Beautiful. Astounding. Really captured the feeling of remembering something then coming back to reality. I hope you compose more pieces. I think it perfect exactly the way it is.
@luste.r
9 ай бұрын
Thank you so much. I'm currently working on some other pieces as well as lengthening this one. I'm glad you enjoyed this! :)
@luste.r
9 ай бұрын
Hello all, thank you for listening. I've since made a 2nd, longer version of this piece! :) kzitem.info/news/bejne/kpxjxZWVmJV8on4si=c2LzNofQNf8kWi6-
@wxyz7026
9 ай бұрын
I am publishing this text from Google Translate. I don't know if it translates correctly. Please spend more time on the long version of this because it's simply amazing.❤
@luste.r
9 ай бұрын
thank you so much. i’m working on it :)!!
@luste.r
9 ай бұрын
hello! longer version is up now :) kzitem.info/news/bejne/kpxjxZWVmJV8on4si=mpfKgkM0eIr-sudQ
@phoebedraper170
10 ай бұрын
I enjoyed it. Would probably write it in 6/8 and change the beaming of the semiquavers to be two groups of 6
@luste.r
10 ай бұрын
I'm working on remaking this piece/making it longer, I'll keep this in mind, thank you. If you have any suggestions on what I can change/add, please let me know, I'm open to anything!
@lucazordancomposer1733
10 ай бұрын
The only flaw of this piece is its length. I would explore un this idea a little further if I were you :)
@luste.r
10 ай бұрын
I definitely want to experiment more with it, I've been trying some stuff out but I never seem to like what I add. I'm thinking maybe a key change? Not sure
@lucazordancomposer1733
10 ай бұрын
@@luste.rBach's french suites are basically collections of dances. Each dance is devided into two parts, underlined by a "repeat" sign. The first part of each dance is some sort of exposition, while the second one is basically the same thing, but modified, expanded and more elaborated. I suggest you to study those examples (listen to them with a score in your hands) and find some inspiration on which techniques you can use to expand e musical idea.
@luste.r
10 ай бұрын
@@lucazordancomposer1733 Do you have any favorites you’d suggest I listen to?
@lucazordancomposer1733
10 ай бұрын
@@luste.r They are all great ;) And for an analytical standpoint, they all look kind of the same
@allenwangusa
10 ай бұрын
I definitely will go for a Key Change. But towards the end of the song, Change it back to its original key in higher register.
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