This is a good story BUT the author had SEVERAL DUPLICATE SENTENCES. 😡
@BaLiSTicOptix
23 күн бұрын
Most likely the duplicate is from the previews before the chapter begins. Many authors do that
@anthonyherring5329
Ай бұрын
Why does TenTen's dad remind me of Major Armstrong from FMA?
@loganheart7672
Ай бұрын
Same same but different. 😅😂
@Demented_Life
29 күн бұрын
I was thinking the same thing haha
@MegaMellowDay
10 күн бұрын
Agreed
@daltonjames5687
Ай бұрын
We Need Part 2 Pls
@knightrider6985
Ай бұрын
Next part please. Hopefully it dont have duplicate sentences
@5269351
Ай бұрын
Love the episode need more please💚💚💚
@slowmotion2.087
24 күн бұрын
Next pls
@robertruse6552
Ай бұрын
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I do like the plot line I also like the character development I like how you took Shikamaru and made him a lot stronger than what he actually was I do wish it was a lot longer and I hope you come back make it part 2 and keep up the good work
@coledarby5320
Ай бұрын
Please make more of these videos
@daltonjames5687
Ай бұрын
Love like always
@Onyxity-2011
Ай бұрын
45:36 got me good
@slowmotion2.087
24 күн бұрын
Same
@jjerzey1
Ай бұрын
The repeats that could be different perspective maybe? It's jarring.
@travisreynolds2154
Ай бұрын
this what if is so nerve wreaking all the freaking duplicates its alright but hopefully part 2 is better
@sas.0647
15 күн бұрын
The slug prince dead by TanyaScathYggdrasil
@user-fn8lf6uz4f
14 күн бұрын
Ends at chapter 15
@virginiarichards6186
Ай бұрын
We to make part 3
@Blade-in3he
Ай бұрын
Name of fanfic
@demondwilson2734
Ай бұрын
Part 2 plz
@Dhruv_g306
29 күн бұрын
3 idots Movie got me for good 🤣
@obitouchiha8216
16 күн бұрын
Bruh jiraya woudnt be like thag
@user-fn8lf6uz4f
14 күн бұрын
Part 2 Plz🙏
@Captian_Jin
18 күн бұрын
Why is it every time naruto is a healer he gets shipped with shikamaro, I don't have a problem with it my just wondering
@kingj7588
23 күн бұрын
Part2
@thomasblanks2842
Ай бұрын
Why is this person repeating themselves? Please redo this story. Part 2 please.
@arc1067
Ай бұрын
The story probably has a recap at the start of each chapter. The bot reads some things twice because it's at the end of one chapter and the start of the next.
@brownricebro5691
Ай бұрын
It's the same scene from different perspectives as far as I can tell
@user-ov3gx8mn2k
Ай бұрын
Part 2
@defineanime5549
Ай бұрын
Not offense but you did a sloppy job, you really need to do a better job next time cause at multiple times it repeats someone,
@arc1067
Ай бұрын
If I had to guess, the fic that the bot is reading has a recap at the start of each chapter. When the bot reads through it ends up repeating the section since it reads it and the end of one chapter and the start of the next.
@VoltLuke1
Ай бұрын
bowtie? do people not realise they are ninja and here is another person projecting there sexual preference on to a character the concept for this fic was good but its just stupid at this point
@MrCadeRay
Ай бұрын
I've noticed a lot of fanfics that have really interesting and well thought out plot points do this. Most of the time they turn all the males gay (i don't know why) or having a 7-13 year old Naruto get in some sort of romantic relationship with a 20-30 year old woman. Also there's no way jariaya would train Sakura over Naruto in any universe
@allwhatif
28 күн бұрын
the story name and title?
@TheThunderguardian
Ай бұрын
Title, author, link?
@SamFort-xx1ko
Ай бұрын
Naruto x Hinata or Naruto x shickamaru
@warzony8634
Ай бұрын
I hate when it’s stuff like this I just want it to normal not yk
@JohnCampbellLAX
29 күн бұрын
@@warzony8634fr
@TheThunderguardian
Ай бұрын
GODDAAMMNN, I fucking hate the duplicates so fucking much! Copy and paste a.i. voice program bull****.
@Welcome2Mikey
Ай бұрын
Gay?
@shanedeal5774
Ай бұрын
Got a third of the way thru just to discover its another NaruHina. How droll. Zero imagination. Author plays around with a bunch of stuff to make this interesting and then decides the VANILLA pairing was the right choice. Gag me.
@brownricebro5691
Ай бұрын
1... it seems like a ShikaNaru pairing, considering Shika is openly attracted to Naruto, to the point of actively seeking advice on his sexuality from Asuma. And 2 if you hate a story solely because it has the most popular pairing, then you're going to miss out on a bunch of amazing stories...
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