Oh my gosh, the fan fiction thing is totally right. It reads like the Cullens are their own characters in other stories, and Twilight is one of those books where a girl had a crush on a male character (like Draco) and made an OC self-insert to vicariously date him. And the girl hated Jessica and Lauren in the original book so she made her fan fiction validate her opinion of them. Also, can’t wait to see Bella meet Rosalie and be like, #notallCullens lol. Her being like, maybe we should just kill the dudes. They suck. We can fix the girls…and maybe Emmett. 😂
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
lmaooo rosalie thing absolutely has to happen
@VioletNKisHere
10 ай бұрын
Jessica and Lauren were Bella or Edward’s love interests in the original, so they’re the bad guys, since Jessica likes Edward.
@literatejenna
9 ай бұрын
I mean, Twilight was a fanfiction of Buffy so...yeah.
33:04 I feel like Bella would mentally interject here that what stopped him was his own family, clearly not any concern about ending one or several human lives, or what it would do to his father’s boy toy.
@theDoomedstar
11 ай бұрын
The sound of your keyboard makes me so happy
@barrowc
11 ай бұрын
Excellent video, Hannah! I have no idea what mood that Edward vs. trees was originally meant to convey but your edits improved it immensely
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
Thank you!!
@slimypaws
11 ай бұрын
45:17 Honestly, that'd be the perfect set-up for Bella to just slowly touch him, ease him in, butter him up, only to finally stab him and get it done with, lol. He's already presenting himself, Bella, girl! You surely have your knife somewhere. Get him. And stop his pretentious monologue. 😂
@CosasdeAndrea
11 ай бұрын
rip to the mask of ancient sadness, you were too great for this world
@samkathryn4825
11 ай бұрын
7:59 He is throwing such a tantrum. This relic has toddler energy.
@amitain4254
11 ай бұрын
But the way I cackle at all the comments. This series is *chef's kiss*.
@micahklassen7151
11 ай бұрын
the break and reassurance that saya was still there was very much needed at that point in the video
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
she pooped in the hallway this morning. don't idolize her, she's just like the rest of us
@micahklassen7151
11 ай бұрын
@@HannahLeeKidder i havent pooped in any hallways today so as far as I’m concerned she is an ideal to strive for
@dameanvil
6 ай бұрын
00:00 📖 The video is a Twilight rewrite focusing on Chapter 14, with commentary on the original text and proposed edits. 01:19 🎭 Commentary on character dynamics and potential revisions to convey emotions effectively. 02:33 🖋 A successful rewrite passage maintaining the original tone of the author. 05:15 🤔 Discussion on fear and danger between characters, with edits to enhance clarity. 07:57 📚 Critique of a scene's adaptation from book to film and the portrayal of characters' abilities. 10:48 💬 Dialogue exchange showcasing character dynamics and emotional depth. 12:09 🍦 Analogy explaining the uniqueness of characters' scents and their impact on vampires. 13:32 🍸 Comparison between human weaknesses and vampires' struggles with temptation. 16:38 😨 Intense recollection of a moment of temptation and the struggle to resist. 19:06 🤔 Commentary on character reactions and inconsistencies in the narrative. 20:01 🥔 Edward's behavior mirrored by a character eating a raw potato. 20:55 🦁 Edward's dramatic declaration about being a predator becomes comically goofy. 21:51 🎭 Bella feels like an awkward spectator in her interaction with Edward. 22:44 💔 Edward's attempt at seduction comes off as unintentionally comical and confusing. 23:37 💡 Edward's mood swings and awkward dialogue make the scene unintentionally funny. 25:30 🚶♂ Edward struggles with his conflicting desires but is essentially selfish in his actions. 27:08 🍦 Edward compares Bella's scent to heroin, emphasizing his struggle with temptation. 30:25 💔 Edward's dark past and struggle with temptation are revealed, adding complexity to his character. 31:20 🤔 Bella grapples with the revelation of Edward's past and his potential danger. 33:09 🔪 Edward's confession about his desire to protect Bella adds depth to his character. 35:16 💬 Edward struggles with understanding Bella's thoughts and intentions, leading to frustration. 37:26 📝 Bella's internal conflict reflects an alternate universe where Twilight is a better book. 38:45 😰 Bella experiences dread upon realizing the intensity of Edward's feelings for her. 40:05 🤦♀ Bella feels foolish for her confession, while Edward prepares to say a significant line. 41:30 🤔 Bella questions her past actions, seeking clarity in her relationship with Edward. 41:56 😳 Edward exhibits seductive behavior, asserting Bella would have followed him if he desired, emphasizing his irresistible allure. 42:24 🤔 Bella attempts to lighten the tension after Edward's unexpected closeness, but his touch and proximity affect her deeply. 42:48 💕 Edward's chilling touch on Bella's warm skin creates conflicting sensations, intensifying their interaction. 43:16 🥶 With deliberate slowness, Edward explores Bella's neck and shoulders, inducing shivers and breathlessness. 43:44 🔥 Edward's intimate actions, like resting his face on Bella's chest, create a scandalous yet tender moment between them. 44:09 😱 Bella and Edward share a prolonged, almost trance-like embrace, highlighting the intensity of their connection. 44:34 🤗 Despite the risk, Bella feels calm and unafraid in Edward's touch, reveling in the momentary peace between them. 45:00 🥰 Edward reassures Bella after their intimate moment, expressing satisfaction with their closeness. 45:29 🪨 Bella delicately touches Edward's face, marveling at his stillness and comparing him to stone.
@VioletNKisHere
11 ай бұрын
Can Bella and Lauren kill Edward together? And Jasmine could be there too. And Lauren could have a crossbow or other long-ranged weapon to contrast with Bella’s knife.
@hyleore
8 ай бұрын
I love the fact that zero change is needed to make that chapter terrifying. It's all there.
@firedforfighting
11 ай бұрын
Is this your only channel? Gosh i love your everything
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
I stream on twitch and post extra videos on Patreon! If that helps! Thanks so much 💜
@firedforfighting
11 ай бұрын
Will look out for you on twitch!
@chilledkarl
11 ай бұрын
I'm sat. Mother Hannah always knows what we want.
@KandiWethers
11 ай бұрын
Not soaking 😂😂😂
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
tell me i'm wrong
@WHATRadioNickSembrat
10 ай бұрын
"There's something so cold about a semi-colon". Got it, so that's what Edward is. Man the scene of him just popping around the forest doing random stuff is so bizarre. It seems like it must be parody or something.
@WHATRadioNickSembrat
9 ай бұрын
*TAKING THAT OUT* Maybe I am really close. Now I'm 200 yards away. Now I'm throwing my couch off my roof. What are you gonna do? sToP mE?
@melodybales2038
13 күн бұрын
Wow I had forgotten how intensely not great the reading is if you aren't reading it at like a page a minute like I did when I was 12
@Gees.Journals
10 ай бұрын
Wait. We're just over looking the "idk I'm on Prozac???" 🤣💀
@HannahLeeKidder
10 ай бұрын
thanks for being here 🙏
@albertlopez2237
8 ай бұрын
Just wondering if you have a vdieo tip or tips on how to write characters who do not speek correctly so publishers get its not lazy writing its part of the characters makeup. Pefect example Burt Ward better known as Paulie in the Rocky series does not phrases his staements correctly. So Stallone ended up rewriting his lines the way he talks.
@dmartin00
11 ай бұрын
this video sounds really good. did you get a new mic?
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
what's so funny is that I went back to my old mic lmao. sometimes, things that are expensive...........are worse.
@kaitlingerber1261
11 ай бұрын
We're back!!
@luckyday1407
11 ай бұрын
That was fantastic.
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
thank you friend 🙏
@graynight3478
Ай бұрын
Can you do more?? This is really good!
@franzim6668
8 ай бұрын
Dear god, this was agonizing. Please do it again.
@NonPlayerCharacter44
5 ай бұрын
I LOVE the new movie clips
@shebreathesingold8043
11 ай бұрын
Are you still doing your own original writing? I used to follow you years back and remember you were writing a novel for Nano. Is that published anywhere?
@Karma-back08
8 ай бұрын
God, you are beautiful ❤
@micahklassen7151
11 ай бұрын
Can i nap with Saya
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
if you're quick
@EastBayG209
9 ай бұрын
Where did you go?!
@HannahLeeKidder
9 ай бұрын
I'm here!!!
@firedforfighting
9 ай бұрын
Have a Happy New Year Hannah, to you and your family..we won 2023 woohoo!! lets go 2024...cant wait to feast my eyes and ears next vid!!
@LuckyGoulash
11 ай бұрын
3/10 needs more Charlie
@HannahLeeKidder
11 ай бұрын
I'm hearing ya
@abime_quillan
9 ай бұрын
This is such a hilarious reading/narration
@Follyfullidiot
11 ай бұрын
Does anyone ever here you make a joke and go “haha you’re such a kidder”?
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