Some scenes dragged on for a little while, but is it awful? I don't think so, you put a lot of time and I appreciate it. It was a pretty brilliant retake and you executed it the best you could dude. Definitely a 9/10 for me that's for sure, I'm wondering if this is what "coming full circle" feels like lol.
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you it's very much appreciated
@sultansynthalt
Жыл бұрын
You guys should make a collab someday
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
@@sultansynthalt maybe
@JustAWhovian
Жыл бұрын
You got a good rating by THE yumi!!!!!
@TheRealPhantomStalks
Жыл бұрын
HE COOKED, WE FEASTING GOOD TONIGHT!!!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❗️❗️❗️🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥 Def gonna do l an analysis comment on this later
@HolyAphid
Жыл бұрын
6:38 (pure silence) W O R M C A K E
@TheAm4zingGrace
4 ай бұрын
VibingLeaf would be proud if this masterpiece is inspired by him.
@Bendyvigorena4868
Жыл бұрын
Pros: -accurate to the original story -no reused stuff -NEW and original content -the VHS at start Cons: -subtitles at start Rank:Amazing
@Error.eyeco567
Жыл бұрын
What about the drawings?
@epicCoolgiytryhsrfsea
10 ай бұрын
whats wrong with the subtitles is it because they have humor like "checc out thiz Maxruby epizode i found!!11!!11!!"
@KennithSimmonsCbars
Жыл бұрын
Woah. This is AMAZING Honestly its a good retake, you did wonderful
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@Ragnarok30SP
Жыл бұрын
17:00 "A grief so deep the tongue must wag in vain, the language of our sense and memory lacks the vocabulary of such pain."
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Dante's Inferno
@HolyAphid
Жыл бұрын
thats strong words
@Ragnarok30SP
Жыл бұрын
@@HolyAphid mm
@ryanpaulo7670
Жыл бұрын
although the video did not exceed my expectations, yes it is a good one and it only shows that you are doing very well in the editing👍
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you
@RandomArtist1996
Жыл бұрын
Pros: LOTS OF EFFORT ORIGINAL CONTENT Build up to story Use of dialogue Unique drawings Late 2000's Internet Vibes Cons: Some scenes drag on a little too long Jumpscares are a little bit loud Art style doesn't work well Rank: Amazing
@dibbingsauce
Жыл бұрын
That part where the audio comes in that just goes "where did max go?" Is creepy and also some insane forshadowing
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
True
@C4ST3R3T3RN4L
Жыл бұрын
Alright, so... Pros: I love the immersion and story building this gives, making it seem like instead of stuff happenig randomly, it's a butterfly effect that spirals everything down to the ground. The atmosphere and late 2000s vibe is amazing. The way the video is edited is perfect. Ruby's speech at the end is much better than the original, telling the viewer that it isn't their fault rather than mercilessly threatening them. Cons: While I do enjoy the attempt at a different artstyle compared to the original show, it just... does not sit very well. Maybe it's just a me thing, but I'm not a huge fan of it. (Seriously, my first reaction to it was that they looked like freaking Roblox characters.) Some of the scenes drag on a bit longer than they should, which take away some of the impact of the scenes. I'm not saying they should take like, say, five seconds, but maybe try to slim them down a bit so the story doesn't feel too dragged on. The audio gets a little too loud sometimes, even in the jumpscare parts.
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for being honest
@C4ST3R3T3RN4L
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem Of course! This is still a great remake/take on the creepypasta, and while I do admit my criticism was quite harsh, I'd rather not discourage you from doing what you love (because then again, I know I wouldn't do much better than this), because then again, there is worse out there, and yours is amazing nonetheless.
@cutemetalheadgal
Жыл бұрын
the roblox part is so real
@BangBangMaxwellsSilverHammer
Жыл бұрын
The longest one of them all, and probably the best
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thanks
@CLonErSmArTer
Ай бұрын
this is actually a pretty good retake, the only thing that needs work is the art but still... good job on this retake buddy :3
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Ай бұрын
Thanks
@trollgeyesgachano1773
Жыл бұрын
0:52 This is what KZitem vids used to look back in the 2000s.
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
I didn't grow up with those videos lol
@trollgeyesgachano1773
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem Then how did you made it?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
@@trollgeyesgachano1773 Research and notes of how others do it
@trollgeyesgachano1773
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem Okay thanks
@sephiroththeonewingedangel7777
Жыл бұрын
Worth the wait! Just started watching and I can already tell this is going to be good!
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you
@sephiroththeonewingedangel7777
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem no problem :)
@ShrekTheShrexyOgre
Жыл бұрын
That intro tho 💀
@StardustGalaxy129
Жыл бұрын
This was good. My only problem is that I couldn't hear anything the dad or Ruby said. I think the audio should be clearer.
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
It's a shame we have to leave for that vacation... We'll let Ruby in charge. She's a responsible sister she'll take care of Max.
@satamsonic4026
Жыл бұрын
9:05 seems like this is like a retake.
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Yes
@JohnFamularo-gy2mv
4 ай бұрын
I will ask Vibingleaf to make Max and Ruby 0004
@Seb_slimshadyISBACK
6 күн бұрын
What app did you use in 0:53
@themrman11
Жыл бұрын
This is so epic worth the wait1!!1!1
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you
@HolyAphid
Жыл бұрын
what i hear in the do you see me part theres 4 sounds or 5 first one may be a instrument of the intro or the flash game background music and theres a sound of max saying find me! and 2 distorted sounds and ruby saying where did max go?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
It's the flash game sounds only
@TheRetroCollecterWhoEatsCheese
Жыл бұрын
Nice bro
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
👍🏻
@BrandonSilverFoxBishop
Жыл бұрын
11:39 I Managed To Hear What Ruby (Voiced By You) Said: "Max,Stop Whining (Or Crying,But I Think It's Whining) and Get Back To Bed." I Managed To Hear The Second One Very Carefully when she Heads Into His Bedroom. She Said: "Max...Stop Joking Around...Get Into Bed." BTW,I Like How You Gave Ruby a Blue Nighttie. I Would Suggest Add Some Stars around Her Nighttie Next Time. That's all.
@GraceKenny-db5ik
Жыл бұрын
2:17 YES I SEE YOU 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱!!!!!
@bobbypatty4
Ай бұрын
this was so sad that i started to jelq out of anger
@DiamondWorldYoutube
28 күн бұрын
WHAT?!?!?! 😭😭😭😭💀💀
@kiartoons2010
Жыл бұрын
about to rate this five stars
@Kadendrawmaster310
9 ай бұрын
Ok I heard the parents talked in more sentences and I hear ruby talking to max about the dirt pancake
@JohnFamularo-gy2mv
5 ай бұрын
I watched Max and Ruby when I was a toddler
@bigcatwithbigpawz
Жыл бұрын
Not bad! Could use a bit of a rework with the long scenes, they feel kinda like filler
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
I have ADHD so i tried to make tension so that explains why it was so unbelievably long lol. Also thanks for the support!
@nitroseven
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem for someone who has ADHD, you did a very good job. W remake
@supersonicplushaydenandlan184
7 ай бұрын
6:50 full line? Can't understand it
@mr.m4275
Жыл бұрын
6:51 what did he say?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
It's a shame we have to leave for that vacation... We'll let Ruby in charge. She's a responsible sister she'll take care of Max.
@mr.m4275
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem I see.
@TheRetroCollecterWhoEatsCheese
Жыл бұрын
@mrblueymackeinziedingdongAUTTP68 it’s likely the Mom because it never happened to the Dad
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Mom died in the crash as well
@TheRetroCollecterWhoEatsCheese
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem I’m guessing she choked on glass as it managed to get down her throat The dad definitely went thru the windshield
@Ragnarok30SP
Жыл бұрын
Some parts drag out for a bit too long, the art style kinda takes away from what it can actually be and on top of that some of the sounds were a bit too loud and need some tweaking, other than that, it's a very good video
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Thank you
@Ragnarok30SP
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem You're welcome, you did well, but make sure to not take these criticisms to heart, use it to better yourself and improve, you can only get better and go up from here
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
@@Ragnarok30SP ok
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
@@Ragnarok30SP also i did almost all of this on a Samsung Galaxy
@Ragnarok30SP
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem neat
@yotsubamic5760
Жыл бұрын
i used to be scared of the original omg
@kadotca
Ай бұрын
nooo! mark died :(
@trollgeyesgachano1773
Жыл бұрын
0:50 What's this song?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Go look at the description and copyright liscenses lol
@trollgeyesgachano1773
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem What's the song's name?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Holy Ghost Edit i think
@TomDocouto
Жыл бұрын
some scenes drag out a bit, but otherwise it's real good
@Gorilla_drip
4 ай бұрын
15:00 the plot of city entity my analog horror
@ThiccSteveYT
Жыл бұрын
Anyone do the PigPigGamer Rank? I'd give it the best, Pros and Cons? Go ahead,
@DarielleFerdinand-by5fh
2 ай бұрын
4:54 why is ruby strechy?
@DiamondWorldYoutube
2 ай бұрын
Because mandela Catalouge made things that are stretchy scary
@pudgy-e9t
Жыл бұрын
pls do a sonic.exe re take
@DiamondWorldYoutube
Жыл бұрын
Maybe if i want to
@pudgy-e9t
Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondWorldKZitem ok
@JoshuaFagan2005
Жыл бұрын
15:08
@KingAJRocksTheWonderGod
7 ай бұрын
yikes
@DiamondWorldYoutube
7 ай бұрын
What
@KingAJRocksTheWonderGod
7 ай бұрын
it was scary?!@@DiamondWorldKZitem
@KingAJRocksTheWonderGod
7 ай бұрын
i luv it@@DiamondWorldKZitem
@DiamondWorldYoutube
7 ай бұрын
Oh i thought It was a internet drama kind of yikes sorry
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