【本文】 When students go to university, they go to the campus and take classes in classrooms with other students. However, there are other types of classes for students to take. Some of them take online classes from home without going to the campus. What are some benefits of this? Online classes are helpful for students living far away from the campus baca use they do not need to travel for long periods of time. Moreover, in the case of recorded online classes, students can watch recorded classes over and over again so that they can understand the classes better. However, some students may have problems with their computers or their Internet connection during online classes. This can make it difficult to take the classes smoothly. Also, if students do not go to the campus, they will have fewer chances to see each other face-to-face and talk to other students. Because of this,some students may feel lonely. 【自分の解答】 Today some students take online classes. By doing this, some enjoy various benefits, such as saving time to commute, being able to watch recorded classes many times. However, some struggle with several disadvantages, such as not being able to take the classes smoothly or see other students. It will lead to feel lonely for students.
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