance, instead of '…rounded up to 20% being in cities / averaged around 30% / constitute approximately 80% of the cities, 60% for Indonesia, and about 50%…," you should clearly state what the percentages were and what they will be. For example, "rose from …% to …% between 1970 and 1990." In other words, you need to use language that describes changes, such as 'increased' or 'declined significantly.' 3- When you mention 'fluctuated,' you should show the range 'from… to…'; otherwise, it will be unclear. 4- Instead of 'the information provides an anticipation which shows…,' you should use 'is anticipated/projected/expected/forecast.' With these minor grammatical and clarity improvements, your essay will be even stronger. Keep up the good work!
@abillashom8623
2 ай бұрын
Will you correct my answer and let me the band score i get from you sir . Will you do that for me sir ?
@ieltstimeZ
2 ай бұрын
Sure, feel free to share your answer, and I'll read it and provide feedback. However, I won't be giving it a band score.
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