Really nice waltz! The left-hand triplets and quintuplets add a nice touch to the waltz in the E major section.
@davidreinomantecon172
3 ай бұрын
Thanks so much! (I made a big effort for my waltz to be good)
@jesusliano5811
2 ай бұрын
Suena a película romántica, para mí es suficiente.
@scarf550
3 ай бұрын
Nice waltz! I really enjoy the triplet/quintuplet action in the middle section. Some advice: i believe the right hand lacks rhythmic interest/variation. Some techniques you might want to familiarize yourself with that are commonly used in waltzes would be: Hemiolas (pattens of 2 against three or vise versa) Augmentation/Diminution (Making the rhythms faster/slower but not changing the melody) and ornamentation(trills and such to create interest). I also liked your harmonies!
@davidreinomantecon172
3 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@ThalesZettelMusique
2 ай бұрын
The crescendo sign means increasing the volume in a short period of time. The text however, means to gradually and/or slowly (in the case of poco cresc. or poco a poco cresc.) increase the volume. At measure 42, I believe the cresc. text would fit better, as increasing the lenght of the accent mark increases the visual polution of the sheet note. Nonetheless, I loved this waltz, great work, keep at it King.
@ethanbrowncomposer
3 ай бұрын
Nice but the melody could be more interesting with a variety of little ornaments at least. The quarter notes could be more interesting
@davidreinomantecon172
3 ай бұрын
Okay, I'll try to put some ornaments on my next waltz
@Lorensas
2 ай бұрын
Not everywhere good transitions, when changing to another beat like tonality or transitions to another tonality, in the beginning not everywhere good harmony, but terrible, not bad
@Lorensas
2 ай бұрын
And One question, why name E minor, but end major?? :Dd
@davidreinomantecon172
2 ай бұрын
@Lorensas ends major due to 3rd of picardy, understand?
@Lorensas
2 ай бұрын
Yea, sorry, i'm liszt, rachmaninoff fan maybe a little chopin, so i compose this composers acords, because is so beautifully sounds, but you maybe take last measures Bach, idk, not bad end, but i didn't put this ( my opinion ).
@ari4nova
3 ай бұрын
You have much to learn.
@davidreinomantecon172
3 ай бұрын
What do you mean?
@davidedentuti
3 ай бұрын
@@davidreinomantecon172don't worry he's just some toxic dude lmao
@davidreinomantecon172
3 ай бұрын
@eldavide6155 I know, because in my opinion I did it very good
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