Yea a end to start a new beginning you know the player/Y.O.U won't just die it will always come back again and again and again. over and over and over never stopping untill it reach its goal just to know or get a trophy achievement or get good at dodging well all these possibilities could say what other players do what they do. And some does "something new" ❤ 🚢
@Sbum.0021
11 ай бұрын
Coming back over and over... That's actually a concept there was in the original comic, but I removed it because it was boring since there was only text... Surprised you got it anyway!
@MRjmaren
11 ай бұрын
@@Sbum.0021 what? I never heard that. I just made it up. And if you mind tell me what was this comic about and tell me the story im interested pls
@Sbum.0021
11 ай бұрын
@@MRjmaren The comic was the same, but originally there was an extra part at the end reflecting of this concept of resetting over over and over just to get something, an award, anything, but it would have turned out to be positive for Kris. Once the soul was shattered the screen would turn black and there would have been the death screen whit "GIVE UP" and "CONTINUE". The heart would try to continue and then instead of the first o second voice, Kris would interrupt the player. I don't remember exactly the dialogue, but it was something like "Do whatever you want but since your choices don't matter, why should things go different? Why even try? I'm ready to stop you over and over and over, until you don't give up." I wanted to reference both Chara "SINCE WHEN WERE YOU THE ONE IN CONTROL?" similar to the sentence of the soul in this comic "Don't forget who is in control." (that would also link to the theory that is the player to sing "Don't Forget"), I liked the fact that Kris would use pretty much the same sentence that was used against them, and also quote Flowey/Asriel "In the end, your choices were an illusion." and "I'll hold victory in front of you, just within your reach... And then tear it away just before you grasp it. Over, and over, and over..." and "And then you'll lose to me again. And again. And again!!!". I tried to add as many reference to Deltarune und Undertale as I could, even the title of the comic is from Gaster "IT APPEARS YOU HAVE REACHED AN END." and from the Narrator during Asgore battle "(It seems your journey is finally over.)". Unluckily the program where the extra part was saved doesn't work anymore, and I don't think I ever extracted the video, but it's not completely lost, I took that dialogue and drew a possible comic concept art time ago, because I liked the concept.
@MRjmaren
11 ай бұрын
@@Sbum.0021 thxs and cool
@clourenskidmore9190
Жыл бұрын
also i like how kris pulled their soul out in thr dark world literally first time i think someone has done that
@rainbowcattail3367
Жыл бұрын
Heheheh hi
@rainbowcattail3367
Жыл бұрын
PROCEED
@Thatchydaisy335
Жыл бұрын
I really like how the twisted sword lowers Kris' HP to 55, like how the thorn ring does to Noelle. I guess it makes sense that it does that 'cause you need the thorn ring to make the Twisted sword.
@classicleafster
Жыл бұрын
THE COLORS ARE SO PLEASING. Also this comic was definitely worth the wait. I would probably cry if kris and susie fighting actually happens in the game, it would be sick but still ;-; KSJKSK POOR KRIS...I LOVE THIS COMICCCCCCC THIS IS SO DOPE
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@lennyfacebutnotreally3198
Жыл бұрын
"It seems you have reached an end" Yeah, the one of the sword, although those are 2 ends so idk how that work but it ends all the same Also this looks GREAT, awesome work! also while I'm here, "snow grave" this, "weird route" that, how about "I want out as much as you dude, I just want to help, dammit"
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@QSBraWQ
Жыл бұрын
i think it still makes only one ending. since without soul, they cant seal fountains, thus covering world in darkness as it was on game over.
@lennyfacebutnotreally3198
Жыл бұрын
@@QSBraWQ I was refering "end" as in the point of a sword, the staby part of the sword
@Panify
Жыл бұрын
This is so amazing! Your art style lends itself so well to the comic, thank you for making this! ^^
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the compliments, not me for making the comic! :)
@Bytie0_
6 ай бұрын
Underrated, completely, you have the skill to be a really good content creator in terms of comics and art, you are very underrated in almost everyday
@birb70
Жыл бұрын
JDJDUSXJXJJ THIS IS AWESOME- I love the color palette, it’s just so eye-pleasing to look at. It seems that player got what they deserved lol, I guess this happens sometime after the snowgrave route so, Kris has 500 hp so they must have went on some kind of killing spree with or without Noelle (actually I just noticed the snowflakes that sometimes appear in the background so it def is a Snowgrave route). I just love your art style, the comic panels look really fancy with the moss and all that, I don’t get why you hate this comic it’s just awesome.
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! Yeah, it's Snowgrave Route! And I'm so glad someone noticed the snowflakes. They don't make any sense if there isn't Noelle but probably the Snowgrave Route is linked to cold and pain in general. Thank you again!
@ascoadmfcod
Жыл бұрын
Every second waiting for this comic to be published was worth it, good job!
@jackalope_kracken1856
Жыл бұрын
Your art style is so lovely! Thank you for sharing this comic, it’s so good!
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@bushd7631
Жыл бұрын
It's sick! Loved the color palette really much. And I like the idea that susie just acts out of her turn, kinda see that happening in some of the battles Keep up the great work!
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! The palette is a little weird but I like that Susie looks like some kind of dragon. Thank you again!
@mordenator865
Жыл бұрын
This is incredible and everything I desire from this community. The pictures are drawn so well and the story was actually really moving. I hope you plan on making more in future. Instant sub from me 😁
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! :)
@Icecaptain24
Жыл бұрын
I feel like this is what it means by Deltarune only has one ending, and it may be like this And you won't ever see the aftermath of your actions
@clourenskidmore9190
Жыл бұрын
i hate to say it but you never disappoint hahahahahah yeah i'm going to spread this like a cancer
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! Let's hope it doesn't have the same effect as cancer, thought. :)
@NovatoEx
10 ай бұрын
Kris got tired of our shit
@marshadsz
Жыл бұрын
Funfact if kris could have ripped out thier soul at any time and even control themself implied when spamton attacks kris and they backs up its probably cz kris doesnt care? Other than that great comic and G h o s t s u s s y
@clourenskidmore9190
Жыл бұрын
lmao i always thought they don't just pull out the soul because they would slowly die
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
I made that Kris can rips out their soul and survive fine because they have equipped the Twisted Sword, whit Trance effect negative, opposite to the Thorn Ring, whit Trance effect positive. I know Kris drops the sword to the ground but it's always equipped to them in any case.
@biggest_shot1997
Жыл бұрын
This is absolutely fantastic, you did a great job on this!!!!!!!!!!
@Thats_not_my_real_name.
Жыл бұрын
I love that sword
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I took inspiration from a sword from The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask, even if I hadn't ever played the game.
@sergame567
Жыл бұрын
Your art style is amazing! Keep it up.
@peanutbuttersoup673
Жыл бұрын
Definitely worth the wait.
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@Aven_colonthree
Жыл бұрын
Holy hell that was awesome :0
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you!!
@GiosetheLightner
Жыл бұрын
Avevo scordato di commentare. Bravissima! È stato un piacere aver potuto contemplare molti pannelli in anteprima ;)
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Grazie mille! Non ti preoccupare di criticare i pannelli quando li mostro, può aiutarmi a cambiare gli errori che non vedo. In ogni caso grazie!
@mariaalejandaramesahurtado9626
Жыл бұрын
I love your cómics
@themaximusyang8645
3 ай бұрын
Mi sembrava familiare lo stile d'arte, ciao sbum
@unmarkit1027
Жыл бұрын
Another comic understand it all . Chara/Kris as protagonist and Player ❤ the villain . There no Frisk because Chara didnt die . Aye
@Richy-s_base
Жыл бұрын
E' venuto benissimo, lo adoro.😁
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Grazie mille!
@everydaygremlin
Жыл бұрын
i want to eat your art it looks so tasty. this is a good thing.
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I don't know if it's edible...
@nuleplays9041
Жыл бұрын
Honestly, really well made. However, I do believe Kris couldn't do that as they seem unable to live without the soul (and even if they did, the soul would reset anyways and try something else, as "usual")
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you! About the soul thing probably you're right. About the try something else there was a final part in this comic where Kris pretty much said: "Well, I know you're gonna try everything again, but since your choices don't matter, why should things go different?". I removed the part because it's was quite boring since it was only text, so I turned it into a possible future comic. Thank you so much!
@thesilvershadow5437
10 күн бұрын
Why does the twisted sword look like the fierce deity sword
@luisalfonzoacostaparra1944
Жыл бұрын
decir que el comic esta asombroso seria menos preciar tu trabajo aunque hay veces q los personajes se ven un poco rigidos y hace falta un poco de ese aire dramatico, pero la verdad es que es una lastima que el comic sea tan corto
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
I'm gonna write in English so the translator doesn't make weird errors lol. Thank you su much! I know some drawings aren't the best, especially the first ones. If you look at Susie in the first 2-4 panels where she appears she is very different from the last panels. It's kind of weird but I visibly improved at drawing even in a single comic. Anyway I'm so glad you liked it!
@luisalfonzoacostaparra1944
Жыл бұрын
espero que mejores eres un buen dibujante!, si la verdad el traductor de google es lo nosotros llamamos por aca un coñuemadre, pero bueno espero que te vaya muy bien!, saludos
@BananaTrooper3650
Жыл бұрын
It's nice but it could use better posing.
@Sbum.0021
Жыл бұрын
Thank you for the advice! Some drawings are really bad but I drew this whit headaches or fever almost the whole time due to a virus.
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