I missed the part where Zach cured cancer, saved a bus full of Nuns and walked on water to save a drowning puppy 🤣
@juistian
6 ай бұрын
I"m glad I swallowed my coffee before I got to this comment.
@lawrencesally6189
5 ай бұрын
I'm sure that would be in the next chapter.... Just Saying!!!
@mariomachadofilho
6 ай бұрын
A ship captain does not have the training to be amongst a tac team in a spcop
@bizbe4465
3 ай бұрын
Dude... its fiction. THATS what you have a problem with?
@loopslytle
6 ай бұрын
An excellent story of what humanity could become.
@MarkSmith-zg5hq
6 ай бұрын
So, how did Zack get from ground defense with the Ivorians to the bridge of his ship?
@jaredhirsch2859
6 ай бұрын
PFM
@grogvaughan5649
6 ай бұрын
TARDIS?? Or Scotty beamed him up..lol
@zacharyr666
5 ай бұрын
By using good old fashioned A.I. inconsistencys! You would be amazed at how far that can take you.
@grogvaughan5649
5 ай бұрын
@zacharyr666 all that timey wimey fuzzy stuff...
@MarkSmith-zg5hq
6 ай бұрын
The Valiant if full of refugees yet he collides with that Mothership?
@charleskernachan4223
6 ай бұрын
How about Zac was on the ground with the Marines, then all of the sudden he was on his ship, like magic.
@wm.tomlinson1434
6 ай бұрын
Uuuuuhhhhh, just when exactly did Zach arrive back on the bridge of the Valiant?
@oldschooldiy3240
6 ай бұрын
I can't stand a story that doesn't maintain the plot line...."Zack" is on the ground fighting beside Ivorian warriors, then he is in his command chair ramming the mother ship....SMDH
@gabrieldasilva7970
6 ай бұрын
True... I was thinking just that...
@jorgegallegos3888
6 ай бұрын
The other thing I don’t like is how a ship commander is doing everything and leaving the command of their ship.
@oldschooldiy3240
6 ай бұрын
@@jorgegallegos3888 IKR?
@MICHEAL-l1d
6 ай бұрын
Then you have all missed the core message. Bravery, Compassion and Self Sacrifice is the real message not story continuity or where a character was.
@damocles8417
6 ай бұрын
I thought I missed something during an ad. Thanks for pointing that out.
@davidnewland2556
6 ай бұрын
I very much enjoyed this tale, it's a good yarn.
@johnlaursen6080
6 ай бұрын
Thers too manyholes in this story that don't make since, some mentioned by others. The one that really strikes me is that the Captain was willing to risk everything to save the civilians, bringing them to his ship, and in the next instance he was wiiling to kill them all raming his ship into the enemies. That doesn't make any since at all.
@rickhoward6939
6 ай бұрын
damn those zorgons get around!
@larryr.6115
6 ай бұрын
Since when do ship commanders go on combat missions? That is why they delegate to other lower ranking officers & non-commissioned officers.
@sbradfute
6 ай бұрын
Kirk did all the time
@zacharyr666
5 ай бұрын
Star Trek has always been weird about that. At least Picard was better about letting his first officer do it.
@SunderShould-Be-King
5 ай бұрын
Though I love the original series for nostalgia sake, Kirk always being on away missions is a major critisism of the chain of command on the Enterprise, but TV gotta TV.
@barenekid9695
6 ай бұрын
Realllly! "ZORGANS" Again !?? No danger of imagination here.
@oldschooldiy3240
6 ай бұрын
A fan of "TBBT" I bet!
@MarkSmith-zg5hq
6 ай бұрын
The Timer counted down, yet he triggered it manually?
@malahammer
6 ай бұрын
yes that's right
@aarontuplin
6 ай бұрын
Obviously the timer lets you know when it's safe to trigger it manually lol
@christianjohannes8529
6 ай бұрын
how the fu#k did he come back too the ship? He is a captian of his ship is leading the marines and he can teleport. I know it is scifi but come on that is stupid.
@gruffelo6945
6 ай бұрын
the plot holes are pretty big. yeh
@markmaher4548
6 ай бұрын
Escape pod
@DawnAdams-d5i
6 ай бұрын
And don't forget about consoles exploding. The author is heavily influenced by Hollwood BS
@zacharyr666
5 ай бұрын
Reverse escape pod?
@carlfranz6805
6 ай бұрын
A decent story in search of a Proof Reader and Editor.
@duanecarr6712
6 ай бұрын
Love. These stories so much thank you
@MICHEAL-l1d
6 ай бұрын
Is the picture of Captain Synder or a zorgan or perhaps an Avorian
@anthonyhargis6855
6 ай бұрын
The people that write these stories -- OR the people that created this AI -- need to learn how the military actually works. Others have already pointed out how the "Captain" would not -- indeed, COULD NOT -- leave the bridge of the ship, so I'll just add . . . NO EXCLAMATION POINTS! No one who gets that excited would EVER be made "Captain." The Captain IS "the calm in ths torm." The Captain ALWAYS "knows what to do." The very BEHAVIOR of the Captain, under fire, is what holds the crew, company, battlion together, calmly doing their duty. The utterances of the Captain, would not be followed by exlamation points. The Captain is never "excited," he/she is the center of calm. He also DOESN'T explain his orders, he just issues them. The crew trust in his orders, because the Captain "knows what to do." And he doesn't address the crew . . . by their first names.
@grantgunz
6 ай бұрын
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
@joerivas9847
6 ай бұрын
I'll see your 4000 quatloos and raise you another 4000!!!!!
@unipsi
6 ай бұрын
7 minutes in and it has already shown me 5 ads...come on KZitem, do better.
@malahammer
6 ай бұрын
This is how channels make money.
@saintsefo4763
6 ай бұрын
Not sure where you're based (I live in NZ) and you can guarantee that every weekend YT ramps up the number of ads. E.g. halfway through a 20 min video, I had already seen ads that totalled more than the actual video plus they even threw in a 30+ min ad towards the end.
@KaySan666
3 ай бұрын
Why the F is the captain of the ship leading a rescue party down to the planet in the middle of a space fight? His job is makeing sure that there'll be a ship to evacuate the people.
@mikejackson3564
5 ай бұрын
Eighty Eight.... or is it 88...either way, love the stories....HFY Sci-Fi!
@nonoyorbusness
6 ай бұрын
FK ing Zorgons again no matter how many times you eliminate the emperor and destroy the empire they're back next week, same time, same channel!
@everydaychristianapologeti2614
5 ай бұрын
I enjoyed the story. Idk why so much hate for it in the comments.
@isaiahwillier6801
6 ай бұрын
I've started to listen to the stories. It started with the one "Humans are Space Orcs. " love the story & hope to hear more.
@CD-gh4oc
6 ай бұрын
I kinda like the "humans are unexpected badasses" stories though.
@iamchuckrock
6 ай бұрын
I'm looking forward to further chapters. Some of the cliffhangers are promising.
@danhopkins3617
6 ай бұрын
Great story eighty eight
@richardflick8021
6 ай бұрын
🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤888🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤If only this were true in the real world😢
@vickymolinar4248
6 ай бұрын
This made me cry
@wm.tomlinson1434
6 ай бұрын
And WHERE exactly did the soot come from as electric fires don't usually produce soot?
@tiararowburn4507
6 ай бұрын
First the aliens are evorians then they are Ivorians then back to evorians?!? Make up your mind!!!
@Shadowkey392
6 ай бұрын
You need to seriously work on your writing, maybe get someone to proofread your work before recording it.
@JackAmberson
5 ай бұрын
Yeah and the captain will be back next week too
@jodymaley3674
6 ай бұрын
This an AI writer? Way too many inconsistencies
@andrewf9322
6 ай бұрын
Chat GPT authored?
@kennethohnemus3192
6 ай бұрын
88 loved the story
@TheSmesi
6 ай бұрын
Written by an AI.
@matyheymer
6 ай бұрын
I’m so sick of hearing the word zorgon
@TerryLewis-c9j
6 ай бұрын
Very good 😊
@teamidris
6 ай бұрын
Well that didn’t work. If it was a lot longer it could do, but that was too much crammed in at once. If you sit down to write 2000 words and it finishes at 8000 that’s fine. :)
@Aelsenaer
6 ай бұрын
Worst automated stories ever. An AI unworthy.
@Thor1O1
6 ай бұрын
This was written by a eight year old.
@joshuaskenandore5774
6 ай бұрын
And yet you've never written anything that could compete with it.
@ronb6152
6 ай бұрын
An eight year old*
@TheSmesi
6 ай бұрын
Or by an AI?
@zacharyr666
5 ай бұрын
More like a 2 year old A.I.
@randyparker4126
6 ай бұрын
How the hell are you supposed to follow these stories in order? Frustrating!
@Lumadous
6 ай бұрын
Its paw patrol.....
@rlopezosorio1975
6 ай бұрын
Are this an AI made up story??
@shaunfarrell3834
6 ай бұрын
This is inconsistent, badly written rubbish. Can’t even be bothered to finish it.
@robertpennington1381
6 ай бұрын
88 ate T ate 😁
@jamesg5426
6 ай бұрын
88 Great story!
@annormal1414
5 ай бұрын
Cool concept but unfortunately very bland writing
@jensjurgensen846
6 ай бұрын
if you are going to continue to make these stories.. at least stop having the captain leading boarding parties all the fucking time.. Captains of ships do not lead boarding parties !
@kacperszadziewicz1779
6 ай бұрын
88 i absolutely love your stories, most of them could be a book, think of it.
@DarthTinderalla-qm9zw
6 ай бұрын
69th comment 🎊🎉
@TheRedStateBlue
6 ай бұрын
bad writing.
@michaelturner3922
6 ай бұрын
Do better then.... 😂
@Redmeer411
6 ай бұрын
It's AI generated.
@michaelturner3922
6 ай бұрын
@@Redmeer411 then it shouldn't be hard at all to do better instead of just complaining. AI is trainable/programmable. So if it isn't up to par for them they can go and do it themselves in a way they like.
@Redmeer411
6 ай бұрын
@@michaelturner3922 How is training an AI going to fix the garbage it's already produced and put up for consumption and monetization on KZitem? Lol your argument is asinine if you produce and make your product available to the public then people have the right to give judgement. The op and I am not the one putting up unedited and poorly written AI generated slop for profit and for others to consume so the responsibility of producing a quality product isn't mine or any of the audience, it's the responsibility of the one pushing it as a finished product especially when it's for profit. So maybe the poster should train their ai better or do the bare minimum amount of effort of proof reading and editing the end product to be of better quality other wise what's the point of this channel?
@Redmeer411
6 ай бұрын
@@michaelturner3922 Yeah that's an asinine argument if I have ever heard one. Get out of here with your logical fallacy. You go around telling people that if they don't like a product they buy at a store they need to go learn how to make their own products? This is no different from that. The OP is not the one producing and putting up AI generated slop on KZitem and marketing it as a finished story for profit like this channel owner did. If you produce a product and put it to the public for consumption then the ones who consume it hold the right to render judgement on its quality. If its good then they can say that and if its bad they can also say that. The burden of quality is not on the audience and consumer its on the creator and proprietor of the product to ensure they are making a quality product. The OP has the right to point out the unedited nearly incoherent "story" is bad. If you like it then bully for you there's no accounting for taste, but its objectively a poorly written piece that the producer couldn't even be bothered to take the time and minimum amount of effort to proofread or edit the end product to remove the glaring contrivances and plot holes to make the story make sense. I personally don't believe that praising bad work when its objectively bad, just because I didn't do the work myself, does anything other than encourage more bad work.
@johnc6738
6 ай бұрын
Why in all these stories does the captain always have to be in the middle of everything? Leaving the ship in the middle of battle to board an enemy ship. leaving the ship on landing parties. The captain does not abandon the ship. He stays at his post to command the ship.
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