This is perhaps the best of all the audio stories i've heard. So descriptive that I could almost visually see every scene. The plot was excellent as well. Great job!
@TheCatalyst999
2 ай бұрын
It tore my attention away from politics. I am grateful for the repreive❤
@peteratkin3788
3 ай бұрын
Would not normally, listen to this kind of story but the pic brought me here and the story kept me here .
@WilliamAltowood
2 ай бұрын
Samezies😂😂
@dragmakeupforolder6784
2 ай бұрын
THE BLUE SKINNED WOMEN WITH PLATINUM HAIR KEEP REAPEARING IN OUR CULTURE.IS IT BASED ON SOME REALITY?
@angelnavarro1010
2 ай бұрын
@@dragmakeupforolder6784 avatar? Just with different hair?
@wolfwilkopter2231
2 ай бұрын
@@dragmakeupforolder6784 Andorians...just without antennae and wrinkly foreheads.
@jimemerson4893
Ай бұрын
Llllĺlĺll@@WilliamAltowood
@genetuttle3357
2 ай бұрын
If they insist on adding captioning to the story they should check the spelling of the text for the story. Many of the words displayed were not only misspelled but a different word entirely from what the audio projected. On a positive note, the story was good enough to keep me here until the end and was enjoyable.
@outinthesticks1035
2 ай бұрын
I wonder what the cost would be to hire a good stenographer?
@fredbrown9917
2 ай бұрын
That's because AI hasn't learned to distinguish which inflection to cue from. Notice the five or six different spellings of Notary Zix's name whenever it's mentioned, as well as about ten different spellings of Nila's name! Plus, every time the word led is used, it's all caps as in LED display, although humans call it an ell-eee-dee display! As outinthesticks1035 says, they need to find a decent stenographer! You'd figure that since they're reading from a script, they could caption from the same script!
@Erin-Thor
2 ай бұрын
“You are the sole inheritor of a very large estate…” I would have just hung up on the scammer. 😂
@peterseaboldt1250
Ай бұрын
I wonder how many golden opportunities we've all wasted just under the mere suspicion that it was a scam. Maybe that Nigerian prince was telling the truth?
@Erin-Thor
Ай бұрын
@@peterseaboldt1250 - I agree, please share your bank account information and we will transfer to you your 650,000,000 inheritance post haste. 😁
@robertchambers5821
2 ай бұрын
This is a wonderful start to a much longer story, fleshed out, with more depth. Very enjoyable.
@ToPlease
2 ай бұрын
Being mind connected sounds cool & terrifying, being around any lovely ladies would be hard in MORE ways than one. 😓
@philipvalentine6187
2 ай бұрын
This is a wonderful story. What a great future to look forward to once we here on Earth shake the shackles of our dark agenda by only a few keepers of the Dark Side.
@lorenzowilborn8544
2 ай бұрын
Nice. Where do I hear more of this? Does this story continue or is this the only episode?
@damonhill4909
2 ай бұрын
A beautiful story that brought joy to me. Thank you! ❤😊
@daveneil3963
2 ай бұрын
Me too! I want more!
@photomaster1
2 ай бұрын
Damn good story, we need more stories with this style of writing.
@OrbitingDreams24
3 ай бұрын
Very exhilarating. An excellent story.
@solebrth
2 ай бұрын
This is like someone reading a book to me , not what I expected !
@travisvalentine8093
Ай бұрын
This story would make for a great series
@Toffypops
2 ай бұрын
they should make a short of this, with characters like those above in the video as the mains!
@tryer49
2 ай бұрын
Great storytelling! Thanks!
@UniverseUnfolded
3 ай бұрын
Loving it
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
2 ай бұрын
What???🤔 After all that and no children? 🤨 Anyway, I enjoyed the story. 😉
@Nempo13
2 ай бұрын
This was attempting to be more hard scifi...interspecies children would legit never happen. Even gene splicing would not allow most people's fantasy of half breeds. The largest deviation we have available as proof is the genetic split between erectus and sapian sapian being able to breed together. DNA does not allow for wildly different things to breed. Just how it is. You need a common ancestor, and for the divirgance to not be too far in order to allow it. Also the 'half breed' is actually...not a half breed, it is a return to origin.
@a_z.tazzzfan8497
2 ай бұрын
@@Nempo13 Well thought out - wanting to "keep it real" so to speak. Nicely done 👍 Never cared for the term "half breed". Grew up listening to it being used in a derogatory manner. Had many fights in my youth defending friends being called that.
@richardprobst7885
Ай бұрын
Im all yours tonight
@patrickhenigin4805
2 ай бұрын
Exceptional. More episodes please.
@mikejones6898
2 ай бұрын
good story , thank you⛲
@SciFiLoreVault
3 ай бұрын
Write how do you like the story?
@johnhorton4436
3 ай бұрын
This would Be Sort Of Like A Dream Come True For Some I'd Suspect Not to Mention how Lucky this Guy was
@tonyromano6220
2 ай бұрын
lol the thumb rocks!
@Erin-Thor
2 ай бұрын
Can I have her please? 😊
@bossshun9
2 ай бұрын
Good story.
@williamconkin8444
2 ай бұрын
A- grade. Perfect pace and information, not enough to get bogged down in details but enough to wind the sails of imagination and possibilities. You've got the struggle of good and evil on so many levels without being obstructively distracting. Would like to hear more but have yet to see a sequel that lived up to the original. I think that is why really good stories are either exceedingly brief or oppressive long. Good job. Thank you....
@gusswier3952
2 ай бұрын
I want a blue alien wife!
@wilsonrawlin8547
2 ай бұрын
You and me both!
@esinkumaallagoa8345
2 ай бұрын
@@wilsonrawlin8547And I as well
@d3ltaohniner261
Ай бұрын
But can she cook?
@Rebelrocker69
2 ай бұрын
The a.i. missed a chance. Jethro Kumar should have been named either Harold Kumar or Jethro Tull.😅😅😅😅😅
@leoscheibelhut940
2 ай бұрын
Loved this story. How do I find more by this author?
@josephmcknight845
2 ай бұрын
No children??? What a shame.
@LurdesRamos-vq7lx
2 ай бұрын
It's the trying to make them that's fun 👈😁
@terranceevans521
2 ай бұрын
great start of an interesting screenplay. Please keep it going.
@WuChuan036
2 ай бұрын
Excellent graphics on the alien female, and male characters.
@jdj10078
2 ай бұрын
wow i hope all aliens look like her !!!
@nDjinn1
2 ай бұрын
An Indian Hebrew and a beutiful Telepathic alien. Quite the start to a story I hope we get more of.
@markstephens3448
2 ай бұрын
damn i was hoping it was a movie, and was looking to where i could find and watch it
@MT-zl3kl
2 ай бұрын
Very well done!
@Sowhat300
2 ай бұрын
I think I’m in love with Nila❤
@Speedfly1
2 ай бұрын
I liked it. Really good. 👍
@henryrohman3115
3 ай бұрын
Nice😊
@viper3378
2 ай бұрын
Excellent story, thank you!!
@lesley643
2 ай бұрын
Nice big pointy ears to grab onto😂
@lesb4500
2 ай бұрын
😂Such out loud thinking might get you suspended or some shit but your comment just struck my "funny bone" & I cracked Up. Nice One!
@tundralou
2 ай бұрын
How come all the space babes are :BLUE”
@esinkumaallagoa8345
2 ай бұрын
I like it
@arrendaled
2 ай бұрын
Orion slave girls are green!
@AlexanderofMiletus
2 ай бұрын
My question exactly
@lucaslubbers6659
2 ай бұрын
This is a nice story. The end should have been at 28:22.
@denisborile8462
3 ай бұрын
M8 piace questa storia magica e la super 💕 femmina e donna bellissima 💗💙💙🤍🤎
@HenriqueSilvanyar
Ай бұрын
Not bad!
@marcelrenes2435
Ай бұрын
Don't let those pictures fool you! I've listened to some of these stories, but I think they are AI or something like that. It always has a Zena or a 'we must breed' resulting in an ending of a bridge closing different worlds. I'm bored know.
@mickeymike-yk4bf
2 ай бұрын
I Love this ? Thank you🤠
@gtoexpress8111
2 ай бұрын
Loved the video
@louseveryann2181
16 күн бұрын
The bots.... Oh, the bots...
@TazKidNoah
2 ай бұрын
is this a Harold & Kumar reference?
@indrajitgupta3280
2 ай бұрын
Neela meaning blue is quite useful.
@johnnyrotten3175
2 ай бұрын
👏👏👏👏👏😎
@jimmyhawk3270
2 ай бұрын
Wonderful!
@Scot_WestTexas
3 ай бұрын
😎👍
@tonyromano6220
2 ай бұрын
I would!
@notcherbane3218
2 ай бұрын
Whoever did the picture for this story definitely is into anime cuz after all you can't have a female anime character who's wearing much more than a bikini it just isn't done lol
@naveenkumar.s8359
2 ай бұрын
Where can I find this story
@incognitones5604
2 ай бұрын
hub of interspecies coopertion... as said by way too many HFY stories lately. I wonder what was the original saying, and what was copies by AI's and "influenced" authors. One the phrases I hate nowadays.
@EeBee51
2 ай бұрын
So they're now feeding the AI's with Mills and Boon plots ???
@rojoeditor
2 ай бұрын
This is fantastic. But why don't the captions match the voice? There are glaring errors in the captions, but since this is a written story, why couldn't the text drive the captions?
@incognitones5604
2 ай бұрын
If they copied the captions straight from the original text, unattributed, it would be even more of a theft from the op.
@rojoeditor
2 ай бұрын
Sorry, I'm confused. Who stole from whom?
@MarkParkTech
2 ай бұрын
does this story have a title?
@tundralou
2 ай бұрын
I think if Nela looked like that i could work with it
@SSGJohn
2 ай бұрын
If the pictures match the words that would be great
@Brown_Buffalo
2 ай бұрын
Couldn’t keep her name spelled the same way throughout the story
@escapefelicity2913
2 ай бұрын
HFY?
@williamchandler2937
2 ай бұрын
Telepathic push,would be TK to push otherwise decent story.
@kanpur8745
2 ай бұрын
The beginning and the ending same as another story... Oh well
@SSGJohn
2 ай бұрын
What no kids🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨
@tomrkba4685
2 ай бұрын
Why would he be grieving so hard for someone he met once 5 years ago?
@kenle2
2 ай бұрын
I think it's more shock that this guy left him an inheritance. He doesn't understand it, so he's off balance.
@tomrkba4685
2 ай бұрын
@@kenle2 It was massively overdramatized.
@Erin-Thor
2 ай бұрын
Because it makes the plot thicker, better, and… other stuff! 😂
@silverthorngoodtree5533
2 ай бұрын
Ai art and Ai Written story and Ai narrator. bla·sé. Easy to spot to.
@kenlee5509
2 ай бұрын
19:46 Fugitives. Goddamnit, the story was going so well too. FAIL!
@rogermanlove1901
2 ай бұрын
There were many mispronouciati9ons, misspellings and incorrect word misuses.
@peterthornton8520
2 ай бұрын
This is rubbish. The sub titles gave "Nila" 4 different ways of spelling. Bad presentation. Click bait.
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