Very good start with very quick and confusing end .......work on it sweetheart turn it into a mini series ...plzzz ...mafia jealousy enmity...this all i need 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
@swatisharma9264
3 күн бұрын
I was about to start study ... But seems like my books have to wait another 20 minutes...i have something important to do ❤❤❤❤😅😅😅😅😅😅
@Tiger_Lilies_ian
3 күн бұрын
😭😂💐
@swatisharma9264
2 күн бұрын
@@Tiger_Lilies_ian 😜😜😜
@Martin-ou8ki
2 күн бұрын
Heyyy !! It wass superb likee soo soo good❤❤🤌🏻💯 so now u know author what we want A BONUSS!!! 😁😁
@Tiger_Lilies_ian
2 күн бұрын
@@Martin-ou8ki i might actually make a 10 minute bonus😚🤫
@Martin-ou8ki
2 күн бұрын
@@Tiger_Lilies_ian thatss so sweet of you authorr thankyouu so muchh 🤌🏻🤌🏻♥️♥️
@edgloss1299
2 күн бұрын
This is a confusing story, i didn't even know who the fiance was, i thought it was jk but then he said " Whatever shit he was spitting isn't the truth " So that means jk is not the fiance. The it's jk who kissed yn but he got shocked by the kiss and he kissed her back just as fiercely. So that's not make sense
@Tiger_Lilies_ian
2 күн бұрын
Iam sorry. I should have reviewed it again before uploading. I just noticed these points. I apologise. I will try to improve 🫂🌠
@edgloss1299
2 күн бұрын
@@Tiger_Lilies_ian I'm glad you take my comment as a criticism and not as hate. Because I don't hate the story, just confused over the storyline.. Good luck author-nim
@Tiger_Lilies_ian
2 күн бұрын
@@edgloss1299 ofcourse. Iam grateful for this🌠 Thank you so much🫂
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