Oh Yeah, the black ship, been hooked for months now, cant wait to see what happens
@domsterish
2 ай бұрын
Once you go black you can't go back
@carsparks1980
4 ай бұрын
1. Wyatt needs to learn to control his anger. First Salazar's glove, now this. I hope the capture info gets passed to Wyatt quickly. 2. Nultar;s reaction was ... entertaining 😆 Here's hoping Wyatt can help rehabilitate House Olkhara. 3. THIS is going to get interesting. The ship's complement looks more like escapees/refugees than pirates, and the ship's condition backs this up. Again, many thanks to the author and the channel for the fine work. Absolutely looking forward to the next installment!
@snowwolf8186
4 ай бұрын
I am thinking that is what Nultar's is hoping. The words of Clara come to mind. Were she say they will Promise you riches beyond your wildest dreams and cover there words in the sweetest of honey. I hope I am wrong but only time will tell. As for the children, most likely Refugees, now turn into a generation ship.😔
@carsparks1980
4 ай бұрын
@@snowwolf81861. Hoping for rehab is a fair call, but curiosity is another point. Don't forget the squadron members' conversation at the beginning of Chapter 33 pt 1, where all the noble types were mystified and only Leo had it right. To be honest, they had the same reaction Jade had. Wyatt is different - and that concerns them. 1a. Another point - Nultar has nothing to offer except friendship, which is a huge thing to Wyatt but not the sort of thing most nobles value. 2. This isn't a generation ship IMO. Overall ship condition and lack of generational diversity argue against it. Although.... One wonders what "situation" Arkady encountered.
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
I don't think Wyatt can rehabilitate House Okara, but as a commander Wyatt's responsibilities include ensuring that those under his command are performing to their best, you could well argue that the situation with the failing House Okara is causing problems for Nultara, so I could certainly see Wyatt asking Clara if there is anything she can do to help save the Loyal house without also offending House Reid, ideally without making it obvious that the request comes from Wyatt. In an ideal situation Wyatt engineers a scenario whereby Nultar does something Heroic. this then lets Clara make some sort of Award to Nultar along with an apparently throwaway comment that it is a shame his noble hose is suffering and she wishes that loyal houses would support each other more in these trying times. This then causes house Reid to suspend it's attempts to destroy the house and gets other houses to do small things to help. Result House Okara survives and is grateful to the Astors, House Reid looses nothing and so saves face and Nultar realises that Wyatt somehow set this up and decides to do his best for his commander
@carsparks1980
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 TBH, I did say "help" rehabilitate House Olkara. While Wyatt does have standing, it's nothing like enough to do it on his own. Wyatt can offer the chance, but Nultar needs to step up when it comes. Royal favor is not handed out like pediatrician's candy. As an aside, I'm noticing some pushback in the comments. I hope ekhidna holds fast to his vision. For this story to have legs it needs to make sense, which makes these developmental episodes essential.
@snowwolf8186
3 ай бұрын
@@carsparks1980on your point chap 33 pt 1 you are correct I forgot that. So yes he could be seeing who Wyatt really is, makes sense. Now this makes them think he not just a Commoner.
@adriancooper78
4 ай бұрын
I am so so hooked to this series. I can't wait for the next one. Pirates, Noble, Royals, races from other planets..... I just fiend for each episode!!!
@evanbeers1644
3 ай бұрын
maybe they have a backstory like MC? Like they're from some backwater planet and were sent up Chich creek only to have some nobleman stole their paddle.
@merrick1588
4 ай бұрын
Noble women are like predators, and while they may sniff around they know at least 2 far more dangerous predators see poor Wyatt as prey
@stratometal
4 ай бұрын
Women in general, but women in power more so. LMAO. 🤣
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Maybe, think of the Nobles eyeing up Wyatt as Hyenas looking to gobble up the tasty young lion cub, fortunately for the cub he is protected by a pair of lionesses. Pretty soon the cub is going to be an Alpha Male at which point the Hyenas will look for easier prey
@stratometal
4 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 Ugh, all hyenas have penis, even females... Also they got a bad rep that is undeserved. Lions on the other hand are overhyped, the true king of cats s the tiger, and "Alpha" males are a joke, lazy bums that preen and do nothing except be sugar babies, and when they serve their purpose the lionesses castrate them.
@vanguard9067
4 ай бұрын
Well, that’s an unexpected finding resulting from the boarding assault. I have no clue as to what it means - I like that.
@johncunningham4820
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921. Excellent analogy .
@outlawrprc2131
4 ай бұрын
I work at night and I was sleeping and woke up out of nowhere and saw the new chapter was out I'm in trouble even my subconscious is addicted to this ....
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
The Lord works in mysterious ways. 😊
@thomasohanlon1060
4 ай бұрын
Damn, wasn’t expecting a new episode so soon, I can’t listen too it till tomorrow at lunch or my crew will be pissed. Just wanted to say thanks for the new episode and you just made a bunch of carpenters and the one electrician happy .
@scifistories1977
4 ай бұрын
I'm glad you all enjoy the story together. That's great to hear. Part 3 of chapter 37 will be out in a couple of days, too.
@thomasohanlon1060
4 ай бұрын
@@scifistories1977 It would be very tempting to hold today’s episode and save it to play with the next one but I don’t think my boss or the client would like it, being we are about three to four weeks before we start moving people off this job. But I think they will keep playing the episode to what ever site they move to.
@steveb6103
4 ай бұрын
@@thomasohanlon1060 I hope the story isn't going to end at that point! A link to wherever it moves to would be greatly appreciated!
@diclicious9100
3 ай бұрын
Ya, im gonna need a new chapter every 3 days for like the rest of my life so... get back at it. Lol
@thomasohanlon1060
3 ай бұрын
@@steveb6103 that all depends on when the next job that I’m running opens up. Looks like as of right now three weeks after the punch list is done so about nine weeks before some of them are back. Then slowly they all return & sometimes a new apprentice shows up.
@Revittize
4 ай бұрын
Great chapter Liked the connection Wyatt was making with his squad mate. It will be interesting to see what is on the bridge exactly. Yet one more mystery to be solved that will have me eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
@dennisstancil1427
4 ай бұрын
intriguing, minors in space, the next chapter will be great I am sure of it, and as always captivating and looking forward to the next chapter, thank you.
@fredflint5645
4 ай бұрын
His training seems to be progressing. The interdiction of what could be a training vessel is adding new possibilities to the story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
@andrewlatex950
4 ай бұрын
Another excellent chapter, thank you , ☺️
@jpwoelfling
4 ай бұрын
Back to a little bit of Action! yeah
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
OK I just was having a chat with EkhidnaWritez they have not yet finished re writing part 3 which is expected to be another 5 - 6 thousand words currently they think another day or two before it will be out. The lengths greater than parts 1 or 2 so hopefully a good ending for the week
@kevindunn5591
3 ай бұрын
Thank you for the update!
@Darthjacob-xg9sm
3 ай бұрын
Can you find out what they is doing? I've been trying to contact them.
@carsparks1980
3 ай бұрын
Many thanks for the head's up.
@danwhiteman2529
3 ай бұрын
Thanks David Orf for the info.
@bobhedden4484
3 ай бұрын
Thanks for the update.
@NaraClanGaming
3 ай бұрын
I would love to own a hard-back copy of this. The black ship deserves to be published!
@drew-uk6976
4 ай бұрын
I hope Wyatt can find a way to help Nultar Olkara's family regain their noble standing, maybe thru Salazar Reid some how?.
@patricioacuna1688
4 ай бұрын
Pretty much everyone in the black shop is going the “loyalty it’s own reward “ route so it will happen unless killed unless you’re a reed lol
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
@@patricioacuna1688 Even Salazar might get redeemed you never know
@mireland1451
3 ай бұрын
with my eyes failing reading is out my friends told me about your story's on tube and I've not looked back and sadness gone the people you and yours help with these wonderful story's thanking you very much
@Sethy1ST
4 ай бұрын
I was summoned here by the notification, thanks again for the new chapter both you and the author
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Not a new chapter just part 2 of Chapter 37 with Part 3 tomorrow (Same time)
@waterflows2569
4 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 PART 3 TOMORROW? YEAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
@@waterflows2569 or maybe 2 days, either way it's this week LOL
@Sethy1ST
4 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 oh yeah, ik, its just that its like, as long as an entire chapter, so its basically one yk?
@PeterEccles
3 ай бұрын
I can't believe how well written this series is. Good characters that have real personalities.
@edwardmetz4270
Ай бұрын
😮
@kojopilgrim9550
4 ай бұрын
“Hopped 3 times and cracked her neck,” Cynthia related to Goku?
@snowwolf8186
4 ай бұрын
She is Sarah Connor. 👍
@jeremyharris5060
3 ай бұрын
She’s Ayra Stark
@Pxxat5
4 ай бұрын
Great story....hooks you fast, need more...need more...need more
@Spacemanlacey1
3 ай бұрын
I've said this before & no doubt will again - this is without any question the best series I've ever had the pleasure of listening to. My respect & thanks to both the author & speaker. I've never had such anticipation for each episode 👍❤️
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
4 ай бұрын
Surprise, looks like Redford is training Clara to be a real captain too. Wyatt has some competition
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
I think he is training Clara to be an Admiral
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 yes but she likes piloting and obviously got same lesson Wyatt got on taking advice from subordinates then make decision. Note: she included Gault with the other banner holders for advice
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
@@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx Even though she is in the Captains chair I think it's more about command than piloting the Noirnavio
@bobhedden4484
4 ай бұрын
Another great release. It's funny that even through it was 25 minutes it seemed like 2 minutes. I can't get enough of this story. It appears that Milkades is now starting Wyatts sniper training too. Love it. Now we have to wait on part 3. Great work on the writing ekhidnawritez.
@terrywilson1226
3 ай бұрын
we know he is ok with a rifle. we know he is good with dueling pistols . Wyatt is the gunslinger and Cynthia is the blade. they are grooming Wyatt to be the perfect weapon
@terrimountjoy2834
3 ай бұрын
Happy to see Milkaies is given a part in the story
@codyayres
4 ай бұрын
I need more. This story is so good.
@Shadow.Dragon
3 ай бұрын
Great episode! Glade they didn't destroy the "pirate" ship. It appears to be a refugee ship.
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
Its a real good possibility or what another person said was potential escapes of Drazin pirates.
@Ds-xi2sq
4 ай бұрын
OOOoOOOo It's getting juicy ! ... Roll that beautiful bean footage ! .... My birthday is tomorrow , keeping my fingers crossed for PART 3 .... Note >>> Wyatt don't forget to inform Princess Clara about the new upgrades to your fighter ! Loyalty Is It's Own Reward ! .... Note to myself : Can't wait to see Wyatt's Fighter in action with the new Mods ! ... GAME CHANGER !
@ralphgoodman8181
3 ай бұрын
I have always look to a story about Wyatt, Cynthia and their My Lady Clara. Thanks for the post, but maybe more of a clff hanger. LOL
@terrillhester704
3 ай бұрын
Love it hooked on it. The Black Ship would make a hell of a TV series. I can't get enough. I have listened to the story 3 times . While waiting on new chapters.
@steelelindbloom8915
4 ай бұрын
It’s such a minor detail, but I appreciate that space was given for gay men to be seen to exist, not judged and treated the same. I recognize some are generally just checking similar to the ladies for clout/access/power. Thank you for the balanced approach. :) Loving the adventure so far, and looking forward to what comes next.
@marcinwasicki
3 ай бұрын
This series is super captivative! Plese keep up the good work. Compliments to the author - great story!❤
@Motobro699
4 ай бұрын
man I love this story has about everything Im looking for in a story only thing missing is a bit od romance not over the top but subtle.
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
I have a feeling it coming but for Wyatt its not going to happen until at least he has found his equilibrium as a officer and an noble. Then he may be open to romance but probably any woman who has genuine romantic feelings for him will have to beet him over the head metaphorically and/or physically to get him to see it. Considering originally Wyatt was not going to even think about romance or marriage until he completed his tour of duty and left the navy.
@MrKifischer
4 ай бұрын
Ha! Straight to it! I LOVE IT!!!!!!
@snappa77
3 ай бұрын
Show your love and support.... Hit the LIKE 👍 Click the BELL 🔔 Leave a COMMENT 💬!!
@patbrownlee5274
3 ай бұрын
ship full of kids this is a twist I did not exspect... Realy liking this good work.😎💓💓
@Bespelled22
4 ай бұрын
Good one, eagerly awaiting the next
@davidsmith6001
4 ай бұрын
Cynthia just doesn't want a man weaker than herself to protect our princess.
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
I think Wyatt is always going to be weaker than her, Cynthia want's a good man to protect Clara if she is ever unable to do so, I suspect Cynthia was custom built to look after Clara She is by my estimate as good as a pair of Royal Marines in a fight or at least that is how she rates herself based on the action that took the Noirnavio that means she has at the very least the highest level combat related genetic and/or cybernetic implants nd has I suspect been raised from birth as a bodyguard. No matter what training and implants Wyatt gets he is never going to match that, however with her training he will be far better prepared to take care of himself and if Cynthia is out of action for any reason he will be an acceptable if poor substitute to protect Clara, enough to get her to a ship and use his true skills to get away and keep her safe
@kamirostorino9416
4 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 True. Unlike Cynthia Wyatt was not born a noble so he cannot get many implants cuz he is too old to be made compatible with them
@diclicious9100
3 ай бұрын
I agree but would also add that she cares for Wyatt and in a scenario where she is not with him she wants to feel comforted with the knowledge that he can protect himself.
@drew-uk6976
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 I suspect Cynthia was selected & genetically altered pre-birth to be a bodyguard for the Astors so she'll have tier 1 implants, and as we learned back on Matcha they can only be applied in the womb
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 Only problem I see with Cynthia as a bodyguard from birth is, why just Clara if this is being done. Is something special about Clara that was known the first year of her life? Is Veronica another one like Cynthia maybe for her brother ( if so this plan is off the tracks)?
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
Wyatt looking for gifts, how about either whittling out models of the Noirnavio or paintings? Wyatt was good at whittling and Mr Warlo taught him to paint I know someone's collection could us one probably have to be a different scale maybe use the replicator to produce many copies to distribute a great loyalty team building action.
@rshowers7590
3 ай бұрын
This would be a fantastic show. Animated or live actors…it would be unreal.
@johnh1872
4 ай бұрын
Love this story. Only one I'm following at the moment. I'm not good following more than one story at a time.
@Awesomeboy-fq9nt
4 ай бұрын
Yes new episode
@johntfs
3 ай бұрын
I respect that the story didn't invent some BS reason for Wyatt to be on the boarding party and just followed Captain Milkades for the boarding party. Also cool that the story allowed Redford and Wyatt to be on Team "Kill the Ship (that turned out to be) Full of Teens and Children." My wild-ass guess is that this used to be a pirate/slaver ship and the slave-kids revolted and took it over. I wonder if this will be the start of Clara building a fleet.
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
Interesting seeing this chapter with Wyatt once again getting owned by Cynthia beating up him up during their training sessions. Nice touch of having Nultar Olkara seeing Wyatt’s unfortunate situation. I do like how we bit of time gap of about 2 weeks to speed things along faster. Its nice to see Wyatt’s character growth in with his situational awareness of his surroundings making him notice thing that he did not notice before. Like how many unmarried noble women of the Noirnavio are trying to subtly seduce him by showing their sexual interest in him. Its no surprise that after a while of Wyatt ingoring all sexual advances of noble women, that some would think he is gay and gay/bisexual noble guys try to woo him now too! Not surprising that some bold commoner women would also try to get Wyatt as their boyfriend and if lucky their husband. No surprise that Wyatt is confused why the noble women are only using nonverbal seduction attempts. Glad to see that Wyatt is getting better in hand to hand combat. I do like how Nultar helps Wyatt up and to his room and the 2 get to know each other better. I do love how Wyatt tells Nultar that the most intimate relationship he has is with the floor with how Cynthia keeps making him spend much time there. Its nice to hear about Nultar’s background and how his house Olkara bordered the Windfield territory and it became a fallen house due to the machinations of house Ried. I do like how Wyatt asks Nultar for a more grounded view on noble politics, especially with a more bleak view than Cynthia and Clara due to he’s from a fallen house. Its interesting to hear that a fallen house does not mean dead house but a house on the rocks that may have lands and money but has basically no political or economic power. I do like how Nultar has a reasonable hatred of house Ried is based on the disproportional retaliation Ried did to his house example of where a grenade should be used but a tactical nuclear weapon was used instead. I do like how Nultar’s mood is improved by just hearing Wyatt does he want to hear why Salazar Ried is on the ship with a mischievous grin.☺ Not surprised that Nultar ended up laughing tears hearing how Wyatt end up owning Salazar in the duel. It was hilarious how Nultar end up laughing so much that he nearly fell to the ground due to hearing how Salazar was severely punished for his stunt by Commander Juliana and by his own house for bring it such shame! 🤣 I have a feeling this is the start of good friendship between Wyatt and Nultar. I would not be surprised that Nultar’s friendship with Wyatt will end up becoming the life line his house needs to save itself from its slow death spiral. Interesting unexpected encounter of a pirate vessel and without them knowing the Noirnavio is there. I do like Clara asks her command staff what they think is the best idea to handle the pirate ship. It was smart of Clara to do a boarding action of the pirate ship to gain intel, especially if this ship is part of a pirate syndicate. Well this is nice twist the last section was from Captain Milkades POV and confusion that this “pirate ships” crew seems to made up of mostly teenagers. It will be interesting seeing what EkhidnaWritez has planned with this "Pirate ship." I do hope that Cynitha has a recording of the entire sitruation of Wyatt and Salazar’s duel. This way Nultar can watch the entire thing bringing him much joy and have him send a copy of it to his family.😊
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
There may be something on the planetoid as Wyatt hasn't got to try out his hopped up fighter. If this is where part 3 goes to where is Clara's promised explanation?
@scifistories1977
3 ай бұрын
Thank you, soundwave!
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
@@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx Its a real good possibility but it would be more funny if there was nothing to find on the planetiod and mess with the exceptions of many readers. Its some thing I could totally see EkhidnaWritez doing since he has done it in the past before. I do think Clara's explanation on her and Cynthia's fearsome reputations amongst nobles will be probably after this situation with the "pirate ship" is resolved and in another chapter not in any potential part 3.
@michaelswords9827
4 ай бұрын
O give me the next one please great work 😊😊😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
@yomogami4561
4 ай бұрын
thanks for an interesting chapter [part 2]
@russellpickett6292
4 ай бұрын
I am really enjoying the story line for this series. Between this and Armored Terrain I am always waiting for the next story!
@deplorable1-2
4 ай бұрын
Yup, daily dose. Jitters subsiding......for now.
@dotnet97
4 ай бұрын
I get the impression that this ship got stranded due to technical issues and got turned into essentially a generation ship. Or, maybe, this is part of whatever conspiracy was hinted at with the Drazan.
@six-gunsound1145
4 ай бұрын
What if the captured cattle fought back and won? That would explain why they are out of ammo
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Maybe the Pirates put their kids on a spare ship with just enough older people on board to take it somewhere and hide from the Drazzan whilst they stayed behind to stop the Drazzan getting their children ?
@Sethy1ST
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 actually a valid theory, possible
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
Not a generation ship. I can't see in this picture what had to be changed for part 3
@daghost11
3 ай бұрын
Yeah, the more I’ve been thinking about this episode- I’m thinking this was a Drazzen Cattle ship, delivering to a secret Drazzen base, that’ll be located on the planet…
@mikebruins7859
4 ай бұрын
Thankyou. Enjoy Ko-fi. The Black Ship - Chapter 37 Part 2
@terrywilson1226
4 ай бұрын
ah another fine chapter drops
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Not a new chapter just part 2 of Chapter 37 with Part 3 tomorrow (Same time) apparently it might be a couple of days rather than tomorrow, but still good
@Sandman03777
4 ай бұрын
Black Ship! YES!
@KaasSchaaf666
4 ай бұрын
Yes, yes, yes.. A new chapter.
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Not a new chapter just part 2 of Chapter 37 with Part 3 tomorrow (Same time) apparently it might be a couple of days rather than tomorrow, but still good
@jasonmacip3108
4 ай бұрын
We need more!!! I am in to the big time
@Nabi9195
3 ай бұрын
This seemingly simple story is very good
@Lo51848
3 ай бұрын
More, more, can’t wait to learn what’s with those pirates!
@dartstalker4936
3 ай бұрын
I love the story. Makes me wonder if ever Wyatt and the princess and Cynthia ever get stuck on a crazy adventure bringing out the true skills of the 3.
@markbaca9052
3 ай бұрын
Lol they better not mess with Cynthia's new boy toy And the prince told Wyatt if anyone gets to claim him it's the princess 😂should change the story name to crack rock 😂 cause I'm already jonesing for the next chapter 😂
@rogermartin4104
3 ай бұрын
I keep waiting for the day during training when cynthia lunges towards Wyatt in a powerful attack instead of dodging out of the way he catches her and pills her close. Face to face tightly held together cynthia is so flustered by Wyatt’s defensive strategy she awkwardly brushes her hair over her ear and calls an end to the training and quickly departs the gym stunned.
@terrimountjoy2834
3 ай бұрын
In the app that gives them speed and strength Cynthia no doubt has received the number FOUR app which Wyatt can never receive!
@Interdector
3 ай бұрын
Those "pirates" looks like more a runaway refugees.
@chrismetevier9396
4 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@scifistories1977
4 ай бұрын
Thanks you Chris!
@davidstowe5652
4 ай бұрын
Great job and good luck 👍⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🔥
@Roshand-pl9tn
4 ай бұрын
Cynthia would be a good love match for wyatt. Shes nobility but not in any line of succession. Her sister might marry the prince. So wyatt would be family. They both have skills the other dont possess. They both have common values. And they both have seen the weakness in each other. Some comments have indicated clara might have eyes on wyatt. Clara would be a good match with her imprisoned cousin. Their marriage should end any conflict. Clara would gain the principality but lose wyatt
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
First cousins would be unusual but not unheard of I'm still going for Clara and Wyatt, with Cynthia and Wyatt as the alternative though, Clara is third or maybe 4th in line for the throne, inheriting it will require a lot of dead older siblings.
@Roshand-pl9tn
4 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921 i am thinking that the prince will not live much longer. Or his brothers or the 1st princess astor. Their crazy butcher cousin victoria will see to that. And what better way to keep the bloodline pure than marrying your cousin. Queen Clara has what it takes to be a great, ruthless ruler. Cynthia and Wyatt can serve her and still have a happy home life. If wyatt marries her all hell will break loose. He will never be more than an upstart commoner to some.
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
@@Roshand-pl9tn very true, on the other hand consider the following, If Wyatt keeps doing well he will build up a fearsome reputation, Clara already terrifies the nobles and there appears to be a council who approves the prince for leadership , note it's called a Principality we do not know if a Princess can take the title (not all Principalities can) The Nobles might not like Wyatt marrying Clara but they will be very quiet about it because being vocal is likely to have both Wyatt and Clara come for a visit. The other possibility assuming Wyatt moderates the kill them all stance Clara took when capturing the Noir navio on a regular or even irregular but noticed occasions is the Nobles may actually be relieved , Of course there is a plus side, the commoners realise that if they perform exceptionally they too could rise to positions of rank and you get an outburst of support for the Astor Family from the population for marrying a man born as a commoner
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
Still voting for Wyatt Clara. The major problem in the principality is the nobility commoner problems something like the Magna Carta is overdue, hence Clara marring a commoner is a big step towardthis
@Roshand-pl9tn
3 ай бұрын
@@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx agreed. Its a society in need of reform. But wars tend to overturn things. The writer has a lot to think about from these comments
@idiinletholdus
4 ай бұрын
Amazing as always ❤
@Urbana2012
4 ай бұрын
Thank you, thank you, thank you. And posting a new chapter this soon!?! You are very generous!! 🎉🎉🎉 The return of action in space! Yeah! 🎉🎉🎉 The introduction of the new villain (the pirates) is most intriguing!
@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
3 ай бұрын
not sure these are going to be Villans maybe recruits
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
I have a feeling the situation of this "pirate ship" may not be so black and white. Heck they might not even be pirates! There is nothing specifically so far with 100% certainty saying this converted freighter is an actual pirate ship, especially with most of the crew being teenagers or children.
@WilfredRubalcaba
4 ай бұрын
All I can say is love it ❤❤❤❤❤
@WilfredRubalcaba
3 ай бұрын
The story is great and makes you want more love it ❤❤❤❤
@steveb6103
4 ай бұрын
That's perfect timing! I was just finishing the book 2 playlist when this popped up. Witch by the way, thanks for the link.
@stoneydaw2406
3 ай бұрын
I would like to see more about the Red Headed Nobel from the party.... She has potential and is on the hunt, possibly for Draymore's son. Beautiful, dangerous, and a possible source of invaluable information, we already know she has the hots for Wyatt. It would be quite like her to take a second try at Wyatt for his affections she seems like a foil to Miss Winfield... or possibly a passionate kiss away from forcing Princess Clara's hand.
@terrimountjoy2834
3 ай бұрын
I don’t think anyone apposed to cynthia has a future
@epicbunny2969
4 ай бұрын
So excited for this
@dockaos924
4 ай бұрын
Ah those pesky noble women trying to tempt wyatt 🙄😊
@terrywilson1226
4 ай бұрын
I bet some are thinking Wyatt and Cynthia are a couple
@s0cc451
4 ай бұрын
@@terrywilson1226Well, that's my ship. Other than Clara, she is the one who spend most time with him.
@Gomjibar
4 ай бұрын
@@terrywilson1226 That is my bet on who he will end up with (if he ends up with anyone in this story)
@diclicious9100
3 ай бұрын
I have a feeling the story will end with wyatts death after Clara and him have had a passion filled scenario in which Clara expresses her love for him... or cynthia.
@terrywilson1226
3 ай бұрын
@@diclicious9100 I seriously doubt they would kill off wyatt but it maybe a close thing with a happy ending 😉
@Tarokenification
4 ай бұрын
Love it!!
@davidlynch8955
4 ай бұрын
What if these kids all happen to be runaway from the drazan
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
That is real good possibility. Its could be a million and one other things like running away from very toxic nobles or human pirates.
@johncunningham4820
3 ай бұрын
The Pirate Ship is intriguing .
@viniciuslopesmodena
4 ай бұрын
A kick upsidedown following by a spinning sweep ? Was wyatt training with Eddy Gordo in secret?
@Spartan-qp7nh
4 ай бұрын
I'm coming in kind of late cuz i just now realized you posted it
@TheMalcolmPowder
4 ай бұрын
It has to be a trap... Why doesn't Wyatt see this, or any of the other officers ?
@Infgrunt11b
3 ай бұрын
They mentioned no way to get any spies aboard the ship earlier, perhaps a way to infiltrate?
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
@@Infgrunt11b well to be fair they are in a powerful ship which probably cannot be detected by the vessel they are attacking and they have sent wyatts wing to check out the planetoid to see if it is a trap. They decided that capturing the ship could give them potentially important information, once that decision was taken they then carried out a reasonable operation .
@yamagata008
3 ай бұрын
Wow -- that really makes me want to see the next chapter!
@willhuey687
4 ай бұрын
Wyattsan forgot to wax on wax off
@asiseeit2041
3 ай бұрын
Thought we’d get part 3 today. Guys are bummed
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
I just was chatting with EkhidnaWritez you are going to have to wait a day or two longer I'm afraid, part 3 is looking like it's going to be between 5 and 6 thousand words
@asiseeit2041
3 ай бұрын
Bummer
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
Its better that EkhidnaWritez takes extra time when he needs it to make sure quality of the story stay high and constant. I rather have longer wait times between chapters to keep high quality writing over shorter time between chapters but lower quality writing and continuity errors.
@asiseeit2041
3 ай бұрын
Hmm
@asiseeit2041
3 ай бұрын
Thanks captain obvious. Shit!!
@rolanders7553
3 ай бұрын
Great book
@Tupsx57
3 ай бұрын
Escapees from a Drazzan breeding farm?
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
Interesting idea, one now I think of it could very well seeing EkhidnaWritez going that way.
@OldSchoolGenius
3 ай бұрын
As always, this is too short. 😂 but thank you to the author and this channel.
@terrywilson1226
3 ай бұрын
i think Cynthia has all the wevethew implants which explains her strength and agility . she is at least the same as a royal marine
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
Woot
@RustyEcks
3 ай бұрын
Loving it!
@danwhiteman2529
4 ай бұрын
👍👍
@jeffmcc3138
4 ай бұрын
What happened since he saw his Fighter 😮
@dannygoin6552
4 ай бұрын
❤️❤️
@ashleycampbell6825
3 ай бұрын
10805 views 8 hours ago. Time to go back to work and listen to the remainder much later.
@ThomasTomiczek
4 ай бұрын
So, let me guess. House Olkara will join House Stables - and Wyatt has the absolute power to move them out of Pariah status.
@snowwolf8186
4 ай бұрын
🤔
@davidorf3921
4 ай бұрын
He has no power at all do do such a thing, but he's friends with a young lady who certainly has that power if she chooses to use it. The question I guess will be would improving Nultars family situation make him a better member of the team
@carsparks1980
3 ай бұрын
In order to get Clara or the prince to use that power for House Olkara, House Olkara will have to earn it. This is especially important since this affects House Reid, which at the moment is a very important supporter of the prince's right to rule. It will require ironclad justification and a deft political touch to not make House Reid feel ignored, overlooked, or otherwise insulted.
@davidorf3921
3 ай бұрын
@@carsparks1980 The way to do it is effectively by making the comment amongst suitable people that it would be a shame if a loyal house such as house Okara were to founder (or similar words) this does not outright criticize house Reid but tells them they have punished their rivals enough, a few hoses giving minor contracts to house Okara prevent its destruction without making it a threat to Reid
@daghost11
3 ай бұрын
@@davidorf3921I can see Wyatt returning the favor, friendship, support & Respect shown to him by Nultar. Wyatt already sees Nultar’s Skills as a pilot, and through Deeds, Wyatt will be able to help restore house Okara standings… Keep in mind- Salaazar gave house Reid a Major Black Eye, and was the main reason why he was punished as harshly as he was… Granted- not the fullest extent, but damn near close…
@jlbeem431
3 ай бұрын
Why do I always seem to start great fantastic stories that aren't finished yet😂😢
@danielleriley2796
2 ай бұрын
Wyatt and Cynthia would make a nice couple and their kids would be the most loyal citizens in the principality. Also the friend group wouldn’t be broken up.
@MotivatedReign
3 ай бұрын
So glad wyat is into the ladies. NGL.
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
🤣
@jaybiggs7526
3 ай бұрын
I'm glad he made his preference known w/ respect for other preferences.
@dantepoggini7752
4 ай бұрын
Wyatt’s image colapsad, he bécame a Noble happy trigger, he was supposed to moderate Clara and come out more bloody than she, Galt, Cinthia and Milkades gave him a lesson in intelligence and moderation, as Galt explains, it was the same shooting or boarding her, A very important part of the mission is the collection of information, and what better source of information than a probable pirate ship. How did he feel when he found out that the ship he was so happy to blow was full of children.
@carsparks1980
3 ай бұрын
He doesn't know yet, and nobody had any reason to suspect it was anything other than a damaged pirate ship.
@MrChip1217
3 ай бұрын
Ooo I’m loving this
@KrK-EST
4 ай бұрын
❤
@davidlynch8955
3 ай бұрын
As far as the children I have zero idea whats going to happen to them I cant imagine Clara just taking them to Finnegan territory and abandoning her mission
@tommcl8548
4 ай бұрын
👊👍
@Archdukeofswol
4 ай бұрын
The ai made her like 10ft tall 😂
@davidlynch8955
3 ай бұрын
I wouldn't mind If wyatt gets a commoner lady as long as Cynthia, and clara approve and I hope its a woman who is the female version of wyatt with the exception of how she enters the story. Say a pilot who was with the Caystons didn't know about the coup but was the last surviving fighter pilot after both cayston and drazzan forces had a pyhrric battle in space.
@Soundwave119
3 ай бұрын
I would not be bothered if Wyatt has romance with a common woman and/or marries her but its more likely Wyatt ends up with either Cynthia or Clara.
@davidlynch8955
3 ай бұрын
@@Soundwave119 He would have to go up a ton of ranks to be allowed any chance with Cynthia. Clara is out of the question. Knights aren't allowed to marry ducal families unless a pregnancy was involved and Cynthia wouldn't besmirch her house. Wyatt would have to move up to an Earl or Maquis level noble. Example Leon Bartfoot Trapped in a Dating Sim had to rise his noble status to marry a ducal heiress and did through deeds
@six-gunsound1145
4 ай бұрын
*Some noble house tries to get Wyatt to fall for their daughter* Wyatt: I dont like girls. Clara: He saved my life and taught me to fly *demolishes their estate from orbit and seizes their holdings* Wyatt: I still dont like girls, but lets go knit together. Clara: dammit
@carsparks1980
3 ай бұрын
This question is WAY too late, but - What are they going to do with a ship full of refugees? Jincho to the rescue? Take on survivors? Guard the ship while a rescue flotilla comes? Somebody takes it back as a prize? EDIT: The conflict here is "the law of the sea", which states (among other things) that survivors must be rescued or given survival aid if possible, vs the mission that requires location and ID remain secret. Wyatt basically running a high school. THAT's a scary thought.
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