Haha i like how hagaromo is a sadistic teacher and kyuubi is more so and how hagaromo uses vulgar words unlike in canon
@16jerrell
6 ай бұрын
😂😂😂😂 ok Naruto that was hilarious telling Hiruzen that your out of a job
@BenjaminGoss-c8p
6 ай бұрын
Me reading it I was laughing
@16jerrell
6 ай бұрын
Ok I’m jealous that Naruto is now with Kurenai
@tylerfranklin5187
6 ай бұрын
the author should have reread his work and fixed the wrong spelling of hagaromo
@kelldoug5841
6 ай бұрын
What garbage hes graduating with konamaru that just ruined this entire thing what trash
@BenjaminGoss-c8p
6 ай бұрын
Nah the story is better
@anthonyhuffman1692
6 ай бұрын
I really like this one, but it brings up some points that I always find aggravating. Naruto is not older than them. He was put into Academy early because the hokage wouldn't actually assign Caretaker. He did for others but not for Naruto. I mean, everybody else in the village either has a caretaker like at the orphanage. Or parents to teach them or friends of the family. Naruto was denied all that so they stuck him in the Academy early so they didn't have to sign a permanent babysitter. Also if you look at the ages on the official site naruto's like a half a year younger than most of the other kids in his class that he graduated with. Witch, the hokages says it can't play favorites. Here's the thing everybody else at least got taught basics. He never did. That's not favoritism that's giving him equal treatment. So a lot of the supposed reasons in the original story that he couldn't be helped is bull. Besides, where is his inheritance in the original story? They act like the fox Destroyed everything, but everybody else is doing fine. Where's Naruto's money cause Shirley, His mom, being one of the best ninjas and his dad being the hokage Didn't have any money. Even if they actually broke into his accounts as the civilian council. Because there wasn't anybody there to claim it. That's still theft. He's entitled to that and they simply make him live in a destitute area of the village. A one room with a bathroom apartment. Not these multiple apartments with indoor access. No, his was a flophouse if you look at it in the Manga. It was basically a tenement or section 8. Whatever you want to call it. In red lot district yet everybody makes it like he was in a multi room apartment. He wasn't, all he had was a bedroom area in a kitchen area, but they were linked. They weren't separate and he had a bathroom. That was basic shower and a halfway functional toilet with no hot water. And before anybody says no. No, that's not how it was. Yes, it was because that's traditional Japanese architecture. Most of the time, they don't even have a bed frame. They have a futon that they roll out on the floor in many apartments. It's a going back to Naruto. Literally, they robbed him of his childhood and they robbed him of any inheritance would have had and the hokage is a big hypocrite. The third means well, but if you buy somebody a bit of Romin and ever once to in a while and put him in a flop house, it's nothing to be thanked for. As far as the civilian council, it's a ninja village, it never was a civilian village. The civilian village is where the Domyio is. The ninja villages are straight military. So, how the hell does he not have a say so overall that he could have dismissed most of the council, as they are an advisory council but he never does. Yeah, not a big fan of the third. As far as being held back because he failed to graduation. A test that only happened once that he was held back. The other 2 times have to be like either by annually or quarterly exams. Then I would explain how he failed it 3 times but if he was in the year before them. How does he not know rockley tintin and edgy? There's a lot of plot loopholes in that story. So I think it was. He failed the quarterly exams on his final year. And they have multiple chances to pass and then he didn't, but even if he was in a separate class, then naggy rock and 10 he should have still met them in his year if he was held back. And was in the same year as them cause again. He's a 1/2 a year younger than everybody else in his class. That he graduates with. That's just one of the plot holes They never bothered feeling in.
@tylersewing4249
6 ай бұрын
Bro chill a Bit
@anthonyhuffman1692
6 ай бұрын
@@tylersewing4249 No, not going to chill.
@leneseewald867
6 ай бұрын
Tldr
@SemiloreOlusegun
6 ай бұрын
Did you really expect me to read this
@16jerrell
6 ай бұрын
But I have to admit the sage of six paths gave him storm release and wood release
@leneseewald867
6 ай бұрын
Next Time please mark as spoiler maybe
@jimmyadams-xk6vh
6 ай бұрын
Oh yeah we definitely need the next part of this video because it was freaking awesome and was packed with a lot of action and was funny at times too ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@jiwii1
6 ай бұрын
....this fanfic has far to many inciting incidents that just don't need to be.
@christianwhite531
6 ай бұрын
part 2
@ageeisaiah
6 ай бұрын
First
@anthonyhuffman1692
6 ай бұрын
I'm sorry. I know, I made a very long comment and it was just my opinion on a few things but I have to stop listening to this. There is no reason for him to fail his actual year. Because you're going to take it into a whole different story. Why didn't you just write your story and not include the whole Naruto stuff? It doesn't make sense. I suppose I'll listen to some More of it. But. Him not being in his actual year just kind of like why
@jester_of_MADNESS
6 ай бұрын
Bro this is a fanfic the channel didn't make this
@anthonyhuffman1692
6 ай бұрын
@@jester_of_MADNESS I know that this wasn't posted by the original author but I don't have a connection to the original author and it's posted here on a public form. So I'm making a comment. It's just an opinion. Nobody has to read it, but I'd like to give critiques. I'm not personal at the person who posted it. I'm pushing about the way it's written. Cause it doesn't make sense to me but that's just me
@jester_of_MADNESS
6 ай бұрын
@@anthonyhuffman1692I'm not disagreeing with ya but I just thought you didn't know because I've seen it happen many times in different videos where they got it mixed up thinking the uploader made the fanfic
@user-ow9to6fs4t
6 ай бұрын
Love the episode need a part 2 please
@RemmyVR
6 ай бұрын
Kinda dumb, he's 13-14 with 11-12 year olds, wasn't be supposed to be with his age group like hagaromo said? Bruh
@RemmyVR
6 ай бұрын
It's even more confusing, didn't the rookie 8 graduate already ?? Bruh I'm lost
@nassalbraimbridge924
6 ай бұрын
Whoever wrote this had a good idea thing got confused a couple paragraphs in but kept going anyway.
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