Hey there! Thanks for watching this video. If you have any requests for future video lesson, please let me know :-)
@ruaori2357
7 жыл бұрын
speaking part 2+3; writing task1 +2. Please release more videos! really useful!
@fastcoable
6 жыл бұрын
Hi Lee, Thanks for all videos, Can you please put sample essay for other topics ? Thanks again
@katerinanatsu4644
6 жыл бұрын
thank you
@godfatherpart1
5 жыл бұрын
IELTS Mast
@ShamaunKabir
3 жыл бұрын
I need a book of sample answer task-2 Please share one...
@vimikoolwant8499
6 жыл бұрын
Got L8.5 R8.5 W7 S8 overall 8 thanks to you
@burimshala4377
7 жыл бұрын
I am really grateful! I wish you success on your wonderful way you have chosen to help us on our way to reaching IELTS intending score!
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I'll keep working hard on it.
@samsoroush481
5 жыл бұрын
Hello dear, you are the best of best teachers ever, you are master of teaching, excellent detail explanations , thank you for your time and care .
@iurifarenzena
7 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the video. Glad you posted a sample answer too. Keep this awesome series going.
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Will do!
@neelamjangra4453
7 жыл бұрын
It was really helpful. I had many doubts in essay writing. Now i can write a good essay
@cheabnara844
3 жыл бұрын
I absolutely like your sample, so may I suggest you more samples
@architafitrian436
6 жыл бұрын
It's really helpful for me. Thanks so much!!!
@arifayeasmin6032
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your video and your sample answer. I very glad that I found you finally. your channel is very helpful.
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Thank you for the lovely comment :-)
@niroshanfernando3745
6 жыл бұрын
All are very clear and I was luck to find such a help full video. Big thanks for the great video...
@arslankiani6707
5 жыл бұрын
Thankyou very much! This is the part, where I was lacking. We, however, need to know how you put cohesion and coherence among ideas?
@sumitbabel5415
2 жыл бұрын
Could you please highlight the mistake in the below essay --------- Some people endorse that tertiary education should be emphasized base on future job prospects, on the other hand, few people feel that children should be encouraged to choose whatever they feel to study. In my point of view we must foster a child to choose whichever stream of subject they like, because they can do wonders in the filed for which they are passionate about. As a worried parents or guardians we can force out child to choose the subjects which seems to be more career oriented , for example engineering or medical streams. But we must not forget that even though the children will complete the education but they will never be able to outshine in the respective stream. This is predominantly the most prevalent reason for many people to change their career path as much later stage. Also the results are normally average, leaving children more frustrated. Because they are unable to give their 100% in what they dislike. However, if the child is encouraged to choose the subjects at university , they can not only produce outstanding results but also can make fortunes. The obvious reasons are , firstly they will work with passion and dedication. Secondly they of course will take an ownership of their wok and hence will try to make best of whatever they do. To conclude, even though there are some reasons to force a children to take up course which looks more careen oriented, but to get the amazing results we must support out children to choose whatever they like the most.
@jartagniancopria1120
7 жыл бұрын
thanks man, these helped a lot. My exam is in two days!
@fawadshah8406
7 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all this,please guide us about grammatical mistakes that are very common in both writing task.
@suongdao8847
6 жыл бұрын
thank you for your amazing work. i enjoy it a lot. it is really helpful. Pls make video about Advantages and disadvantages essay.
@pematenjisherpa5557
7 жыл бұрын
thank you very much its very useful ......more and more please .
@Esther010
5 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your sample essay 😁have a good day
@kanizfatema9908
7 жыл бұрын
Thnx dear, U r so helpful person....
@trendingvideos7756
6 жыл бұрын
Hello sir please. Make a video, how to find reading answer
@ucanhnguyen6841
7 жыл бұрын
Amazing videos from you, Ielts Master Lee. Thank you in advanced!
@samiyusif9000
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you.
@civilpro9537
4 жыл бұрын
What is the main difference between task 1 and task 2 of IELTS writing ?
@meisaahvazi3637
6 жыл бұрын
amazing tips thank you
@EngChinese
6 жыл бұрын
Great thanks!!!
@samiyusif9000
7 жыл бұрын
Great thanks..,
@swatibeniwal5656
7 жыл бұрын
Sir, you have written only one idea in each paragraph. Can I add 2-3 ideas using "In addition to this, Moreover, Also" types of words for coherence?
@prabhjotdeol1466
6 жыл бұрын
Thank You for the video 🙏
@HARPREETSINGH-nh4fv
5 жыл бұрын
thanks really helpful .
@thanhloan4443
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! It's really useful for me .
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that!
@cyrilsilvester7535
7 жыл бұрын
thanks a lot sir please update more videos on different topics with sample answers
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
I'll keep working on it!
@priyanapb3848
7 жыл бұрын
super ielts class in writing task 2
@neelamjangra4453
7 жыл бұрын
Give some tips to write conclusion too . Some samples like u did in intro part
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
It's coming :-)
@vikramavirneni4561
7 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for cosidering my request .....
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching my videos! I hope they're helpful for you. If you have other good ideas definitely let me know :-)
@walterjiani9229
6 жыл бұрын
Hi sir! Is there any regular online available courses with you( IELTS master)?
@dianarofiqoh8592
5 жыл бұрын
I would like to join your lesson. How do I pay it each month. I have just debit card. I live in Canada
@sabihaislam8012
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this helpful video. How would I do correction my writing task?
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Glad I can help. If you're interested in working with me, you can see my services here: www.ielts-master.com/writing-corrections/
@sabihaislam8012
7 жыл бұрын
Thanks.
@vishusagwal1969
4 жыл бұрын
Thnx sir
@bayjidbostami7997
6 жыл бұрын
thanks
@amritpaudel9173
6 жыл бұрын
l need your ielts speaking videos
@GurpreetSingh-gl9lk
5 жыл бұрын
I can't
@cyrilsilvester7535
7 жыл бұрын
sir in conclusion u have stated as I believe that.....can we use I ?? or we should give some common description????
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
You can use "I"
@TheSason666
7 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@oasisthapa412
7 жыл бұрын
I don't understand why youtube instructors take IELTS essay (Task 2) so lightly and cheaply write the title 'Band Score 9 Essay' providing a sample. For me, it's nothing more than degrading oneself as a tutor. (Apologies for this comment, but I have justification for this statement). This essay will score an overall band score 7.0 (TR = 7.0, CC = 7.0, LR = 6.5, GRA = 8.0). If further justification is required, happy to continue for further discussion on it. I have copied and pasted your essay below for future issue (if any) for the justification of the marks awarded above. Your essay: People have different views on the subjects that university students should be allowed to study. While some people think that students should only be able to study subjects that these people think will be valuable in the future like science and technology, I believe that students should be able to choose their area of study. For many people, restricting university students to subjects like science and technology is an easy argument to make. The main reason is that these kinds of subjects contribute visibly to society. For example, improvements in medicine rely on advances in medical research, engineering, and computer science and technology. Only allowing students to study these kinds of subjects will mean that there will be more people available for work in these areas. While the benefits of more graduates in these kinds of useful subjects are clear, I believe that it would be a mistake to only allow students to study these subjects. This is because society is not able to accurately predict the future and what kinds of skills that people will need for jobs. For example, there may be entirely new fields created that need a strong artistic ability and solid writing skills. If students are only trained to be good scientists or engineers, they may not be able to succeed in these new fields. On the other hand, if we allow students to choose their major, society will be able to better adapt to the future. In conclusion, while it may seem reasonable to force students to study subjects that are currently viewed as useful, I believe that allowing students to choose what they study will help society be better prepared for whatever changes the future will bring.
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your comment. While I can assure you that "Band 9 Essay" is not cheaply written, I think there's value in open and polite discussion. And if there are, in fact, errors in my sample essay that I have missed, I would like to fix them as soon as possible. If you would like to provide justification for your scores, please use the IELTS Task 2 Public Band descriptors from the British Council: takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sites/default/files/IELTS_task_2_Writing_band_descriptors.pdf You might notice that it is not possible to get a "6.5" for any individual category. Looking at the band descriptors, I believe that it is very likely that this essay will score a 9 in each category. Specifically... Task Response (Edited from Task Achievement): You cited a score of 7, which means there "may be a tendency to overgeneralize and/or main ideas may lack focus". Could you provide examples. I feel that for the 250 word allotment, the essay 1) fully answers all parts of the task ("discuss both views and give your own opinion) and 2) presents a fully developed position with extended and well supported ideas Coherence and Cohesion: You gave a Band 7 score, which indicates "under or overuse" of cohesive devices. The essay sets out a structure in the introduction and follows it throughout. Could you provide examples of this? Lexical Resource: You gave a score of 6.5, which isn't possible. But assuming that it's a 7, this would mean that I had "some awareness of style and collocation" and that there may be "occasional errors in word choice, formation, or spelling". Which collocations seem unnatural to you? Or can you find many errors in the essay? Grammatical Range and Accuracy: A score of Band 8 requires "only very occasional errors or inappropriacies". Which sentences did you find errors in? Does something not seem appropriate to you? All in all, I think your scoring may be a bit misguided, but I'm happy to take a closer look at what you see as mistakes. Lee
@oasisthapa412
7 жыл бұрын
First of all, please read the comment again. The words 'cheaply written' used in the comment is not for the essay; any essay scoring 7 and/or above is never 'cheaply written'. A score of 7 in writing is an advanced level essay. Even Harvard, Yale, Princeton, Oxford, UCL accept 6.5. If you had written the title for your video 'Band Score 7+' or 'A Sample Essay', that would have been academically decent. But when you claim band score 9 for this essay, that will be obviously 'over-sounding'. For the justification, you have highlighting the band descriptors. You, it seems, even do not know the difference between 'Task Achievement' and 'Task Response'. Furthermore, the band descriptors (public version) are for general understanding for 'public' on how the score is given. With these vague descriptors (adequate, sufficient, wide range, sophisticated, addresses all components, fully satisfies and many other similar 'descriptors') one cannot claim band score 9 simply for having error free grammar, formulaic start and end and organisation of paragraphs! There are mark schemes with specific details available only for the examiners. They look at various aspects such as the effectiveness of thesis statement, punch lines, hooking words, cohesive properties and various levels of language use including grammar. I am not going to give comment on specific words, sentences and the language use for your essay; it takes time and it is a 'costly skill'. Last but not the least, the band descriptors (the link) you have provided is not developed by British Council. IELTS is administered by CU's ESOL Department. Though they work jointly, IELTS is developed by experts at Cambridge English Language Assessment (under ESOL Department) and this band descriptors, too, was prepared by them, not by British Council and the item writers (for the test papers) are mainly from five countries. If you still claim band score 9 for your essay, I recommend essays written by the examiners in Cambridge IELTS Series (1-11) They do not write 'band score 9 essay'; they write 'Sample Essay'.
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
I think you're nitpicking a bit with some points. So I'll try to hit the important ones: - Task Achievement instead of Task Response was a typo. Good catch. I've updated it. - If you can't comment on specific examples of what you don't like (especially for Lexical Resource), you're just giving me your subjective opinion. Without examples, I can't really respond to your comments or even know what you're referring to. - The student sample answers in the Cambridge IELTS series books are titled "Sample Answer". The ones prepared as high level answers are usually called "Model Answer". Is it basically you'd be happy if I wrote "Model Answer" instead of "Band 9 Sample Answer"? I can do that :-)
@amritpaudel9173
6 жыл бұрын
please write a sample essay at last if u can it would be more helpful
@thuynga9564
5 жыл бұрын
- the subject of interest: Inspiration-> have a sense of enjoyment, excitement, are motivated to overcome difficulties. Exellence at, Prominence at -> better academic performance and in turn a brighter prospective career path. - Beneficial courses: The capacity to get well-paid jobs in scientific field, high living standard, good quality of life. Make considerable contribution to the economic growth of a country.
@ahmed3820
7 жыл бұрын
I need help in assessing my ielts writing
@Ielts-master
7 жыл бұрын
You can find information on my writing correction service at www.ielts-master.com/writing-corrections/
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