Hi I'm Steve a fellow competitor and pyromusical enthusiast. Please know that this is my honest and true feedback on your show and i am in no way trying to bash your design in anyway and i am giving you my true and honest feedback as someone who has watched dozens of award winning shows in real life. First Wanted to Say For a First Time Pyro musical Designer you did very well and for someone with this skill set this is what i would expect to see so bravo :) your getting into the pyromusical world is awesome! . So Lets talk overall Show Musical Score: 8.5/10 The Musical Score is Beautifully Executed Transitions are smooth. The Musical Score does follow a theme. i feel like there could have been more slower periods. When Scripting a pyromusical periods of fast and slow are important. Color Selection on Scenes: 10/10 Colors are well executed and blend together well no periods of akward colors were seen. Patterns 3.0/10 I feel like there is area in here for improvement. The show had quite a few repetitive sequences when capitvating a audience repetitive sequences can get boring to a audience and they tend to loose interest if things arnt changed up a bit. Choregoraphy: 7.0/10: There are periods where you have synchronous with the beat and that's something you look for in a pyro musical. so i gave you a 7.0 for that aspect of things at least there is some structure to this show on the lower effects. However more is always not better in the sky. I see what i like to call sky puke scripting. where you just fill the sky with shells. This is what we call fireworks to music and not a true pyromusical. I feel like the music could have been interpreted better there were lots of missed opportunities for some cool patterns and shell breaks if there wasn't so much spam fill. overall your show gets a 28.5/40 :) I look forward to seeing what you come up with next year there is always time for improvement. it can also help to look up shows online for script ideas :) Best of luck to you and Pyro on!
@djalexmichael2908
7 ай бұрын
thank you very much for your detailed feedback, and thank you for taking time to watch my show!!!
@crazystevepyrotechnics
7 ай бұрын
@@djalexmichael2908 :) my pleasure i look forward to see what you come up with in future contests :) feel free to watch my entry once I release it i would love your feedback as well :)
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