Very good. I agree, there should be part 2 or an update.
@Rob24697
10 ай бұрын
Great story love this one ❤️
@hinoakel3830
10 ай бұрын
this was a good story but could have used about another 5 - 10 mins at the end on the reaction that he did not change back and what both his daughter would have said when she found him changed and what his friend s excuse would be that he did not change back from the spell she used
@PaulGibson-v3f
8 ай бұрын
Can we please have a second part as this is one was great
@williambaker5127
10 ай бұрын
There needs to be more parts to it
@r.e.stephens1344
10 ай бұрын
Beep, Beep, Beep. Sound's as though their may be a continuance into a part 2. That may be a lot of fun for Joan / John.
@williamhinkle8113
10 ай бұрын
In these stories the women use Magik. For their own selfish desire.
@stevebruyere3302
10 ай бұрын
This is a great story will there a part two
@sphyleffay8262
5 ай бұрын
Do more of the twisted series please :D also yes this def has more to it i wants to know what happens next please
@braaaplife557
10 ай бұрын
Please do a part 2
@distemic
10 ай бұрын
Missing the rest of the story
@cobberjoy
10 ай бұрын
will the two girls now live together with two moms carry on part2 or will joan like men
@travismcvay-b5z
5 ай бұрын
Part 2
@barbaraanneneale3674
9 ай бұрын
I could write you a much better story than this. Honestly
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