Hi there! This poem is actually the first spoken word I ever wrote. It’s certainly not my best work, but since it started this whole journey, it holds a lot of sentimental value to me. I remember being 13 and sitting at the edge of my bed peering out the windowsill gazing at the moon thinking of the past, present, and future. The moon is so simple yet so captivating. I like to think that is how God sees us. Let me know what you think :)
@susanta_borgohain
3 жыл бұрын
I was waiting for this , like I have searched 100 times on KZitem to watch this but it was removed by you earlier ... Thanks for reuploading
@mutuamlamba
3 жыл бұрын
I think it's beautiful
@Diana-gt1rv
3 жыл бұрын
This spoken word poetry is fantastic. I understand her feelings very well.
@meaning-full
3 жыл бұрын
kzitem.info/news/bejne/0qactouvfohqpoI I've found your video in this channel! Not only there...
@HarGharBoxer
3 жыл бұрын
If you fall in Love with me don't,was is and will be the bestest,,, how can you be so genuine,,do you really exist?????
@SulakchanaGurung
3 жыл бұрын
Can we just admire her voice too along with her beautiful poetry, cause not all spoken poetry sounds this soothing even thought their poems are good. You have both the talent of writing and expressing it through spoken poetry. Keep it up :) you're doing great
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!! Your words are so kind ❤️🌘
@kumarashish2051
3 жыл бұрын
ikr, her narration is equally great
@mkscripturient6898
3 жыл бұрын
@@kumarashish2051 agreed! you have such a gorgeous voice Luna!
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
@@mkscripturient6898 thank you 😆
@esotericpoetry1019
2 жыл бұрын
kzitem.info/news/bejne/1Hml3Hl6rHeUZaA Need support. Please check this small poem by me
@f13amarket
3 жыл бұрын
I've been waiting for this.
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
😃😃 so glad you could be here!
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@nortene69
3 жыл бұрын
The Moon, The beautiful rock we all see and love. It isn't just your first love, but all of us too. We all see the moon every night, sometimes brighter or dimmer then the night before. But it was all OUR first sight of love. Thx for you're lovely poems!🖤
@esotericpoetry1019
2 жыл бұрын
kzitem.info/news/bejne/1Hml3Hl6rHeUZaA Please visit my poem channel 😊🙃
@ifrawasi9040
3 жыл бұрын
Deep, metaphorical and beautiful 🔥❤️
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
❤️ thanks for listening! 🌘
@theanonymous4128
3 жыл бұрын
Like... today I got the first soccer training in a year, and I woke up being very nervous. This Poem just gave me lots of comfort and chills. It just calmed me down for a sec, which I am very thankful for.
@Sandra-rr1qp
3 жыл бұрын
Ahhhh finally this is the one I been waiting for so long
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
😃😃❤️🌘
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@nehanambiar363
3 жыл бұрын
I think it is the honesty and relevance that enhance the beauty of your poem and of course your sweet little voice is enough to make someone fall in love with you.
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
😊❤️🌘
@mkscripturient6898
3 жыл бұрын
Definitely a Luna classic! Such a gorgeous, timeless piece 🤍
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you 😊❤️🌘
@boihboihi9345
3 жыл бұрын
the way i always get goosebumps when i listen to your poems
@prvthvmv
3 жыл бұрын
Okay... You know this was my first poetry I hv ever heard on youtube (before you deleted it) and I immediately fell in love! Thank you for re-uploading it again❤
@MrBrewersboy
3 жыл бұрын
Im just waiting for “if you’re going to fall in love with me, don’t” to come back 😭
@ReboneMora
3 жыл бұрын
I've been trying so hard to write about the man on the moon 😫... This poem is the best embodiment of him. Beautiful.
@lealandgreen
3 жыл бұрын
Your poems are deep and easy to relate to. AND your voice is amazing - both warm and captivating.
@ujjainisarkar3000
3 жыл бұрын
this is good as usual your poems r always heart touching and maybe the first poem is never the best but it has its own beauty i still love to read my first poem and it always brings out a beautiful memory
@poppipoppipopoppipoo
3 жыл бұрын
i know these words too well:-) thank you luna
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching, angel 👼!
@thejesterman
3 жыл бұрын
AYYYY This is my favoriteee thank you for reuploading it.
@its_lexy_here712
3 жыл бұрын
Once again, a beautiful piece...❤️🌙
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you :)
@prabh87
3 жыл бұрын
Beautiful as always🖤
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@kumarashish2051
3 жыл бұрын
Another great piece. Your narration amazes me everytime. Such perfect narration and beautiful words. 🔥🔥💖
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Kumar!! I appreciate your continuous support! 😊❤️🌘
@junesguite33
3 жыл бұрын
you're poems are always so great, I don't know how u do it. xx sending love from Manipur ❤💚🖤
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your support ❤️🌘😃
@esotericpoetry1019
2 жыл бұрын
kzitem.info/news/bejne/1Hml3Hl6rHeUZaA Please check my poem on the chase of true lover for his love
@susanta_borgohain
3 жыл бұрын
This is the first spoken word poetry I have heard and this was enough to make me fell for this ......
@yomstarr
3 жыл бұрын
... people call him, the man on the moon... 🌹🌹
@Fromtheforgottengardens
3 жыл бұрын
I wished I had my first love in early 20s. Now it's very hard for me to navigate emotions and vulnerabilities in my late 20s.
@ayushvarshney10
Жыл бұрын
Most beautiful poem I have ever heard Plz write many more like this ❤
@thomasclor8529
3 жыл бұрын
I remember some of the sentences from your older videos much love!
@imsupersmart
3 жыл бұрын
luunaaaa this is awesome girrl
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!!
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@mehendouchewang2402
3 жыл бұрын
This LUNA POEMS is fascinating 🔥in love with every single words spoken out of her mouth ♥️
@pajianti
3 жыл бұрын
im still waiting for the "if you love me, dont" one.
@fatttyyy
3 жыл бұрын
Di ko expect 'yung lastttt, galingg ate lunaaa. Keepp sailinnn'😭💛
@cyruskingdacquel128
3 жыл бұрын
Ooo I love this poem!!!❤😀
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@shadowm19
3 жыл бұрын
This would be weird, but my first love was 12 years ago. And I still think of her almost everyday. I just couldn't forget her.
@user-mg2yl9fl1r
3 жыл бұрын
I rmb listening to this while ago n now it’s still ma fav
@Shawn-jo4hj
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this pleasant surprise. 😍
@surkhabkaur9473
3 жыл бұрын
hey...you wrote it really well...but what about the second winner?
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
It’s the next poem! 😃
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@YaqubAli
2 жыл бұрын
poetry, hit the subconscious mind, the chill, that I want to find, the words, one of a kind, Oh sorry! I don't what to let the moon behind. Good poem, Thank you, I guess.
@xatiter
3 жыл бұрын
Just as good as I remember
@tanzimislam6845
3 жыл бұрын
I watched this long ago like really long ago but today somehow It came to my mind but I forgot the name of the video. So I just kept search and looking for it and finally got it :) Really happy to get to listen to this beautiful poem again. Keep up the good work .
@moodywriter7788
3 жыл бұрын
Love your voice and poetry so much.
@Shihab1979
2 жыл бұрын
First love Always something else for everyone 💘
@gretchynhuyong2634
3 жыл бұрын
Ahhh so beautifullll🥺🥺❤️
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!🌘❤️
@snapledragon8106
3 жыл бұрын
Firsttt
@ReeseJ919
3 жыл бұрын
that was amazing...
@destinee.a.vasquez3352
3 жыл бұрын
Luna, I can argue as to it being your best. I love this one! #Catholicstakeupspace
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
❤️❤️❤️
@celelonx
3 жыл бұрын
🌖
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
LUNA SQUARED
@jazzyjune5809
3 жыл бұрын
@@lunapoems lol
@afidarindy
3 жыл бұрын
I think i have seen this in your channel, is it another version or what?
@chillhopfm7907
3 жыл бұрын
I love this channel I love her poetry her voice is so nice
@midnightgunner680
3 жыл бұрын
I decided to post one of my poem just in case someone can relate and feel a little bit of weight lifted off their shoulder. Not looking for sympathy, validation or anything as such, just looking to help a stranger. This is one is called reality. Reality I can still hear your voice in my dreams it feels so real. But I know it's just an illusion, just a dream. You are so far away yet I can still feel you. I try to forget but when I close my eyes I still see you. Your sweet smell, your gentle touch, such a beautiful memory. Yet you would not believe how much it haunts me. It enveloped in the air just like an invisible mist as I remember our first kiss and how it felt surreal. Could it be that it was all for me? No, it's not real we were never meant to be. Time slowed down, I could not hear a sound. Our heart beat was the only thing moving around. We were together and nothing else matter. You were mine and I was yours. Together we did say forever. But yet you buried me like I did not matter. To you I became worthless, useless, a nobody. I want to say thank you because I finally became free. I held you and sheltered you from life. Yet you turned around and stabbed me in the back with your knife. It is the beginning I remember the most. You were real now you're just a ghost. I remember that smile and your beautiful eyes. They are now engraved in my mind just like a bad lie. I will forever be grateful for the lesson you thought me. Because of you I became the man I always was meant to be. I have to go to sleep now and I want to tell you that I am sorry. Because when you became a memory, it meant you will never get to lay beside me.
@zainabmasood8449
3 жыл бұрын
Beautiful 💐
@midnightgunner680
3 жыл бұрын
@@zainabmasood8449 Thank you
@mdtahirhusainshaikh963
3 жыл бұрын
Ohhh! Nice!!!
@tluangpuiisailo2264
3 жыл бұрын
I love you and your poems💝
@gracelzafra9695
3 жыл бұрын
Another masterpiece! ✨
@simranshastri4926
3 жыл бұрын
❤️❤️❤️❤️
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@ezrapame7965
3 жыл бұрын
i was about to say that you stole it from somewhere since i remember watching it .. but then again it was you who wrote it .. so so so good
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
Hehehe 😆 I need to stop copying my work!! 🤪 thanks for watching :)
@meganbush583
3 жыл бұрын
Love this poem! Are you going to upload your first original poem you posted? Don't love me because or something very similar to that title?
@lydiadewinta9636
3 жыл бұрын
yes, I've never moved on ❤️
@ridi602
Жыл бұрын
Beautiful
@straw_to_my_berry6105
3 жыл бұрын
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
@deeptis2422
3 жыл бұрын
Why did u remove ur old videos? 🥺
@rosuliuli7747
3 жыл бұрын
I really like to hear ur voice and ur amazing poem ♥♥♥
@atikanazamusa
3 жыл бұрын
why do i feel like i've listened to this poem before? did you re-upload it? i loveeee it btw :')
@jameshknight
3 жыл бұрын
Awesome poem!
@thelittleway
3 жыл бұрын
💛
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
😆🤪
@rudeboyproductions6294
3 жыл бұрын
Are you gunna post the interview from downtown HB??
@ministryofpoetry2472
3 жыл бұрын
Luna, what happened to 'if you fall in love with me don't?" I can't find it x
@caratseventeen1050
3 жыл бұрын
Love you so much ♥♥
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
I love youuuuu!
@kingsman5708
3 жыл бұрын
Nice ❤️👍
@u--thoob5789
3 жыл бұрын
😙❤
@lindastubbe8961
3 жыл бұрын
You should write a book
@KryptoPoet
3 жыл бұрын
Nice
@sakshibahuguna.
3 жыл бұрын
U❤️
@lunapoems
3 жыл бұрын
UUUUU!!!!❤️🌘
@farwahehee8087
3 жыл бұрын
Hey 🥺I just uploaded a poem could you please give your feedback and a little support would love it❣️
@winifred9862
3 жыл бұрын
Are you monetized?🥺
@Shihab1979
3 жыл бұрын
❤️❤️❤️✝️❤️✝️
@Shihab1979
3 жыл бұрын
Thanks 😊
@axbowf4924
3 жыл бұрын
I wanna say sth why u deleted ur early videos??
@debasishdeka903
3 жыл бұрын
I love you 💖😗
@nguyenthinh2539
3 жыл бұрын
Sheesh :)
@dilrukshijayalath877
Жыл бұрын
First love middle love last love ova boru adaraya atththatama kagen labeyida kiyala kiyanna ba
@Jeon_Ari_
3 жыл бұрын
Sounds like me 😥😢😪
@helenchong1259
3 жыл бұрын
看过了什么角色反转.
@arp6475
3 жыл бұрын
You have instagram?
@joannawofford
3 жыл бұрын
Well I know about the secret 😏 Yes my babe is very private but he want be for long and I really understand why. He doesn't want everyone in his business until he is ready to do whatever he wants to. He love 💘 me that I know.
@agustinamansur5665
3 жыл бұрын
Your voice and narrative reminded me of Lana del Rey's spoken word poetry🎆 Check her out if you haven't. This is an amazing poem🔥I didn't expect the end❤
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