Well now we all know why Wyatt knows so much about the Drazzan and why he hates them so much, but also why he wanted to serve, the Marines rescued him and the other survivors...
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter is nearly done!
@Wise4HarvestTime
7 ай бұрын
@@ekhidna4the next chapter is a masterpiece. My favorite. Stories this good get me excited about writing
@Hallreaver
7 ай бұрын
@@ekhidna4 Thank you so much for writing this story, it is an incredible story! Well written ^^
@ObesePuppies
4 ай бұрын
It was kinda foreshadowed In the previous chapters.
@elvisalpha
7 ай бұрын
Thanks for the warning but I'm not skipping the chapter. Let's go!
@elvisalpha
7 ай бұрын
Finished it. Very good! Very gory! Still, it was worth it. Great writing.
@joshplant89
5 ай бұрын
Mood
@rbishop9062
7 ай бұрын
The detail is impressive, gory but impressive. If anyone had any doubt about the authors skill in writing before I'm sure that doubt is gone after this chapter.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@johncunningham4820
7 ай бұрын
The True Horror of the " Space Triffids " . Break out the Agent Orange I say .
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Wyatt: Yes, I want to request enough of it to replace the oceans of the Drazzan homeworld with it, please.
@ballroomdru
7 ай бұрын
This story deserves publishing.
@evanbeers1644
7 ай бұрын
It deserves a CGI anime at least
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
You flatter me!
@Wise4HarvestTime
7 ай бұрын
It's not flattery @@ekhidna4 it's really good work. I still have a hard time psychologically relating to running away from a plant. Or as Wyatt ends up with such PTSD he's afraid of trees.... The main thing that is unexplained with the drazan is why they don't use cows or chickens and their excrement for their food rather than a dangerous species like the humans. Maybe they don't consider them dangerous... We humans as farmers prefer not to risk our lives too much when we harvest or hunt But even without the noir navios help, woodshaft wasn't like harvesting apples at an orchard... The humans bite back To a drazan being carnivorous is like being vegetarian is to humans 🤣
@sky1luv793
4 ай бұрын
It's not!? 😳
@rileylupo7607
4 ай бұрын
This story deserves to be published
@jblockminermc5401
7 ай бұрын
Wow this is a well written backstory, I’ve been invested throughout the entire chapter. Good job author, you did not disappoint .
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thank you! Next chapter is nearly done!
@TransamJc
5 ай бұрын
@@ekhidna4do you make or find the images
@Soundwave119
7 ай бұрын
Thank you for starting the this part of chapter 20 with a warning about graphic depections death and torturous situations. Welp, I didn't expect Wyatt to be captured by the Drazin and taken to one of their ships. Interesting Wyatt only gets free of the Drazin because of smart adult smuggled some explosives for the right moment. Lucky for Wyatt those marines came just in time to save him. Dam this episode was truly brutal but fathful to how brutal the Drazin have been depection so far.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter is nearly done!
@asiseeit2041
7 ай бұрын
Ruthless but Wyatt already let on. Good on you for the warning. How the drazzen home world hasn’t been agent oranged YET I don’t know lol. Great story!
@stratometal
7 ай бұрын
Agent orange the planet, nice one.
@asiseeit2041
7 ай бұрын
Old guys remember history lol
@Soundwave119
7 ай бұрын
From what I remember from a earlier chapter is that all the Drazin raiders officially have no connection by the Drazin government and are always disavowed. Then from what I remember the Drazin government is formidable enough that it would take most if not all of their neighboring nations to band together to make it worth while due to the astronomical costs of such an extermination effort. One of the biggest problems is the Astor Principality in the past does not play well with its neighbors and thus undermining such a potential alliance to come into existence.
@stratometal
7 ай бұрын
@@Soundwave119 Yep, that's what I remember as well. It also seems like the Principality is also not as advanced in some fields and most likely in tactics as other Human realms. At least judging by their reaction towards the Black Ships. My reasoning regarding the Drazan stance on the raiders is that they are a convenient tool for them to maintain the humans and perhaps other aliens from becoming too strong to the point they could then take them on. The divisions amongst humanity are also another factor, making it harder for humans to band together and wipe them out. But I am certain the Drazan don't care what raiders do, and definitively reap the benefits of what they do, one way or another. Just like the different kingdoms on earth did with regards to their corsairs, as long as they did not turn against their own ships.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
@@Soundwave119 That's correct, yes.
@shorthand1121
7 ай бұрын
I want to thank the author for all of the emotional depth he or she has put in to this. I now understand why chapters are coming a bit slowly ... Keep up the good work.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
I thank you for being here, mate.
@RebelMerc
7 ай бұрын
The warning was appropriate. What a horrible monstrous race. One must wonder how they gained space flight and the poor beings that acidently gave it to them. That would be an horror story all on its own. But targeting their home world with astroids moving at near the speed of light would quickly end that world. Why has such an evil been allow to continue... why? for the story of course. Who knows what Waytt will get to do after the final chapters. May he get his completely justifiable revenge on all of them one day.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter is nearly done!
@RebelMerc
7 ай бұрын
@@ekhidna4Thanks for the heads up. I am looking forward to it.
@rjgabi7017
6 ай бұрын
WHERE IS AGENT ORANGE
@g6qwerty
6 ай бұрын
Think it was stated earlier in the story that they generally keep to them selves except for a few raiding parties here and there so no major invasions so its cheaper and more cost effective to not exterminate them than it is to loose a few thousand people here and there.
@leonievanheerden7090
7 ай бұрын
This wasn't easy listening, though necessary for giving insight into Wyatt's spirit.Brilliant and awesome writer 💐💐💐💐
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@rjcbr1191
2 ай бұрын
So very heart wrenching! Makes me wonder what the animals that humans wantonly hunt down and kill or raise on "factory farms" to be slaughtered so we can eat them must think of us.
@Shadow.Dragon
7 ай бұрын
WOW!!!! That was intense!
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@Revittize
7 ай бұрын
This was great, I'll have to listen to it again, at one point I thought Wyatt was naked before he went into the the ducts, then later it seemed like he still had his clothes on. anyone would have been traumatized by this experience. I don't really think this experience drove him into service, I think he was already headed there, but I think it might show a little more why he sees himself as a lowly commoner. Great job
@davidorf3921
7 ай бұрын
I'd say his rescue by the Marines maybe nudged him towards the Navy rather than one of the two other options mentioned previously, agree about why he sees himself (and commoners in general) as worthless
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter is nearly done!
@solidsteel3634
7 ай бұрын
I have never hated a fictional race more than these plants... Chapeu to the writer...👏
@Hiddenhider2
7 ай бұрын
Clicked on the part two only to find out that part three is already on, now I’ve got something to listen to from my drive home
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Hope you enjoyed it!
@Hiddenhider2
7 ай бұрын
@@ekhidna4 most definitely; excellent work. I’ve got a sneaking suspicion that the next part isn’t but a day or two away; I hope.
@Bellator_of_the_Shadow
7 ай бұрын
Describes in "masterful detail" .........thats a good thing that he is a master at it
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@Wise4HarvestTime
7 ай бұрын
I wonder if you could make a nice salad or stew with drazan carcass... A gourmet cooking show featuring drazan vegetation might help persuade those plants to reconsider their ways 😂
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Wyatt: WRITE THAT DOWN! WRITE THAT DOWN!
@Wise4HarvestTime
7 ай бұрын
😂@@ekhidna4
@ssnerd583
4 ай бұрын
....BAH....get the oil boiling and dump 'em in
@Wise4HarvestTime
4 ай бұрын
@@ssnerd583 deep fried drazan chips... Yummm
@Soloong_Gaybowzer
7 ай бұрын
The galaxy would be a better place if the Drazzan were exterminated.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Wyatt surely agrees.
@mikemesser4326
7 ай бұрын
To Serve Man ….
@merrick1588
7 ай бұрын
and now it gets nasty
@scifistories1977
7 ай бұрын
😬😬
@Soundwave119
7 ай бұрын
To say the least and very much an understatement. Epically considering how much this mess up Wyatt.
@ObesePuppies
4 ай бұрын
This reminds me of those chapters in the GANTZ manga where the aliens consume humans like livestock.
@ik7578
7 ай бұрын
This is a great day!
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@Wise4HarvestTime
7 ай бұрын
To a drazan being carnivorous is like being vegetarian is to humans but... The main thing that is unexplained with the drazan is why they don't use cows or chickens and their excrement for their food rather than a dangerous species like the humans. Maybe they don't consider humans dangerous... We humans as farmers prefer not to risk our lives too much when we harvest or hunt But even without the noir navio's help, woodshaft wasn't like harvesting apples at an orchard... The humans bite back Why start a war ? I think there is an intriguing answer and it may involve an unscrupulous human faction
@KarterBigs
7 ай бұрын
Sir Jonathan I have a complaint! You posted part 3 before part 2! It's out of order now! 😂😂😂 Just giving you a hard time, have a great week Jonathan thanks for your hard work!
@scifistories1977
7 ай бұрын
Thanks again Karter! I uploaded part 2 before part 3 and set them to both go live at the same time! Must be a youtube thing. The playlist has the right order, I checked.
@shorthand1121
7 ай бұрын
Next time I guess you'll have to offset by a second or a minute @@scifistories1977
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Thank you, my dude!
@TheMistrG
5 ай бұрын
I probably missed it, but what is the name of the Drazzan nation? If there is such a thing.
@wboyd33
7 ай бұрын
Dang, that's pretty descriptive. I think i want some soup now...just kidding...maybe.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter coming soon!
@Daniel-rv5is
6 ай бұрын
Sounds like they need round up prematrol and diesel fuel in a super soaker
@jfeva415
5 ай бұрын
Where do I send money for the anime or live action movie?
@smokinggnu6584
7 ай бұрын
Gonna put reading this off for a bit, not entirely in the right frame of mind due to events over the weekend. Not skipping anything, though.
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Hope things get better for you, mate.
@dembeckfarms
7 ай бұрын
Damn this got DARK
@rayairey5770
7 ай бұрын
"Blood curdling" chapter.......
@Brocachoo
7 ай бұрын
Wow, dark as &&&&
@Miksantos-h2x
7 ай бұрын
😮
@kelvunmedina90
5 ай бұрын
Holy sh!t......
@yomogami4561
7 ай бұрын
more please part 3 is a continuation of the story so visit it
@ekhidna4
7 ай бұрын
Next chapter coming soon!
@sfhu4196
7 ай бұрын
❤🎉
@papashakeshake6268
7 ай бұрын
22nd thumbs up
@pinkythumb2680
7 ай бұрын
116tb thumbs up
@walterward3811
7 ай бұрын
No one cares
@papashakeshake6268
7 ай бұрын
then why did you respond ?@@walterward3811
@Riflemen123
7 ай бұрын
Getting two parts right after the first was a surprise, but a welcome one. @ekhidna4 Keep up the good work man, been enjoying your story.
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