Some nitpicking over translation. 遠天皇の賢くも should had been "Grace of the Emperors of eld" 肇め賜ひし大大和 should had been "First time granted the world Great Yamato" - a line that implies, that existence of Japan is a boon to the world. I would rather not translate word Yamato here though, since it's a poetic NAME for Japan. When you meet a guy by name Yamada, you do not usually call him Mountainfield, do you? Japan is also a name, even if an exonym (Like foreigner telling Yamada-san "hey, Yamada is hard to spell, I'll call you Jim from now on"). 撃てし止まむ should be translated as "Keep fighting", "Never stop fighting" or "Fight till the end".
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