Take a shot each time katsuki says deku in the first hour
@rosielight4829
5 күн бұрын
Part2 please 🙏 thank
@Skwanduh
3 күн бұрын
Hahaha they did monoma dirty
@zakdom19
10 күн бұрын
50% of Izuku's suffering is his fault. He made the decision to keep his quirk a secret, which resulted in him being bullied, abused, discriminated & abandoned by his mother. I'm not saying it's justified, but he is the fulcrum point. We, the readers, understand why he kept quiet about his quirk, but his mother doesn't & she suffered for it. Also, pretending to be quirkless does not help "Real Quirkless" people if anything it's an insult.
@fireboy2maybe
7 күн бұрын
I'm not defending him but think about this His quirk let him change quirks the hero commission who we know has no morals should jump at that or villains if my quirk let me change quirks I would keep it secret to
@zakdom19
7 күн бұрын
@fireboy2maybe I understand his reasoning for keeping his quirk secret, but he didn't even tell his mom. Which means he trusted no one.
@fireboy2maybe
7 күн бұрын
@@zakdom19 I wouldn't either
@Evekatpodfics
4 күн бұрын
@@zakdom19 thank you for the critique! It is exactly what was intended. An uncomfortable reflection of Izuku’s problem. He wants to use the quirk, but also doesn’t. He wants to see if he could have done it quirkless because he thinks it would help (even if he isn’t actually quirkless). I was trying for a little of cannon Izuku who is a nervous mess and confused Izuku who wants so many things he’s kind of unsure. I’ll make sure to focus it more in the sequel.
@zakdom19
4 күн бұрын
@Evekatpodfics no problem. I really like the story & have no problem with how the story is written, but it is just me judging in story Izuku's decision-making
@adrielvillalobos1045
12 күн бұрын
Is this going to have a part 2? Because it is a good story.
@Danger_Beans
10 күн бұрын
Wile I did enjoy this I found it kinda annoying how rushed the family scenes are. Like you’re telling me a bullied child calls one of his guardians ‘dad’, on like there second day in the house? I just find it annoying when found family is apart of the story, but writers can’t make it longer? More fleshed out? That’s my only pet peeve. Other than that I LOVE the idea (spoilers) that all for one just was just banging woman with interesting quirks to see if his quirk somehow passed on 😂. This just adds a whole new layer onto the story, which kinda shown me how much control AFO has over the WHOLE of Japan. I’m only at 2:49:39 rn and probably have spent WAAAYYY to much time on this but, Oh well 🤷
@Evekatpodfics
8 күн бұрын
@@Danger_Beans thanks for the critique! I’m planning a second version that will be completely au!
@Danger_Beans
8 күн бұрын
@@Evekatpodfics I would also like to thank you though. I really enjoyed the concept and writing of this story! I can’t wait to go on A03 and continue to read your work :D
@Evekatpodfics
8 күн бұрын
@@Danger_Beans I’m just stunned anyone liked it enough to read it let alone podfic it. But I am keeping an eye on the comments for ideas for the second version.
@kingfireruby
9 күн бұрын
we need part 2 now
@HelloKitty-yh6en
12 күн бұрын
I need a part two 😫😫😫
@Terminator-um9hq
13 күн бұрын
Episode 2 Please 😊😊😊❤❤❤
@chadmoog8098
11 күн бұрын
Please make a part 2
@Fatgamerdawg
11 күн бұрын
Please bring back the old voice
@doomed_jaguar
11 күн бұрын
deku can just erase drawbacks
@jeffdavis8590
12 күн бұрын
Over all I liked the idea but it quickly began to sound like just another everything is different but nothing changes story. Personally those get old fast.
@L11111
12 күн бұрын
I feel you
@Evekatpodfics
11 күн бұрын
I’m the author! Thanks for the critique! I’m planning a second version that’s a complete au. But it won’t be coming out for a while.
@jeffdavis8590
11 күн бұрын
@@Evekatpodfics NP. In all honesty, this is something that happens in fanfics allot. Sometimes it makes sense in what changed effected a bunch of people the same way, so they all grew together, but when the in about one thing or person, it will have a butterfly effect on them and those around them.
@Evekatpodfics
11 күн бұрын
@@jeffdavis8590 I hope when I’m ready to write the new version someone will want to pod fic it too! It boggles my mind that anyone wants to read it never mind podfic it. But it does give me the warm fuzzies.
@jeffdavis8590
11 күн бұрын
@@Evekatpodfics podfic? Sorry, I don't know that term. Never mind, google explained it. I would agree. In this day and age you need to know how what your writing will sound like out read out loud.
@RockSmoothie
3 күн бұрын
Trigger warning: aizawa is gay in this story, he married present mic instead of Ms. Joke😢
@xatu6594
12 күн бұрын
This fic for some reason just feels kinda off in some way
@Evekatpodfics
8 күн бұрын
@@xatu6594 I’m the author. May I ask how so?
@xatu6594
8 күн бұрын
@@Evekatpodfics idk man it just gives me an uncanny feeling
@Evekatpodfics
8 күн бұрын
@@xatu6594 ? Ok? Any suggestions?
@xatu6594
7 күн бұрын
@@Evekatpodfics as of now I think I would like to see any other fanfics you have made before giving any other reviews
@Evekatpodfics
7 күн бұрын
@@xatu6594 have at it! I’m always open to legitimate criticism.
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