This was the best thing I've seen on deep pov. Wow
@TsyrendrikaSpica
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Thank you so much, this is such a hidden gem! You got a subscriber!
@brunomartins1477
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In third person POV, what if I used the word "looked" as an action instead of a perception and then describe what the character is seeing? For example, "She LOOKED around. The forest created green walls of trees aroud her." Is it better to just say "Around her, the forest created green walls of trees."? And what if I want the reader to know that my POV character is leaning close to a door to see if she can hear anything form the other side - am I telling if I say “She leaned to the door HOPPING that she COULD HEAR something” / “She leaned to the door TO SEE if she COULD HEAR something” And if my POV character sees a girl who looks sick and I write "The girl LOOKED LIKE / SEEMED she could be sick", is "looked like/seemed" (referring to the girl and not the POV character) a filtering verb? What if my POV character is John and I write “John COULDN’T breathe. He NEEDED to get out of there.” Am I telling? Is there a way to “show” this?
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