Nice! Very good idea for a new show. I would definitely watch it.
@Fenris77
Күн бұрын
This is the kind of idea that I would say "Indeed" about.
@brendabird9590
Ай бұрын
LOVE ALL OF THIS - I need a new Stargate !! Hope to see this ASAP!
@zsolthb
Ай бұрын
A planet with multiple concurrently functioning stargates? That’s quite impossible according to canon…
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
I can't remember the lore that says if you can or can't. The idea behind Nexus is that they will be experimenting, maybe even making an Earth manufactured gate. They are messing around with the gate network which would lead into more issues.
@zsolthb
Ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp the whole storyline with the Antarctica-gate shows it.
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
@@zsolthb From what I remember, Sam and Jack got booted to the Antarctica gate because it was the original gate for Earth. just can't remember what caused it. But I also remember the episode were the rouge NID agents jump into the stargate to escape. I assumed you could have multiple gates its just not necessary. I was thinking with the new stargate network the programmers would shift gate signatures and alter how it works. In my head the Nexus Facility would have four or five gates, each gate would be locked into a certain part of the galaxy like a north, south, east, west quadrant. The west gate couldn't travel to anywhere in the south quadrant and so on, and gates in those quadrants could only travel to their corresponding gates. In emergency's it would be possible to have certain gates work for other gates. N!'s job is to shut down certain gates, thus creating a prearranged path that could be buffered and controlled. You would have to travel from world "A" to get to world "B"
@LJGrindewald
Ай бұрын
I thought that too. Because one gate will always supersede others in it's vicinity, unless brand new gates are made with the function to do this could it work. We know from Ba'al, making a program or virus that activates multiple gates at once so maybe a program can do it. I think it is possible with a gate with newer programming to allow it. Would mean many worlds could travel to a mid-way point at the same time or whilst another gate is active otherwise the planet would have one gate with set times/timetable. Each world would need a subspace network for set times that line up around each planets clock based on where their gate is. Having this removes the need of ships. I think another midway station between Pegasus would be good too, though with stealth applied to it so Wraith can't see/detect it. Possibly on a satellite with an artificial habitat mimicking a habitable world so there's accommodation between traveling between galaxies. If there's a quarantine timeframe, might as well make it comfortable.
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
@@LJGrindewald That's a great idea. I was thinking the gates would work on a schedule. Gate A would open to Gate B at certain times. There would need to be a universal timer so every world would be on the same page.
@4Lights.5Liights
15 күн бұрын
No No NO! Avoid militarizing Stargate. Make it for discovering new alien species, and their nuances to understanding who designed the universe.
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
That is a brilliant show idea. I sure hope that Stargate comes back, because I sure loved it. My favorite was SG-Universe. I don't know why the show was cancelled after 2 seasons.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
I liked Universe as well. I have an idea about going back to that story.
@brianofphobos8862
Ай бұрын
Best pitch I've seen for SG. Very cool.
@itzcaseykc
2 ай бұрын
All the characters, minus Oberon, sounds interesting.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
What's uninteresting about him? I'm curious and would like the feedback.
@itzcaseykc
2 ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp Well, it's not *just* that the character is uninteresting but that his character is being used another attempt to further the idea that other-worldings, i.e. aliens, came modify or enhance humanity to being what we are now. Plus the fact that I don't like the character. I do not believe this world has been occupied 10,000+ years, what with the problems we have as a species, but it's been for less of a time period. We have digressed (not improved as some choose to believe) in our human nature & mental abilities, our height & strength, and looks. We have become fragile and decrepit as a whole.
@JoeKawano
Ай бұрын
Interesting. I like the backstory with Gilgamesh, not using the sarcophagus which would make him evil....tying into the backstory of the real Epic of Gilgamesh, seeking the Gray-Grow-Young. Love the idea of different Gate Networks interacting. Looks like the Fay might be related to the Nox?
@helgrind3275
2 ай бұрын
Always gotta have a woman in charge. Tired.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
I thought it be interesting. Her personality is meant to contrast past field team leaders. She's less jokey in casual situations. And will often only ever speak unless its necessary to the mission. Not to say she won't "ever" quip just that she's not MCU making light of everything. And while writing the Pilot script I had the thought that she's a good solider in a time where they don't need soldiers.
@PavewayJDAM
2 ай бұрын
DEI team leader.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
@@PavewayJDAM Ah come on man lol How would you do it? I want to make the story good, I'd love the feedback.
@karencopeland6
Ай бұрын
I’m 71 and until the last few years, I would have said, “always have to have a man in charge-tired.” Just because we’ve had male leads since movies were invented, doesn’t make it right, it’s just what you’re used to. I think it’s past time our half had sway, don’t you. If you’re upset they don’t know how to write great women characters- well I’m upset about that too. Think Ripley, Sarah Conner, and of course Carter. Women-in-charge does not equal bad movie necessarily! So don’t listen to this asshole and write a great story (hard enough to do).
@karencopeland6
Ай бұрын
@@PavewayJDAM You do know what those initials mean, right? Using the acronym to imply incompetence is a maga tactic. Think about this. Was Captain Carter incompetent? She’s the only woman on the team. She even has a cringy “woke-ish speech early on (since been deleted), right? The writers were clearly trying to say something “woke.” But here’s the thing-Carter is arguably the most competent person on the team. And Amanda Carter extensively studied the science behind her dialogs. It’s about great writing, complexity and nuance. But sure, let’s all yell DEI because THAT is the mature, helpful way to go.
@bobhammer8993
2 ай бұрын
I suggest this could be a co-occuring series with a another storyline which accent each other similar to law and order or NCIS.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
What do you mean?
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp Yes, I didn't understand that comment, neither.
@theoneyoudontsee8315
3 ай бұрын
you got a good chance of being a righter.
@daniellanning115
2 ай бұрын
Righter or WRITER!!!!😮😊
@ThatRandomChannelTRC
2 ай бұрын
u dont - as u cant even spell writer
@marvhollingworth663
Ай бұрын
The only thing I really don't like is the idea of revealing the stargate to the public. The fact it's always been top secret meant that it could have really happened without us knowing. Setting it in a world where everyone knows about the stargate would shatter the suspension of disbelief. It's exactly what spoiled Independence Day Resurgence.
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
The reason I think it could work is that the Stargate can't reasonably be a secret's forever. Its not really a secret to the top brass its just letting everyone else in. For a finical point of view, non-miltary people who know about the gate would want to exploit it and would do what ever they could to let the world know. The resources off world could be used for the betterment of Earth. With more people knowing it would create new issues for Stargate Command to deal with. The main appeal of Stargate as a concept is that you could travel to any place in the galaxy within seconds. The secret of the gate (I don't think) isn't necessary. The gate being known to the public "would definitely' cause issues and I think those issues are ripe for new stories to tell.
@AlexGreaves-fs4mo
Ай бұрын
best part of this is make a fan base show either cartoon cgi or live action
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
I remember stumbling onto Stargate Infinity
@jimknight6633
3 ай бұрын
Interesting!
@dejoy9872
19 күн бұрын
Try making the comic. It could get popular.
@alexcardenas8244
Ай бұрын
Was this just coincidental AI assisted Art or are you purposefully lobbying for Denzel Washington to be your "Maxwell Creed" character?
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
I didn't really think he looked like him but that be interesting. Would have to rewrite the character though lol
@alexcardenas8244
Ай бұрын
Ha ha, roger that. Best of luck with your script and pitch 👍🏽
@AggieNC
2 ай бұрын
As someone once advised me, there's such a thing as making your characters too special. You got Wraith, Goa'uld, someone from a higher plane. One of these would be an interesting character to explore, but having three just makes this too special, too weird even for the Stargate universe. Even Todd was not a full ally. If Mesh didn't like how the Goa'uld were living why did he not ally with the Tok'ra who also don't use unnatural means to stay alive I would suggest dropping those two (Maybe for later seasons?) and keeping with the idea of a higher being that originated in the higher plane and is separate from the Ascended Ancients. That's an intriguing idea that could open more avenues to explore the complexities of the Ancient's mortal existence. Maybe discovering of the higher plane or a being from there is why they no longer were interested in going onboard the Destiny? Maybe it led to philosophical debates about intruding on another race's reality if they ever were able to ascend. We know some ancients explored ways to artificially ascend, maybe they were more antagonistic to the Fay? How did they even discover they could ascend into that plane of existence? And last thought, maybe change Oberon to a different name. It's too similar to Oberoth from the Asuras. Still much better than anything I can do, keep it up!
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
I see where your coming from. Lilith is like a season 2 character, but Gligamesh I gotta keep. Mesh didn't really have a problem with the others he just thought they were going crazy overboard., and he didn't want to become like that. He's still a Gould, while he's more sympathetic then most. He's not going to challenge the system that had been put in place, he was apart of that system. He was essentially a "good slave owner". he only cares about himself and those he came to care for however they might be at any given time. As for the character of Puck and the Fay. I thought of Puck being like Stargate's version of Q. This powerful trickster. What do you think of him being the reason for why those characters in Universe found that planet randomly. He was following them and made it out of pity or is that too much. As for the other Fay. I'd like to keep it simple. The Fay just don't like going to the mortal plan, its just not where they are from. Puck and Oberon were just weirdo's who enjoyed playing (what the Fay might consider to be) with ants. That would open up other issues like "why didn't the others just come and Oberon after he got stuck? " Its a work in progress
@nathanielbest3541
2 ай бұрын
You should do a second video on this!
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
I'm trying to write a pilot script, but its my first time.
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp Please, read my ideas and let them sink in, as to what I am saying. I think the "public" idea spoils what a clandestine new type of gating system show could be.
@ServentOfcommonsense
Ай бұрын
I watched SG 1 SG Atlantis they both was great because they want fun common sense an was real an your always wanted to know what coming next week.. yes some story was lame or boring but that was only 3% of the time. SG 1 lasted 10 years I think an SG Atlantis I think was 7 years but both are Great. Now this New one SG Nexus well if it does it's home work an understanding of both SG Atlantis&SG 1 series an following them but so many years later but if it new an it makes u wanting more then it might last 15 to 20 years but if become WOKE it will crash an burn dawn in two years that's just being nice. Both series SG 1 An SG Atlantis both had bad Ending but I put that away an when I get the chance I watch them both over an over again because they was that damned good. So if This New SG Nexus series want to even come close to the original then don't screw it up you might have something that will blow away those two original but we see I watch it whenever it comes out with everything going on the real world be nice to watch something not real but wishes I can get out of my real life for the hour every week to make me want stay alive in this real world ever week. So we will see what the future comes fir the SG Nexus.
@larryalbertmanerjr365
Ай бұрын
Sounds great.
@royworks7986
Ай бұрын
Great story!
@nickpond9337
2 ай бұрын
Not shore what else to Add But it is a Very Good Start to the Story ;
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
Any idea's would be appreciated.
@nickpond9337
2 ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp VERY SORRY BUT BIG , idea s have Never been my thing
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
@@nickpond9337 Give me a small idea then lol
@hundetuem
Ай бұрын
The cast doesn´t convince me.
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
Who would you add??
@hundetuem
Ай бұрын
@@Mord12gp In the lead: someone over 30. At least not under 20.
@flickshtain
14 күн бұрын
The fan`s opinions did not help to save previous Stargate shows, not even one of them. What exactly make you think that your efforts will work, with all due respect?
@Mord12gp
14 күн бұрын
Well, its fanfiction my guy. I just want to know if what I made makes some sense and if you guys like it and I want to know what you'd think make it better.
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
After watching and thinking, I disagree "a little" with your premise. Why not make it "semi-known" and not "public"? Say, like only the top people that need to know will know about SG's. But, that this Team is trying to make the travel safer for elites and privileged individuals to travel the gate system. Then, you also have the requirement to keep everything secret, and then that could lead to some real fun show offerings where they have to stop people from making it public. Also, maybe, other countries want to get in on the action, so they have to stop rogue nations from building their own gates or from hacking into our new NG gate system. Also, maybe, even have a new gate created that can go further, but maybe it has a cool-down period where they can't come back for a few days. Then, they're stuck somewhere without support, or maybe, it blows the fuses of the gates that they go to. Then, the Team has to be off-link and alone to fight things out, and has to wait for 48 or 72 hours for reinforcements. For me, those are some ideas that I'd add to your plan, but making it public too soon, really ruins the possibilities of the show.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
I like the idea about them "making New Gates" in me head the Nexus Facility is also a site for human made gate tech. The humans have serval gates on one planet so they had to mess with the active gate network to get it to work. I like the idea of them experimenting with two-way gate travel . As for the stargate-public situation. The public wouldn't know "Everything" the government won't tell people about how the Gould almost blew up the stargate one time, at least not for another few decades. And like in real life only wealthy influential people would be able to travel through the Stargate. Another idea I have is about a religious group trying to set up a colony on another planet and then something happens. A feel like regular people knowing brings in so many potential stories. Political back door deals as different Earth governments make alliances with off-worlder factions. What happens when one off-world faction goes to war with another and America is friendly with one faction and China with the other?
@antongoykhman
Ай бұрын
What gives Earth the right to assume control of the galaxy gate network?
@Mord12gp
Ай бұрын
Well...they Killed Ra their first time really out. They took down Apopois, and took down the Replicators, and defeated the Ori. And lets not forget they helped jump start the Jaffa rebellion. ANd Earth forces helped figure out an new way of travel with the Atlantis. The only ones who pose a bigger threat would be the Jedi or who ever those guys pretending to be farms were lol
@nickpond9337
2 ай бұрын
Well the First Good Point you have got more gates to get to other Aeras of space , a Little Bit Disapointed although NOT Suprised that Normal People know about the Stargate Program , I Warned You that i was bad making New Ideas Very Sorry ;
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
All good
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
No, it's bad if show opens up with people knowing. Better if they don't know, and they fear that "Secrets" will leak out. That's better way to have it, and you could even have to track down who is leaking the secret. Or, a show on someone stealing plans. Etc. Even have it like a Spy Show some nights.
@MH5XXXX
Ай бұрын
interesting story
@seniormfwic
26 күн бұрын
You just got canceled before the first episode. Standard formula, no new turn or twist, same pretty actors (Usually with little or no talent).
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
Also, not sure that I like Lithinn. Don't know what she adds to the team. And, she's older so not a very attractive member of team, and would be hard to find old person who can do stuntwork.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
Well she's meant to look younger, In all honesty I haven't completely got a grasp on her story, only that she lost a war to another hive queen and was hated enough that she knew they would hunt her for years. Liltih is supposed to be clever. She cares more about her safety then anything else and she felt being around the Earth humans would ensure that safety. Her joining the team is meant represent a kind of paradigm shift in the politics of the story. Old enemies can become allies. Honestly it makes for sense for the Wraith to be more friendly with the humans. Gligemsh is supposed to be an outlier in his species so unless he can make more of himself he's the only Gould that will ever be ":truly" a friend to humanity. The Wraiths only thing is that they eat people. If they have something other then humans to eat they stop really being an issue. There would still be other issues. I love the feed back.
@PoeLemic
2 ай бұрын
Also, I'd cut down the Team. Too many people to keep track of. Make it two people (or so) and they slowly have to add others and convince them to join. If you have 6 people, man, that's a lot of people for the Audience to grow to know, understand them, know their strengths & weaknesses, etc. Make it simple from the start.
@Mord12gp
2 ай бұрын
Amanda and Maxwell are Joe's pick for the N1, he would leave any team adjustment up to Amanda. Other teams would come later. N1's job is to survey planets and determine if the Stargate on that world is suitable for decommissioning from the Stargate Network. If the Stargate is in use they'd leave it be, if not they would mark the Stargate for decommissioning. This way we can still travel through the gate and things could happen.
@patrick3136
6 күн бұрын
You don't need several gates. Just one,it's the addresses that are different. Gilgamesh= Tokra. Sarcophagus gave them longevity,in the same body. You state he is ancient. Doesn't work,on it's own. Oberon. ancient gene. this doesn't really work. It's the age of the ancients that matters,not the gene. Age breeding technological advances,which is what they really are about.
@Mord12gp
6 күн бұрын
The multiple gates are meant to facilitate more gate travel. Say a company has a shipment coming in from World A through Nexus, at the same time World B has a group of Diplomates coming in. The Mountain complex could only allow one group in a time. Nexus would allow rapid Gate travel though out the Galaxy. Nexus job is meant to be a hub, N1's job is prune off certain gates so anyone using them is forced to go to Stargate Command approved worlds. Gilgamesh = Tokra maybe. I envision Gil to be more of a selfish character. He never wanted to change Gould or the system only how he personally went about that system. He can be altruistic but only for those he cares for personally. Oberon - yea, even I thought that was a bit much. If I did it I would never explicitly say that "HIS GENES" are the reason for the ancients being smart. At best it be implied. I wanted the Ancient Gene to be the marker for Oberon. still like the idea that him breeding with the Ancients and becoming trapped. The only way he could leave would be to kill every human or at least those with his genes. Oberon's whole thing is that he wants to wipe out all human life in the galaxy. Its a new threat that the show has never faced.
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