Storyline was good and your writing skills also good.. but male protagonist should not deserve the second chance here..
@Blueberryff-zz1rc
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Hi im a new sub and i love your vedios hope to see more ..-love your new sub
@BTSXYN.
Ай бұрын
Hi 👋 Thank you ❤️
@Blueberryff-zz1rc
Ай бұрын
@@BTSXYN. No thank you , actually this is like one of the best ff i have read today
@16-urmilabarik-xic88
Ай бұрын
It's not good means yn is only second choice what about. Self respect she forgive him so easily.try make mature content many teen girls are watching this and they are thinking being the second choice is good. Is this incident happened in your real life would you able to forgive him.
@16-urmilabarik-xic88
Ай бұрын
Am not hate u authors sorry if am rude
@BTSXYN.
Ай бұрын
No it’s ok ❤️ I will improve my storyline. Thank you for your suggestion
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