The art style and music are really awesome! I use Unity as well~ perhaps you can play around with some post processing as well, chromatic aberration, vignette, etc. might look trippy. Keep it up :D
@patrickwrites
Ай бұрын
very cool, couldn't find it to wishlist, so feel free to reply to this to let me know when to wishlist it.
@purpletrauma
Ай бұрын
For the five-ish minute mark images: I am quite partial to the bottom left one. I am fond of purple, and the lavender feels more fitting for the mood than the light blue. The black shirt and gray hair add contrast without adding a new color. I feel like the splash of color the orange-yellow shirt adds might be a bit much for the given mood, and the straight gray one isn't very striking.
@ryan_nein
Ай бұрын
Thanks for the feedback.
@purpletrauma
Ай бұрын
As for point-and-click ideas. Well. What tasks can you give the player? How will they go about it? What is the goal? Are they working up the nerve to leave? Can they put that cassette into a player? There's too little to give much ideas that aren't just personal to me instead of you, but a good start I think would be to come up with what goals this woman has, and turn it into an interaction. From there I'd just say keep in mind some basic game design; help the player know what they can do. Maybe have a firm black outline only on stuff they interact with? A "show interactables" button that activates an animation to the texture material of all interactable objects? Make them glow or get some visually distinct flair?
@Cmdr-Knight
Ай бұрын
The video sounded very rushed, you're speaking at quite the cadence. Try slowing down to about 70-80% the talking speed, add a one second pause at the end of sentences and don't be afraid of a little dead air (silence) in between sections even just to give the music a chance to shine through. Also would love a link to a post with that poem!
@ryan_nein
Ай бұрын
I think I'm too used to watching KZitem at 2x speed.
@Eert-py6gc
Ай бұрын
oke doooooo ke
@cesarcesar
Ай бұрын
00:19 I have that loop pedal and it sucks haha
@Cirby64
Ай бұрын
The store page in the description does not link to your game.
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