Time for humanity to go visit the homeworld of the Veraxians. You know, just to be neighborly.
@diarradunlap9337
2 ай бұрын
I agree. When they do arrive at the Veraxian homework, they should play the first stanza of Ice Cube's, "(I'm) The Wrong N***a to F*** With", changing the n-word to "planet."
@lordmech
2 ай бұрын
and drop off some gifts when visiting someone for the first time you should always bring gifts.
@goshring
Ай бұрын
Yeah. Take them some cookies or a cake or something. Lol. Maybe delivery via orbital bombardment.
@jameygroves8561
2 ай бұрын
No, this is called the pursuit phase. Every ship that is allowed to retreat will be back if they are not destroyed. The objective is to destroy the enemy's will and capability to wage war.
@darrylcatay2295
4 күн бұрын
The Plot Armor and the recurring trope in every story is the underestimating of the human race is redundant and is like the Disney Trope of living happily ever after !
@Some2else
2 ай бұрын
Frankly, the story repeats a lot. Both in words and in theme. In this story I search in vain for original plot twists, original tactics, original weapons.
@heeroyuy4561
2 ай бұрын
AI stories do that.
@SolTerran5050
2 ай бұрын
How can a ship return fire if it has been cut in half?
@whyjnot420
2 ай бұрын
There are real life examples of ships and other things firing a last shot as they get destroyed. But it is not actually ever return fire. Instead it is just either a gun going off due to all the destruction, or the gun crew simply firing as things go to shit. So, firing after partial destruction, sure... it doing anything, nope not a snowballs chance in hell. The only option that could account for something still being semi-battle capable at that point would be a ludicrous level of redundancy.
@whyjnot420
2 ай бұрын
addendum: Within the context of this particular story, it is only a single ship that had been cut in half. An order to return fire would be a fleet wide order. So one ship being destroyed has no real bearing on anything at that point.
@SolTerran5050
2 ай бұрын
@@whyjnot420 oh I get the Idea of ships firing as they are sinking, Happened quite a few times in WW2, The Yamato, The Bismark, The Atlanta, And others, but one problem with that, That was usually heat setting off the ordinance that was already loaded, That is The nature of gun powder, Unfortunately would not happen that way with Plasma or missiles, and that particular part of the story was only talking about the fight between two ships, not the two fleets
@brunothebat4122
Ай бұрын
@@SolTerran5050 It’s likely a fleet order.
@ChavezPete
2 ай бұрын
When enemies retreat, they would be pursued and destroyed then go to their world and destroy them there. If it were real
@YgGv-hj2qv
Ай бұрын
Hey,i love your stories.You are so cool! I'm 7 years olds.I from 🇰🇭😊
@Paladin7845
2 ай бұрын
AI narration isn't bad. Story is the same chapter 3 times. Should have wiped them out the 1st time.....not let them keep coming back! Story is weak.
@heeroyuy4561
2 ай бұрын
AI stories do that.
@ad3d1
Ай бұрын
yaa, it's like 12 years old wrote it, not the brightest 12 years old.
@tomray8765
2 ай бұрын
Purely Defensive wars are eventually lost. There must always be an aggressive element. The humans should have pursued the fleeing ships and then made a run on their home world just to set them back several decades.
@ericr.palmer8200
2 ай бұрын
"The humans were proving to be an indomitable force their spirit unbroken even in the face of overwhelming odds." That right there is the AI give away. How many times is AI going to reproduce this sentence in sci fi HFY stories? more AI crap.
@EeBee51
2 ай бұрын
I would like to know if all this AI crap is many posters using the same program, or one poster using many different aliases.... Because it definitely does all sound the same. The program must come with a number of preformed templates, like Word does, and the user just plugs in the names....eg, How many stories have you seen using the "Abandoned Alien Girl Falls in Love With Her Human Rescuer" theme lately ??? It must have been part of the latest upgrade
@Fuilleverte
2 ай бұрын
They should have added when the people were watching from earth... "And Vegas was laying odds"
@ngatokorimatuaputai5317
Ай бұрын
How many aliens always have commander or emperor, starting with z. Zethag, zelor, ze this or ze that.ze what ever. Come on man.
@whoareyouwhenimnotlooking
26 күн бұрын
Lol the angels toy 📦 vibes huh no electricity
@lynneclark5313
2 ай бұрын
SSOOOO, who is the blue-skinned guy in the picture? No mandibles, so not Threxian. Blue-skinned, so not Human.
@DRourkey
20 күн бұрын
You know your enemy isn't bothered when you retreat and they let you go
@victortahlor4038
2 ай бұрын
Thank you for the reading
@rbtsubs
Ай бұрын
Won't they get a copywrite strike for using the star wars art ...
@maggsgorilla
21 күн бұрын
Precision count....2
@ngatokorimatuaputai5317
Ай бұрын
13:08 😅😢
@kennethabagis8392
23 күн бұрын
It's always bland A.I. it's the fate of the galaxy.
@eyesopen5386
2 ай бұрын
Does anyone else think the narrator sounds like Kevin Sorbo.??
@rauladame2105
Ай бұрын
Yes! Especially when it says "palpable" like it does in every story. 😅
@kennethabagis8392
23 күн бұрын
The war is always just beginning. Same old same old Yada Yada Yada etc infinitium.
@rogerc4748
2 ай бұрын
Are these, earth wins always stories, AI generated?
@whoareyouwhenimnotlooking
26 күн бұрын
Crematorium
@grandyhynes1636
2 ай бұрын
Blah blah blah blah blah blah
@deepdragon2
Ай бұрын
bot story with tones of merchandise it seems...
@ThisGuy-79
2 ай бұрын
The story sucks, as stated previously, the AI narration is just that, and you really have to use pictures from star wars? Even lamer, that franchise sucks more now than it ever did. Down vote for theft...
@Pops1970
Ай бұрын
Downvoted for AI narration
@Realitygetreal
Ай бұрын
Ugggg and UGGGGG... AI stories... lets tell it 3 times, and never finish the battle..
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